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Awesome as always. There are two errors in the very last sentence, though. Just pointing that out.
So everyone around them changed as well. That makes for a really crazy world.
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NEARLY everyone else. Lero, Lyra, Spike, and Twilight still remember the truth. A very small handful of others do, as well. They'll be revealed in due time.
Oh, you would put a cliffhanger on this one, you brilliant cheeky bastard!
The opening dream sequence was absolutely painful and really drove in the emotional conflict. I'm very curious to see how this pans out.
Eagerly awaiting more!
Oh boy, I'm giddy with excitement.
This was intensely disturbing... Oh... OH!!
Luna and Celestia sometimes talk like they personally KNEW Starswirl. What if the first and last time he cast that spell was the birth of Nightmare Moon?...
Good stuff looking forward to more
That line about having to choose between the heart or the mind. That was pretty deep to be honest. I'll admit I wasn't a huge fan of this story to begin with but it has really grown on me and I honestly don't think it could have been done better. Great job!
I think Scootaloo remembers.
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You do?
I'm not going to say you're wrong or you're right, Banchoking, but... what specifically makes you say that?
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Well, when asked if she wanted anything she not only didn't say anything, but shook her head "rapidly" which seems like a bit of an over reaction. I think she's a little creeped out by Fluttershy replacing Pinkie a bit more than the others.
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Ah, I see, because of her close connection to RD.
It all makes sense!
I admit, it's kind of frustrating to watch this when I know the solution. It's great drama, but part of me wants to shout at the screen, "Memory spell! Use the freaking memory spell!"
Oh well. The resolution will come in time. Hopefully before Lero's sanity snaps like... A STICK!
Eh? Eh?
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I admit, it's kind of frustrating to watch this when I know the solution. It's great drama, but part of me wants to shout at the screen, "Memory spell! Use the freaking memory spell!"
--- Well, in all fairness, consider the original Magical Mystery Cure episode. Spike DOES suggest the memory spell, but Twilight shoots it down. Nor will that one cutie-mark-removing plant that Zecora gave Apple Bloom in Cutie Pox work, either.
Oh well. The resolution will come in time. Hopefully before Lero's sanity snaps like... A STICK!
Eh? Eh?
Ha ha ha ha ha ha! I shouldn't be laughing as hard as I am!
But yeah, Lero ain't out of the woods yet.
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Yeah, a memory spell won't work, because their memories aren't *gone*, they're just... In the wrong place. And the cutie pox cure won't work because it's not an issue of artificially created cutie marks, rather translocated ones.
When Lero first got in that wheelchair, I half expected him to roll as hard as he could through the nearest window.
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At that point in the story, especially, Lero's QUITE had his fill of taking falls from long heights. And he's not a fan of jumping through glass.
Plus, he simply doesn't hate Rarity like that. Didn't hate the 'Old Rarity,' doesn't hate the 'New Rarity.'
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Maybe he thinks the fall would wake him up? XD
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Ah.... THERE we go!
I do so LOVE the way all my readers think!
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Just keep writing stuff for us to think about!
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Don't you worry! I'm working on Chapter Eight. It shouldn't be too long; just a COUPLE days, at most. In the meantime, as far as "writing stuff or you to think about..." I'll tell you what. I'd like to pose some questions for you, and all my other readers as well, just for fun! Write me your responses, and I'll see what I have to say about them! Here goes!
1) What about the story are you most curious or intrigued by? What are the most "burning questions" you have about it? Why?
2) Imagine Divided Rainbow were your own story which you were writing. What sort of direction would you take it? What would you have happen? (I do have a very solid outline in mind for what's actually going to happen, I'm just curious to see what others would do.)
3) Who's your favorite Swapped Pony and why?
4) Predictions? Comments? Advice? Observations?
I want to like this but I just can't.
The Lero-dream was way too specific with the ponies - almost like it was literally a premonition/some higher power intervening in the situation. If that was the actual intent, then I missed it. As it stands, I read it like a way-to-specific dream. Rarity inside the dream, though? Out of this world OOC. I doubt a refined lady such as Rarity would use the word 'ain't' even should she be 'out of her mind.' Again, this is a dream and all so there is that - this may be Lero's interpretation of Rarity or somesuch. Would Rainbow really use the word 'highfalutin?'
Lero's voice here is vastly different than Xenophilia. I keep ragging on canon-Lero because he is a wet nap but this Lero is almost too drastic a change. I can't see them as the same character (though to be honest, that may be because canon-Lero has no character). This Lero has to be told not to be confrontational (implying that he would be easily confrontational if he was allowed to speak) whereas it took almost a near-death experience to make Lero anything other than a push over in the original.
And it get's really bad next chapter ... so, yeah. Love the idea and good luck.
I've got to say, this may be the best Leroverse fic I've read, and then some. Well done, s-
. . . Why?
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. . . Why did you have to point that out?
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. . . Could have stood to go the rest of my life without having that specifically pointed out to my poor, quasiinnocent mind.
. . .
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Ruined forever *sob*
So many puns! Too much! It's too much! Oh God, my ears! You are a CLEVER BASTARD you!
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Damn it, you just had to point that out
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Oh sweet Celestia.
I will never hear Rainbow say "20% cooler" the same way, ever again.
That fly and spider shtick, isn't that the Marx brothers?