Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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I had just finished last chapter before this one came up.
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Yes to both counts. Also, there's a new chapter for you
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Lucky you
Well hi there Spike, didn't expect to see you here!
How badass would it be to have a dragon as an adoptive parent?
This..Now this, is what i expected Celestia to do for her sister..
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Incredibly so.
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Exactly.
Ah, such a sweet ending to the chapter... made me go aw all of a sudden.
3992956 I have a feeling that you're changing the history if Equestria one sensible choice at a time, correct?
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Maybe... *looks both ways and then starts whistling while reading a newspaper*
The way 'Johnathan' described feeding what will be Spike, as well as the name remind me of a certain – and very good – book series...
3992875 That avatar, simply amazing.
Nice chapter. Celestia is going by the title of Queen, right? Does she change it to Princess later on?
Very nice and a neat idea that Celestia did there.
However, it was also kind of stupid if one looks at in hindsight, Especially if Luna brings Sarah back with her. After all, I don't see that situation going down well at all...
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Which one? I've read so many good dragon series that I tend to lose track of them all.
3993069. Temeraire, based during the Napoleonic Wars. It's quite good IMO.
The first thing Will feeds Temeraire is cooked oats in blood, and then eventually meat.
Got a bad feeling I know how nightmare night came about.
Jonathan as spike's dad = Confirmed
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Which idea, destroying the old nobles, rewriting history, or Luna's Day in general?
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Some of the re-writing of history. After all, she wrote that Luna went through the portal to a dark and evil place to fight the beings that lived there. For one thing, Celestia is taking the chance that it's not. Though in this case, it could backfire if Sarah comes to Equestria, as the average pony might think of her as a possibly evil being for coming from such a world.
I can't see Luna or Nim taking that laying down...
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OOOH I love that one. Kind of want someone to make a fic based off of it but i kind of doubt that it would be any good.
Now that you mention it... it does sound like what Laurence was told...
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Ah, that's what you meant, I actually hadn't considered that... hmm... might be able to do something with that later on... thanks for being observent
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Screw that, that means that Spike is Celestia's brother in law and is therefore a prince of sorts.
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Yes, yes he is
3993107 Luna could just say Sarah is an ally that helped her combat the monsters. It is not that much of a stretch from the truth.
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"Even in the darkness of that foul place there was light."
...Sargent Pepper? Beatles, if you would,
Now, the question is, does this Sargent Pepper have a lonely hearts club band?
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Heh heh heh, was waiting for someone to catch that. As for the answer, there might be a band of guards he plays with
well, looks like Tia lost the list. After all, spike has no hoard, lives in a flammable tree, and I have never seen him eat meat... Still, great chapter, keep goin and stay golden^^
3993545 -_- Alright I have to ask where did the whole name for the dragon come from, it doesn't sound like a name a dragon would have Its really quite confusing. (Is it from some book Ive never heard of? ) ....Also I'm guessing you took spikes Gender bent name for barb and where does Faust fit into the whole equation?...
3994205 He is older then 10 years though. That, and this chapter essentially severed any chance to match cannon with Luna's Day and the erasure of Nightmare Moon from history.
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Ah, funny story. If you've read my other story Light Wanderings (I feel like you have but I'm not positive of that) then you'll recall that there's a group of scenes with dragons one of which includes a dragon named Jonathan, because he's a trotish dragon and it's also a reference to Temeraire series (which I recommend you reading because it's amazing). So in short, his name is a reference to my other fic for people who came over. Not only that, but I find something infinitely more amusing about having a dragon named 'Jonathan' of all things because it's un-dragonish
Yes, that was the origin of Barb's name.
Finally as for Faust... I really don't know; I hadn't considered her in this.
3994330 Hmm Haha wow I cant believe I couldn't remember that, but the hole Johnathan for the dragons name totally fits with your writing style.
Also who knows "Faust" Would be quit an interesting ingredient to the mix.
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Nah, let's make Nightmare Night the most favorite Equestrian holiday besides Hearth's Warming Eve.
Hah, John doesn't know how perceptive hewas of the future
3993263 Don't you mean adopted brother? For Spike to be Celestia's brother-in-law, either Spike would have to be married to Luna, or either Celestia or Luna would have to be married to one of Spike's (so far non-existent) siblings. Cadance is Twilight's sister-in-law because Shining Armor is her husband. Twilight is Shining's sister. Father or mother in law is the parent of one's spouse. Brother or sister in law is the sibling of one's spouse, or the spouse of one's sibling.
Still, imagine all the potential crack fits where Spike is Celestia's brother-in-law. Maybe he married Luna, or maybe one of the princesses married his (OC) older brother. Or maybe Twilight Velvet is the name that Celestia goes by when she's pretending she's not a princess or an alicorn, and she is actually Twilight Sparkle's mother! And Celestia and Luna are the offspring of Discord!!! Oh the drama! And throw in a Fluttershy/Discord shipping and you've got dramatic crack chaos! I can see it now! "Oh, um, Twilight? I guess that I'm maybe, um, possibly, just a teeny bit.. um, I'm your step grandma now, um, that is, if you're OK with that..."
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So would that mean that Shiny married his cousin?
3994330 Hrm..Would Faust be, like the spirit of Equestria like that W character from your other stories? Celestia and Luna are clearly her daughters..but they don't know that..blegh. I HATE THE PERSON WHO ASKED ABOUT FAUST. NOW MY HEAD HURTS.
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Well, that actually opens things up a little... Tia and Luna's mother died in childbirth so she could've been named Faust.
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/AscendedFanon
3988001 Yeah now that you remind me...
I think that was my derp moment for the week.
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No worries, sorry if I wasn't clear enough the first time (I was running on a few hours of sleep).
There's also how Sarah doesn't speak their language as well, so they would not be able to understand her right away. But glad that I gave you an idea.
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True, that could work. Though that depends on how those around Luna might react before she can explain things though. It takes only one stupid pony overreacting before thinking...
Aw no Luna or Nim in this chapter
Well i suppose there is always next chapter
BTW is Nim still with Sarah at the moment and if so how long for ?
Anyway hope you update soon
Ciao
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Nim is currently residing in Sarah's head, yes. Next update may take a bit longer depending on how I'm doing this... going to change my writing a bit but don't worry, I'll still be hard at work.
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Heh, I wonder if Nim might pick up some... ideas... from the time inside Sarah's head.
gases
tired
Also, the egg is Spike, right?
Or am I misunderstanding the timeline?
And don't worry about the update thing, you're literally one of the fastest updater I've seen.
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH I finally FUCKING get it! its an alternative timeline of sorts! fucking hell im just to slowpoke
quick question, and i know someone already asked it, but are you going to include broken steel?
Ha! Ha!!!! Bucking called it!
That totally explains why Celestia has unicorns attempting to hatch the egg using magic, the egg was just absorbing it like normal! Clever girl!
Another well done chapter my friend ^^ good show.
So that explains Spike's egg ^^ heheh~
I love it!
As soon as I knew his colour scheme, I bloody knew he was Spike's dad!