Applejack made a mistake a few months ago and has been carrying it around with her ever since. Literally.
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Ah, I see Granny is continuing the proud grandmother condition of embarrassing the grandkids. So, that's Flim and Flam's sister? Does Trixie always have erotic dreams? What's up with Trixie and her dad? Wait, Trixie had sex with Maud Pie? First comment!
Man, what a great chapter. I love the deeper insight we get into Trixie: she's become my favorite character in this fic, because of the fascinating contrast between her being such a good marefriend and such a terrible pony. That photo album started adorable and ended heartbreakingly.
I like Contrarian, her name also reminds me of little Loophole, and I have to wonder just how big a blindspot ponies have in regards to naming their kids. Someday Loopy will grow up to be a shady but successful lawyer, because what else can you do with "Loophole," and Applejack will be so surprised!
One other thing, at this point, we've seen AJ, Big Mac, both Flim Flam brothers, Trixie, and even Twilight are all implied to have had traumatic experiences in their childhood. Most of these traumas have been hinted at but not yet really explored. They all seem intriguing in different ways, but I wonder if, at this point in the story, the seeds have been planted and we shall get to see what blossoms from them? (I.e., now in addition to finding out what happened between Big Mac and Cheerilee, and caused Twilight to become super cynical towards stallions, I now wait in rapt anticipation to find out how Trixie's father turned her into a racist).
No, it's seven.
Oh-ho-ho. I so want to give this bitch a knife-hand to the throat. Great job making a character I hate so much. And that sex scene was hot!
Mauxie OTP...
Woah.
You know, while I still don't like Trixie, I love what you did with her in this story. Even if it makes me hate her as a character even more Somehow I can't bring myself to feel sorry for her, maybe because I'm too busy feeling sorry for AJ...
I'm curious how Flam and Flim are gonna react when they'll find out that Applejack already met their sister Also, I'm almost sure that at some point Flim will break Applejack's heart. And I can't wait for it almost as much as I fear that day. My poor little thing doesn't deserve it all. I must be some kind of masochist, cause I love to see my favorite characters suffering.
I'm so glad that you left so many started threads in this story, it makes reading much more interesting.
Holy fuck.
That Connie bitch had me goin'! The stakes definitely feel higher now. Really enjoying your unique clop scenes, Susie! Milk drinking and now horn-play. Very good, my friend!
Actually had to stop reading there a moment to stop laughing. Excellent character work and color. A dab of sympathy for Trixie to go with some darker undertones, and an unexpected revelation about her lineage, (half mud-foot) I'm sure she heard that growing up at some point. Connie, ooohhh, what a piece of work she is ... (oddly why do I hear the name Lizzy Borden every time she's mentioned?) Looking forward to more character development moving forward, and I get the impression that LB may not know her brother as well as she thinks any more.
I'd still love to see some CMC in this just for a momentary different take on things, AB has been absent for the family dynamic for a while, and where you find one the others are likely not far behind.
And as to Maud, she wasn't doing it for herself, she did it for Boulder.
5246874 Actually I'm surprised that given the occasionally prehensile nature of their tails, Trixie wouldn't have had that wrapped around one too, to 'make the eight'.
maybe i should leave while is good...... if this get any more fucked up I'm out
Wow!
For me, this story is no longer a 'clop-with-a-plot' guilty pleasure.
This is an amazing story!
I am at a loss for words.
I now ship Contrarian & Big Mac.
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That depends... some things are better left hinted at than explored. I'll have to see how the story goes.
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Trixie can't math
(Actually, that was my bad---I meant one in each FOREhoof, like in human porn. Then again, there's been evidence that Trixie is left-hooved, which would make her more likely to have problems with math... like me.)
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You and me both!
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Bingo! Also, this song may have had something to do with it.
Maybe...
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Oh, it will, my child. Trust me, it will.
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5248740 okaayyy then ( starts to back away from the screen) this will be going to my fucked up folder
Ah-ha! I knew I detected Maud!
Maud took the lead on the flirting and the sexing, trixie was blown away with the experience and says bad thing about it to keep her illusion of control and superiority.
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That was my take on it, too.
i say go into detail about the farmers daughter >:3
but wow what a bitch!
i want to slap her and im against violence against women but idk i just want to smack her upside the head XD
I love this chapter it was funny and sweet but there sister is a bitch.I can't wait to see what happens next between them all next and what happens next to them all.
Yep this is the same thing with me, Born on April 20 just a few seconds from midnight.