Applejack made a mistake a few months ago and has been carrying it around with her ever since. Literally.
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So much drama! I need more!
Fantastic tale by the way, can't wait for the next chapter!
I have no words...
Your dialog is amazing.
You write emotion so well.
I'm green with envy...and you are awesome!
5787428 wasn't Flam the one who blamed himself for their mother's death? The bombshell is related to something he had hanging over him his whole life.
As a bisexual, this chapter made me cry cathartic tears. the dialogue here was so well done and passionat. The confrontation I'd been waiting for for several chapters was perfectly built up and came to a beautiful crescendo. Well worth the wait. Bravo
Quite a moving chapter, with a confrontation a long time coming. We got some great background on why AJ hates bisexuals in the first place, teenage drama can leave us with a lot if irrational jealousy later in life. I loved Flim pointing out how Applejack's prejudice is similar to Trixie. I also love Flam pointing out that kidnapping is not in fact legal.
Soooo... Connie has a Cesarean scar? Like she had to give birth to twins or something?
damn that sucks
another great chapter but WOW drama
cant wait to see if they stick together or not. personally i hope they do i dident know id actually like this paring XD
That was amazing. Very powerfull interaction between AJ and Flim, even more if you keep picturing a bleeding stallion and a mare in the end of pregnancy, Very, very well done. If you dig through the insults, prejudice, unwanted emotional baggage, there is something I really wanted to see in this tale. Flim and Applejack almost... almost said that short "L" word to each other. An "aaaawww" moment hide somewhere in there.
And no, not "leech"! sheesh!
Side joke: I know AJ alread decided it, but how about a contest between the readers to name the baby?
This was a very good confrontation.
But seriously, fuck AJ right now. Which is a good thing to feel because it means you have not wavered in her characterization, even when Flim deserves this chance. Kudos.
That argument was so well balanced. I've read arguments in stories that are so one sided... this is just good, I don't know how to explain it.
I loved this it was so sad . I hope someone can get AJ to undersand and that they can make up before its to late.I can't wait to see what happens to and between them next.
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Oh, duuuuh, now I see what you meant. Yeah, that was one of the reasons Flim's not ready to tell him.
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Hopefully, there will be more funny soon. It might not be a funny "ha ha"---more like a funny "uh oh".
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Oh, thank you so much! Sorry to make you cry!
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I've always been of crackship m'self :)
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That's a great idea! I doubt she'll want to keep Flim's mother's name after this (but maybe as a nickname or middle name?)
Oh, and just a little correction... she's not at the end of pregnancy yet. She's more in the middle.
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What do you mean? Has there been a "fuck AJ" vibe for awhile? And which chance (of Flim's) do you mean? Sorry, I'm kind of thick-headed today and I can't brain or words good.
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GOOD! >:D
5789823 Sorry, I go a bit vague sometimes. I was complaining about how stubborn AJ was and saying that Flim deserves a chance to be loved, rather than be seen as some promiscuous stallion because he walks both sides of the street. Additionally, I was complimenting your work thus far.
I think it's sad some people see bisexuals as whores, really. My girlfriend finds both genders attractive, but she is the farthest thing from a whore you can get.
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Oh, I gotcha now! Thank you! Yeah, this chapter was tricky to write because I had to dredge up a lot of crap Good on you for sticking up for your gf!
*Surveys smoldering emotional bomb crater*
Eeyup, you weren't kidding there was a lot of emotional explosive in that one.
Weeelll doggies, that was some right well done fireworks show 'o' feels. Again congratulatory applause for the most wonderful dialogue, and scene, and all that good stuff you keep putting out for us readers. I kind of figured this was the direction it was going, and the two principals have been pushed to the limit, and now the realization can begin to sink in.
Two quarts of Caramel-Oat swirl from Buckin Robins coming up.
Okay, here we go...
As I said in my message, this chapter was a real emotional rollercoaster and hit close to home in many ways. First of all, I wanted to congratulate you, Susie. It's extremely hard to write a really convincing argument. Especially one that doesn't make you hate at least one of the characters involved. You managed to capture the atmosphere of their argument perfectly. Their emotions and feelings are very real, and it is easy to empathize with their situation. I couldn't get rid of that unpleasant feeling long after reading this.
Ouch >.O'' Of course, she doesn't know what caused Flim to leave his room, but she has a point.
Uh-oh. I can't help but wonder if it's a foreshadowing... Sounds like a start of depression.
Also, I've noticed that Applejack seems to have some serious body image problem. It became evident a few chapters ago and I have the impression that it's getting worse with every chapter. And pregnancy isn't helping. I look forward to seeing how she's gonna deal with it!
D'awwww. The image of worried Spike gently touching her like that is really cute Someone should draw it! Where's my tablet?!
Oh, and I feel sorry for Flam, even though I don't care much about him. But he doesn't deserve it. And it seems that the worst is yet to come.
By the way, I wonder what would happen if Applejack was forced to go on another mission to save Equestria with her friends...
Considering how often Mane 6 are called upon by Celestia it's hard to believe that Applejack could just leave her duties as Equestria's hero for such a long time.
This quotation mark is facing the wrong direction. Actually there are a few more dotted throughout the chapter, this is just the first I spotted.