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What a strange turn of events. Guess Honeydew has fallen over the edge so hard she almost rebounded.
Interesting, hmmm. Good chapter.
Ooh, an enthralling, addictive what-if story, well-written and perfectly-paced? The character-interaction! The drama! The development! I've always wondered how MMC went down, this is going to be amazing!
Or anti-human cults and madmares trying to kill/harm the protagonist for teh evulz. That's good too. Let's hope this sparks an epiphany or develops characters/relationships somehow, otherwise this will all be...
...Entirely pointless.
Great, what's this? The pony version of the Ku Klux Klan?
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Trust me, there's a reason for this arc.
4544547 Then here's to hoping it's a good one.
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I, of course, can't guarantee it will be to your taste, but as it's critical for the last section of the story, I would think so.
Nice to get a bit of Gilda. and I like Honeydew as the villain, she seemed more like the suspicious neighbor than super villain. Still I am really looking forward to seeing where this goes. Maybe we will hear a definitive reason of why she hates Lero. In the original works it was hinted that she strongly disapproved of cross species relations due to a personal event in her family.
Bravo with the 'balanced' vs. Synthesized explanation. Im really glad it was addressed. Yay Honeydew!!! I'm glad shes back here. Ohhh she wants his D sooooo bad!
Why am I getting the vibe that there gonna make King Kong the porno. Director: "Buck her or we hurt your wife!" Rarity: "No Lero, dont touch that slut!" Honeydew: "Shut up BITCH! come on Monkey you know you want to... You've been using your freaky mind powers on me so I KNOW you want to. Show the world what kind of beast you really ARE! ha.aha..haha.hahahahahah!!!"
Yaay, its Gilda. Wonder if she is just goign to have this bit part, or end up finding out if crossing human and gryphon makes Sphinx?
I wonder why I keep thinking Honeydew reminds me of a porn star?
Oh wow, its the pony version of Mr Tulip. Except without the redeeming qualities?
I forgot, did Twilight get round to dumping a whole load of tracking health etc spells on Lero since last time?
Oh great angst and a cliff hanger
Jesus, didn't know she had it in her
I just thought she'd actually loose her mind and/or die from an aneurism
I don't feel like this adds much, but we'll see
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"Die from an aneurysm?"
Nuh-uh. She's just not nice enough to do Lero the courtesy of going down THAT easily.
Not by a long shot, no sir.
Indeed, you will.
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HONEYDEW reminds you of a...? Just what kind of porn do you WATCH, buddy?
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Are you kidding, I dont watch it, I cant afford that pay level of premium access. I just have to go off screen caps and Gif clips on click farms. Which are so bad I gave up years ago cos fanfics are so much higher quality. Even the junk stuff.
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Since Twilight has to undo the Swap, I've been expecting something to put Lero out of commission to force her to act instead of leaning too much on Lero's "balance." This might fit the bill.
do i sense BDSM gangbang rape? because if i do i, think we all agree that next chapter will be truly awesome!
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Dude, seriously?
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and then it was a trap.
but wait...how did that Pegasus know what a gun was?
also, I would have know something was up when the voice answered "the west".
The western states are bigger, so people from the west always say which state their from.
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Well, she never explicitly said the word 'gun,' did she?
Could've just as easily been some enchanted fireball-shooting jewelry or a fancy crossbow or a science fiction plasma blaster, (at least as far as the pegasus was concerned) but she was happy to let Lero's imagination fill in the blank.
Smart of you, buddy!
Wowowowowowwooooow wait a cupcake is this what happens after the story xenophilia ? Might have miss spelled that.
The use of caps for emphasis is a bit heavy-handed here.
Aw c'mon! A fakeout!?
What a wasted opportunity! A second human thrown headfirst into the Xenoverse who is not only female, but is also scared shitless of her new surroundings? Pff, sold!
(Seriously though, who wouldn't write this? I don't know about you guys, but Xenophobia has a nice ring to it.)
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Ha ha ha… want to know something? I happened to be scrolling down slowly to read your message… and at first, I thought I was receiving some sort of eerily cryptic nonsense from Slenderman or something…
You know how Slenderman is.
Anyway, I'm curious, now: in your personal opinion, how many words-per-chapter should a guy like me restrict himself to, when he's tempted to utilize ALL CAPS for the sake of EMPHASIS?
…I don't promise I'll comply, necessarily, but I still would respectfully like to hear your feedback and recommendations on this grammatical matter.
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Yes, the events of this story take place after Xenophilia! It's sequel-riffic!!!
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Might I recommend giving Ecnalab's Chimera a look, then?
I'm not the person to ask, in regards to whether the heroine of that story's going to be 'scared shitless' of the Xenoverse, (poor woman's still too comatose to know where she is, you see) but it's still an excellent read so far, and it seems like it'd be right up your alley!
