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Generous Rarity and Honest Applejack are both in a loving, but secret relationship for the past two years with the intent of keeping it a secret for as long as they see fit. Twilight Sparkle meanwhile is head over hoofs for one of the two, causing seeds of lust to be planted in her and once they sprout bad things will happen to good ponies both relevant and irrelevant.
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You need to fix a few grammatical errors with the (')'s and stuff, but a must track!
Great start! I see much potential in this, therefore I will track it
I will also be tracking. seems to have a lot of potential.
Although I am usually against the idea of Alicorns (other than the two princess) I think that there is potential in this so I will stick with it.
uh-oh... i see a lot of potential here
but i hope you don't deliver on applejack's and Rarities ideas of what their friends will think...
Immortal octavia.. i'm okay with this
Ocatvia is immortal
Your arguments are now invalid.
It's a rather nice story, I wish to see where this goes
Hrm. It's a good start. I will be tracking this
So you decided to make lyra straight....I can deal with it
Problem... Lyra is a filly-fooler... With Bon Bon...
43909 Thats up for her to decide.
everypony here read these fics seeking a story that really pass emotion, this one truly promises, jealousy is a truly strong emotion
i have high expectations in this romance
lrya...straight...i can deal with that...
or 
? so many choices! and such riches a plenty!
what i can't is how you constantly elude telling us who twilight has fallen for!
really liking this! keep it up!
I think it's Applejack Twilight is all in for.... Don't ask why, I just do.
44392 i bet that is Rarity
My votes for Rarity, just for the soul fact that the only interaction that's been mentioned between Twilight and the two, is that Twilight taught Rarity how to teleport... yep...
I can only assume that Twilight is gonna go off the deep end in the next chapter (Curse you dark tag! I see you, looming over the love and happiness!)
To the story:
. It does have potential, like all the others said, and I am intrigued as to how Twilight will take the bad news (Presumably not well... I sense depression and hermit mode coming on 
)
Pretty interesting story so far, unique little concept you've got going on here
Rainbow!!! What did you do to fluttershy?????????? Damit.
Yes! I so pegged it as Rarity
I can see the rage that Twilight holds within herself after she sees the two together, but not her rudeness before. Unless her lust for Rarity morphs into obsession and this obsession consumes every waking moment of her day (and possibly her dreams). So if that is the case then I can see the rage at the annoyances, but personally it still seems a little odd to me still. Eh, i'll get over it.
soooo.. those flames where real super saiyan like? or just
symbolized anger??
51393 No she got angry like "Feeling Pinkie Keen." Twilight in flame pony mode.
I'm very interested in how you will play out Mac's rivalry with Bon Bon... all's fair in love and war...
59431I have no idea. But Nightmare Moon and I give you our thanks.
Wait you can't make cupcakes without pinkamena!!!!!!
lol loved the music and the mood it set! this is geting good!
lol this is going to get dark isent it lol ..... i love the dark ^^
"Gold Sky the Alicorn who sees and loves Rarity as a Big Sister".. But he's 2 hundred years old!! how can he see
as a big sister???
60283 This has nothing to do with Cupcakes!!!
60890 It will be explained in "Octavia and the Alicorn's peace" Since it takes place before this Fan Fic. And I wrote that fan fic first before writing this one.
60928 kay
soooo... will Rarity tell Celestia? or Twillight really tough that Rarity would just forget that the next day and tell nopony?
71158 Twilight Sparkle plans everything past, present, and Future.
Why are you doing this to YAY?!? YAY doesn't deserve it!?
great chapter! keep it up!
damn nigga also it would be nice if u pair dash with fluttershy just saying
why is that book legal again?
71839 What book?
71827 Not in this story.
84258 lol
hey i get that she did't want to kill Twilight but when you think about it she did't really had to kiss her now did she
Okayyyy. Things a gettin' really creepy 'round here.
Quickly Delta! make her love you before its tooo late!
Night mare moon let the poor soul write chapter 8. please?
The whole 'Lyra being straight' thing is gonna be needed to get use to, but great story so far.
Wait...
Lyra
=
Lrya's straight?
Octavia's straight?
My world is now upside down and everything I knew just spontaneously combusted right before my eyes.
116418 Octavia is straight. That is clear and well mentioned in ch.4. But about Lyra or Heartstrings whatever you call her, I don't know if she will fall for Big Macintosh or Bon Bon. I'll let Nightmare Moon do that part for me.
117495 Who calls her 'Heartstrings'?
117540 The MLP FIM wikia page.
What happened to the stallion that Twilight kept poofing away? Just wonderin.
Oh and anyway we could fit the princesses into this story? Maybe get one on Rarity's side and one on Twilight's? Just a lil sumpin to think on.
Wow, things are really getting out of hoof. I mean rarity, really, you had no chance...
Epic!