Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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Imagine what a pair of tongues like that could do...
Great chapter! I gotta ask- and you don't have to answer if you don't want to, but are you going to explore any of the DLC areas?
4406619 huehue
Oh god, that sounds so wrong on so many levels.
Aw such adorable little brats. And a three way inside Sarah's head will be so amazing see.
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Sadly, unless Shadow somehow gets caught up, it'll have to be up to your imagination. I can't write good smut.
Awww, I wanted to read about Luna and Sarah slaughtering their way through the slavers. I love the kids' reaction to Luna, I can just see her being a big hit with the foals back in Equestria... especially the CMC. Bring on Vault 87!!!!
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4406684 Well, it would be awkward and clunky as it would be their first times doingg something like that.
Ooh, I was excited for this chapter. Little Lamplight is arguably one of the best locations in any Fallout game. You didn't waste any time getting there, which I think was smart. You also didn't waste any time with explaining Paradise Falls, which I'll admit was disappointing. You had a chance to branch out with Luna's character, and it would've been fun to read as well as thematically significant. It just seemed so out of place to just time skip a relatively important part of the Fallout 3 story. Also bobblehead. It's unfortunate, but I'm assuming it was in the interest of time. No harm no foul, at any rate. You characterized MacCready spot-fucking-on, and set the scene for what I always thought Little Lamplight would be outside the hardware's constraint. Brilliant writing. I loved the banter between Luna and the children. I hope you capitalize on that, since it puts Queen Luna in a whole new light. I caught lil' subliminal undertones of Luna absolutely thriving in the adoration of the Lamplighters. She's acting out her fantasies of being adored by ponies. I'm glad you included that, as well. All around, this was a superb chapter. Your only problem here was, again, not including the trip to Paradise Falls, but I can understand why you left it out. Nice work. All in all, this chapter gets a Mungo who reeks of Dungo/10.
4406645 I like to disagree with you.
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I did want to include Paradise Falls but it really dragged down the pacing too much for me to do.
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I understand that feeling. Hey, if you really want to include it, just add it as a bonus chapter once this hajj is complete.
Yah sex!
Cliffhanger you jerk!
But still I really enjoy this story, I hope Sarah, Nim and Luna get to go to Equestria together. That would be "So awesome!"
Anyway keep up the good work. Also thanks for making me want to play Fallout 3
Until next time
i always hated mccready..mostly cos hes a dick.but i respect what he does.
4406758 agreed, would be interesting to read, break the streak of non combat.
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Man, if you took either what Ed or I envision as proper justice against slavers separately, we'd make Hitler look like a saint. Like, no joke.
I'nt that right, Ed? 4406684
(Like, no joke, we've thought up some vicious shit, yo.)
I remember little Lamplight. I've never had such an urge to murder a child.
The moment he started talking I nearly lost my shit and was like,cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/32680714.jpg
Same thing with Princess.
Aaah Paradise Falls, found it (and Dogmeat) by accident while I was doing the mine disarmament quest for Moria. Not 5 seconds after I talked to the guy at the entrance I was shooting every slaver in sight.
so many naughty chapters never to see the light of a computer screen. so tragic please make new story maybe with all the naughty parts in it!
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You'd probably like him more if you used the child at heart perk to get into Little Lamplight.
For some reason we were thinking the children's amazement would have been followed by "story time with Queen Luna". Then they'd all get sent to bed early for their potty mouths.... ;p
Keep going! ;)
Threesome! *Fade to black*...what is this sorcery!
I really hated that place and everyone in it.
4407840 oh no, i still hated him. just..less.
Hey Luna, Want to go Visit Arizona? There is some slavers who you should meet/Bring about some karmic Justice.
4408465 unfortunately, being nice gets people hung on spikes.
I always hated little lamplight. Annoying kids that I'm not allowed to shoot makes me pretty pissed off!
4406841 yeah me myself would prefear to see the two worlds become connected. with the humans of fallout technology they would make an excellent army.
Alright, I caught up.
I still hope you go with my suggestion I made a long time ago about how, when Sarah is taken from the Enclave, that Nightmare Moon goes a bit bonkers. You'd probably have to put her in Luna's mind again somehow reasonably, but if you don't want to do that, that's your call. I still think branching their paths for a little bit would be kind of cool. Maybe Luna teams up with Fawkes.
Also, when you type up phrases like "Don't worry my love" it should be "Don't worry, my love." Just an FYI.
Fawkes is best companion\bodyguard , i just wanna see him makeing a good argument with luna , it will be hilarius
There are others guarding the gate with him?
Would you like another letter sir? The man across the river form you has a whole catalog to choose from if you wish.
(how about "a deep 'scowl' overtaking his face.". i believe that is the correct word for an angry or disgusted look)
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Thanks, and oddly enough, the game diolouge says 'we'll' I belive. Unless I copied it wrong which is of course very possible.
4411437 huh... well penny has a sawed off, but shes usually in the back, and i forgot who else has a weapon..... unless if all of them do... damn its been a while sense I've played fallout.
XD XD Hahahahaa XD this was great man, legit!
The cussing was awesome, my sides hurt this was too good a chapter.
And Luna kicked some slaver ass! I love it! :D
I bet you are X'D
KEEP IT UP MAN! xD
4407315 I LOVED HIM.
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Agreed. He's the cutest little asshole you'll ever meet.
That's a lot of fuck bags.
Mungo is not an insult. It means a cloth made from recycled woven or felt material. But the word works anyway.
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My god it's a bunch of call of duty children
Damn....was hoping one of them would find 'The Puppetman's ' Vault suit. Damn unique one too.
Oh, god, how is this going to affect McCready in the future? Is he even going to end up in the Commonwealth anymore?
Really?! You're gonna have her skip the fucking Speech Bobblehead? Such a shame...