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No limit, just don't use caps in places where it will break the flow unless you want to break the flow at that place. I know it's hard, but have a little faith that your readers are capable of filling in some of the inflection.
You'll notice that I didn't include examples like when you wrote “Atten-SHUN!” or "HALT!" because caps actually work well in those cases.
4544447 Maybe the Hu Hoax Hand?
4553821 I was suspecting that it wasn't real the moment the pegasus mentioned that the human had a projectile weapon, looked like she fell out of a war, and had two broken legs, and the mare had saught me out instead of freaking the fuck out like every other pony would at the sight of blood and the fact that something is shooting at them. That's like saying "Hey, Doctor! I just saw a Saurian over in the decrepit building over there; he was shooting death rays at me and stuff, but I'm pretty chill, so it's all good."
Then again, I just might be the tiniest bit more genre savvy than Lero in that particular thing (either that, or he just was really starving for human companionship).
If I'd gotten to the house, however, and had said most of the same things as Lero did (Hey, this is Mac! I'm from the US! How about you?) I would've been suspicious the moment she said "So am I!" A soldier would have responded with a demanding question (or even their rank, name, serial number, etc) and asked me where I was from, as well as other things before allowing me to approach. A civilian would have either broken down in relief, saying "Thank god almighty, I'm from Texas/New York/etc, where are we? I don't know what's going on! etc" or freaked out further, wondering if I was from the government or a terrorist cell, or something.
In any event, the girl is answering way too coherently and too openly for it to be anything but a trap. If I'd gotten up the stairs and was talking with them, I'd have relaxed my voice a little, made myself sound all relieved-like, and say "Okay, that's good, I'm glad to hear it. I don't have any medical supplies, but if you tell me what's wrong, I can go find you some."
At that point, they're in a catch-22. Either I've taken the bait but am more rational than they expected, or I'm not falling for it, and therefore even more rational than they expected, as well as smarter. Either way, either they give me some information and let me wander off to get supplies, the pegasus tells me to wait there as she gets the supplies with Rarity, or the trap is sprung early, right then and there. If the unicorn doesn't know where I am, I can easily get within reach and stop any spells, at the same time yelling "IT'S A TRAP!" to Rarity, who would hopefully be able to protect herself from the pegasus. If not, then I'd subdue the unicorn, and make my way back downstairs, and either help Rarity if she's still fighting, or try and help her after she's KO'd. Either the pegasus flees, fights me, or gets back-up. If it's the last one, then sorry Rarity, I'd leave you there and go find Twilight, Rainbow Dash, and Lyra and mount a rescue mission to get you back. It's not abandoning you if you're just gathering the cavalry, after all.
And then Rainbow Dash became a Pokémon Master. Somehow. Probably Discord's fault.
I honestly wasn't sure whether pony shopping carts are pushed or pulled.
Gilda as a closet sci-fi nerd is the most fantastic thing I never knew I wanted. Kudos for that. I also like the bit about the differing endurance of griffons and pegasi, but I'm a sucker for fantasy biology.
I do hope Gilda remembers meeting Lero after this all gets resolved. I think he'd be good for her.
Wait, I thought the April Fools event made it clear that Xenophilia: Advanced takes place in a different continuity... unless the event itself wasn't canon.
And suddenly, the ask box was canon! I guess Honeydew went so insane that she became fourth-wall aware, Joker style.
Or not. I'll just have to wait and see.
In any case, fantastic chapter. Looking forward to more, especially since someone's going to pull a Big Damn Heroes moment. I'm just not sure if it's going to be Twilight, Lyra, Dash, Discord, or some combination thereof and then some.
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Ha ha! Oh my, I wonder if I've unintentionally started something with Gilda.
Me too. Fantasy biology a cool thing to play around with, especially because they're sapient.
'Good for her' as a life coach or something? Or do you mean something else...?
Ever since I brought SpinelStride onto my team, Xenophilia: Advanced has quietly become canon for Divided Rainbow. Which I find quite thoroughly awesome.
But it's not like I'm suddenly pulling Gus completely out of my armpit, either. Consider this passage, from Chapter 23: Cards On The Table.
Gus Wainwright's Swap IS canon. But you must understand: Gus' Swap is not the same beast as Starswirl's unfinished spell.
Gus' Swap was entirely Discord's doing. The draconequus deliberately conjured it himself, and was COMPLETELY in control of it at all times. And he did it mostly for the sake of knocking XFT-Lero's vanity down a peg, after hearing the guy say this:
It's my personal belief that as soon as XFT-Lero was transported away to the next leg of his journey, Discord deactivated his Swap, and purged the incident completely from everyone's memories, so that no one had any idea it ever happened, except maybe Gus, who thought it was just a dream.
