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Well, that's one member of the Elements of Harmony in harmony with herself. Four more to go.
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Wait a sec, can't they use the Elements of Harmony to break the spell? Like cutting the Gordian Knot, a brute force method. Don't tell me Starswirl's spell is stronger than the Elements of Harmony.
Quite good. I'm really liking this, and where it's going.
2799992 While I see the merit to this idea, it seems like it'd be too easy. Also, I doubt any of the other elements, swapped or not, are in the right mental capacity to perform the operation. Twilight would have to explain to them what she's doing, and that would cause them to start panicking, and freaking out. It's just like when Lero tried to explain to Dash that she wasn't supposed to be the animal caretaker.
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Good point. Their mental states will be more full of holes than the changeling invasion and not to mention the task of even getting them together in one specific place.
Certainly a commendable goal. I especially like when Lero made the spell itself understand how it had failed. Very impressive. It's not every day you get to verbally bitchslap a magical construct. And now Sweet Apple Acres hopefully won't be halfway to rock farm-level blight by the time "True, True Friend" rolls around.
So, with equilibrium reached between Laughter and Honesty, who's next? I have a guess, but I'm going to keep it to myself until the next chapter. Until then!
I'm impressed with Lero. He managed to fix a little Starswirls spell, in a way , but he managed to do it. After all this spell was pretty much doing really pretty shitty job with how marks were working.
2799992 Nah. Look, this is how I see elements work. All girls need to have clear goal in theyre minds. One objective to achieve to do anything with Elements. They believe that they are who they are meant to be, so they can pew-pew Elements no matter how often they want, this will do nothing.
A random exchange that popped into my head, imagining Lero asking to help out as a farmhand...
"Humans started farming more than ten thousand years ago. No magic, no weather schedules, no anything but plants and soil. When I left, we were feeding something like six billion of us. I'm not a farmer, I don't know the details, but I can help you if you let me."
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I would think that it is, but only within the limited scope of it's "programming," kinda like a PHP script that lets you gain root access to a password protected website.
So Lero almost un-swapped Pinkie, but it didn't work because only Twi can fix it? Good thing, too. Between Discord's little "patch", the fact that AJ and Flutters are nowhere near fixed, and RD and Rarity would hear about it, un-swapping one at a time would lead to a complete charlie foxtrot PDQ.
Alright when this all ends I really can't see how Rarity can walk away without have any romantic feelings for Lero. The guy is just too noble for her to turn down.
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I know what you mean when you say 'charlie foxtrot,' but I'm afraid PDQ is new to me. Mind telling me what it means?
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Pretty Damned Quick.
The more emphatic version is Right Fucking Now.
As long the treatment doesn't replace the cure
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That all depends on Twilight!
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That's such a sweet and perfectly 'Lero' thing to say! I could so see him saying that to Pinkie!
You know what, folks? I'm feeling generous enough to post in a spoiler. Or maybe it won't even BE a spoiler, (a lot of my readers are VERY clever, after all, good at extrapolation, so this information may come more as a non-surprise.)
Lero's NEXT order of business, as far as neutralizing the Swap Jinx goes, is getting all the rest of the Swapped to tell THEIR cutie mark origin stories, just as Pinkie did. So while today's chapter dealt with Pinkie Pie's cutie origin story, the next chapter will see Lero inquiring into all the rest's.
Hope you're looking forward to it!
WHAT!??!?!?!?! A Leroverse fic that I missed!? time to get to readin'.
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I'm excited to hear what you think of it!
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Well, he didn't quite do it the right way- He didn't make her realize it was her passion in life to use celebration to bring others joy- rather, he found a way to make her happy about the role she had now.
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She always did want a prince. Can't get more noble than Lero.
This chapter made me smile until it hurt!
Also, it reminded me of this scene.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QWms2Pd02MI
Oh my Luna! At the least I was worried about Applebloom and AJ having serious issues afterward, but this is sheer genius on helping keep Pinkie Pie from self-destructing. Not only preventing it, but even make her feel productive and loved.
This all has had two weeks too many beyond the original EP to get entrenched -like a badly scratched record getting the groove deeper with each pass of the needle, so Twi is going to need every bit of help she can get, unlike the relatively painless 48-hour-or less Magical Mystery Cure.
Hmm, will it a good thing or a bad thing when Momma Sparkle finally gets with the program?...
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Thank you! I'll have you know that this chapter was one of the ones I was most anxious to show all my readers: this moment of family unity and meaningful triumph.
Star Sparkle, you mean?
...You might be seeing her again, in the future.
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Yep, Star Sparkle (sarcastically called momma by me)
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I really wish I could tell you more about Star, (and I truly am sorry I can't, Boss) but suffice it to say that I'm being deliberately vague for a REASON.
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Its cool!
I don't think I can even say how heartfelt this chapter was. While not a perfect ending it is definitely a happy ending all thing considered. Looking forward to the solutions for the other four. I hope there will be a chapter about the after effects when everypony is back to normal.
Lero should probably mention the cutie mark to Twilight if he hasn't already. An observation like seeing a cutie mark almost change when reminding Pinkie of her former self like that is bound to be a huge help to her cure.
Goddamn
That was such a great read, mate
See, AJ's my fave pony and just seeing her personality uplifted (even if it's Pinkamena) is just the greatest thing ever for me, I can't believe you've taken the cloppiest of stories on the internet and transformed it into a more in depth arc string of glory, only genuine master craftsmen can write something like this
Man, I gotta tell you this is one of the best fic I have ever read. I can't wait for more!
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It's not.
It's well written. Nice to see something without an eldritch abomination eating up half the grammar. But it just doesn't... grab me.
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What do you like about the Xenophilia-verse. It has every trope you seem to hate about FiM fanfiction and Lero is also a completely bland character and love interest who only exists as some kind of fulcrum for the story. I have never seen such an utterly bland love interest.
When will next update be I can't wait to keep reading
Where is my MOAR?
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Ha ha ha! I'm very, very grateful and happy you're excited to see more!
Alright, everyone, let me update you on our current status. First; Chapter 15 IS fully written, I promise. But it's in the hands of my editor. He's partway done with it... Hopefully, the rest will come soon! This chapter WILL be my longest yet!
Now, I don't know if anyone noticed but if you go into the forums, I HAVE updated the sneak peek excerpt of Chapter 15... added a lot more to it for you all to see! I strongly encourage you to take a look!
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/1699/xenophilia-hq/thread/29048/divided-rainbow-sneak-peek-of-chapter-15-updated
Have fun, and please don't forget to leave a comment!
When I imagined the beginning scene of this chapter, all I could imagine was the Pinkie Pie from Rainbow Dash Presents.
"RELEASE PINKIE!!! Yes."
this is really making me want to read a story about their alternate lives, like purely the other lives. just so many possibilities. well okay I guess not that many
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SO MANY happy, manly tears, bro.
That was beautiful, friend. Thank you very much for that chapter.
Hmm almost all the images have gone 404...
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Yeah, which sux.
Big Mac is god-king daddy.
Fancy rationalization, treating these cutie marks as an enemy to be outmaneuvered.