I'm pacifist and like to help others . I love to create unique story .
What if there were an enemy whose intellect is greater then strength? An enemy who waits within the shadow, like a snake, waiting for the right moment to strike. When no one expects the enemy within the shadow... Equestria has fallen. Venture with the enslaved Mane 6 as they discover that Friendship...cannot save everything.
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Shouldn't there be a Oc tag there since there was a orange Alicorn? Heck, since there are multiple Alicorns?
7285005 thank you to point that out , Battle154
7332493 Your welcome. I might enjoy this but let me give you a bit of advice. Even if the Kronos empire is strong with the technology they can't be strong all the time. They can still be beaten. Heck, I want to beat them myself and show them that even they can fall too. Which I mean for the Kronos empire. Man they make my blood boil.
7332524 True, the story is more explain during it progress . In a Code Geass style , if you seen that anime . they're not perfect , they're just ahead of their game . ;)
7332612 Code Geass? Oh ya, I remember that Anime. Still I want to kill every last of the Kronos empire.
Why did you combine chapters one and two?
7346737
because the ch.1 was thousand words short . ;)
Khronos is making me angry!
Khronos slaughtered everypony in Manehattan!!!
I'm going to tear him apart!!! 
7350155 I'm see you're in the zone . So, I guess you're enjoying the story . if so , I'm glad to make good story for many enjoy.
7350224 really?
7350383 I'm still working on the next chapter . so , um . Coming soon ?
7350446 Just as long I want to kill Khronos or see him dead, that's fine with me!!!
7349437 But isn't the prologue over a thousand words long?
7467518 it actually a pilot episode , since I didn't if it was going to be good the story , back then.