Stay tuned to find out!
His eyes widened. “Twilight! Rarity! Quick! Off the floor, right now! You need to jump in the shower, wash yourselves off, then get your tails back down here, pronto! There’s not a moment to spare!”
Twilight raised her head. “What’s the matter?!"
"What’s the emergency?!” Both unicorns shared an alarmed look. “It’s not changelings again, is it?!”
“Worse,” Lero said, flatly. “Twilight, it’s your mother. Star Sparkle is coming over for dinner, she wants a place to spend the night, and we have only an hour to get ready!” best part ever !!!!
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For my take on it, Discord snuck into the dreamscape and made a little dreamverse of his own to make his 'Swap' in. The entirety of chapter 7.5: It Was All A Dream. A dream within a dream, in fact... *spinning top*
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I think I've mentioned this, but my suggestion is to use italics for emphasis , and ALL CAPS MEANS SOMEONE IS LITERALLY YELLING.
Well, firstly, I'd like to say that I really liked Gilda in this chapter
And as my second note...
...WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK?!!?
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Why... a plot twist nobody saw coming, my friend: THAT'S what!
Strap in and stay tuned!
P.S. - I'm glad you enjoyed Gilda.
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Thanks! Starswirl was the type of guy that even his failures were spectacular and world-altering, (e.g.: The Swap) and all of us who collaborated on those chapters really worked to bring out what made him great, especially Rikmach.
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I'll see what I can do, as far as Lyra and Lero having private moments go.
4578913 My name is Max Power, you just strap yourself in and feel the G's
Wat.
Seriously it would be hillarious if hammered sensless Gilda attempted to rescue Rares and Lero and actually succeded (I think she followed them after they left the restaurant.)
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Well, Frederico didn't always drink beer, but when he did…
... *head-tilt* ... And now I remember why I stopped reading this story, even though I never faved either...
So how much longer is this fic gonna be? Seriously... You've managed to stretch out a 20 minute episode into over 400k words!
Don't get me wrong. I enjoy this story quite a bit, but it's getting a bit long and stretched out honestly. I mean really stretched out. I'll continue and read it but I have to wonder if you're going to finally have Twilight figure out a cure or just keep it going until you run out of ideas. Again don't get me wrong, really great story and I love the way you're expression the characters emotions but it's feeling a bit dragged on for the sake of dragging it on.
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It ends when it ends, my friends.
But as long as we're all on the subject of endings… it would mean a great deal to me if you'd stay tuned for the next upcoming chapter.
Yes.
A great deal.
The way in which Chapter Thirty-One ends… I would dearly love to know whether you end up finding that particular ending…
...memorable.
While humans can eat mice and rats, their meat contains an uncommon protein that acts as a relatively potent blood thinner on humans ( the effects of which persist in the meat after cooking).
(Rats contain more of it in their meat than mice, so mice are the safer of the two, though not by much.)
It actually doesn't take much (about 7 ounces -or about 200 grams- of rat meat for your average ~170 lb -80 kg- grown man) to cause you to start bleeding out your eyes (literally crying blood, as it leaks out the tear ducts), ears, nose, and later on your pours.
So yeah, humans at least have the "species-wide mild food allergy" excuse for not eating rats and mice.
A revolver is a type of pistol.
I believe you mean "A revolver or a magazine-fed semi auto?"
Honeydew kidnapped one of the only two friends that the most powerful Chaos god in known existence has.
And expects this to end well?
Hell, even if said kidnapped friend weren't a friend, after the swap everyone thinks that he's also the true love of the one pony who could ask a favor of him and NEVER get turned down (his closest friend ever to have lived, no less).
Celestia herself feels indebted to him, and would love to do something to lessen her guilt over the harm she'd caused him.
And to top it all off, he's also got half the elements of harmony wrapped around his... well, let's just say "little finger" to be polite.
If Nightmare Moon and Discord couldn't stop them, what makes these clowns think they'll get out of this alive?
*I can just imagine Discord getting to them first, dropping them off in a certain universe's version of Fluttershy's cabin, and bewitching that universe into thinking Honeydew is Lero... *
Nice Frank Sinatra reference.
I actually like the idea of the princesses' positions having started out reversed. It has a kind of symmetry to it that works well with the semi-mystical nature of the roles they hold - everything contains just a little bit of its own opposite. It's poetically appropriate, and you could go a lot of places with how the change to that symmetry has formed the world into what it is.
So... did the cunt sell him to a collector? Also, the cosplay is just super weird, leading me to believe the root of the cunt's irrational hatred is her inability to cope with sexual desires.