Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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apologies for the run on ittalix, I already caught it
Oh shit. Tirek.
I love Nim
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As do I
HELL YEAH, WE GOT PRIME ONLINE! It seems time between both worlds is synchronizing. Please, send him with Sara, Nim, and Luna to Equestria to help out. Oh, and since it's Liberty Prime:
ROFL i just cant stop laughing lol keep going
poor Nim
4534211 I really do hope she gets her own body one day
Woo! Been waiting for an update, and it was a nice one. I do hope this doesn't get rape-y though... that kinda crap spoils good stories. Hope to see more soon!
Can't stop thinking of a giant fucking poisonous mountain spider. Damn you Fire Emblem.
Fuck. YEAH.
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Hey Enclave, guess what?
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Assholes.
Nim is the best. No if's, and's, but definitely butts.
...hopefully Nim's butt.
ಠ_ಠ
So I guess it's time to go and grab Medicine Stick and some SWC rounds, eh?
Oh, wait, what's this...?
There's one last one...?
I– But– Wha– That isn't–
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Wow, what a chapter! :D I love how you are portraying Fawkes, he's so awesome! :D and he's singing XD that's fantastic!
Good work on this man!
Cannot wait for the next chapter! :D
I FOUND THIS STORY TODAY AND I'M GOING TO READ IT TODAY
" Fire Brand"
Is that from FOB Equestria?
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FOB?
takes in deep breath....... TOO EASY
4534451 it's a military brony community, I'm not in the military but I like listening to their podcasts. Someone there is called Captain Fire Brand.
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Oh, well it was unintentional, but it's a nice name
well s**t just got real twice maybe thrice
no Nim that's not Morgan Freeman
soooo, Does Nim have a machine/robot fetish now?
4534507 I think you mean Ron Perlman.
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Thanks for such a delightful to read comment
Oh, and sorry for making you crash
4534621 Yes, yes she does... Nim is now Heavy Weapons Mare
Funny, at work I was just realizing that I hadn't seen an update for this fic in a while, glad to see the day I thought of it you updated. Poor Twilight, but I have a feeling Tirek will get a Sonic Rainboom stuffed down his throat.
4534207 Nim you naughty naughty girl! But she's not the only one who has a similar reaction to the right voice.
4534798 Hey, Nim is allowed to look at the big guns but not touch. Or it's the couch for that alicorn
I really Hope that Twilight would be able to take back her powers. Cause I really want Tirek to Die.
Well see next chapter
4534884 Yeah, but if Sarah had a massive cannon...
4535159 I think Sarah's head would become very wet and very sticky, with a lot of cooing being heard
4535178 Very true
The real question is, does Sarah have the clean up virtual cum? And how would that even work?
Keep going! ;)
Ok its official, Nim is a gun nut of the highest calibre.
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Thanks for spotting that
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Imagine if she found out about the Enclaves orbital missile platform or Zeta's Death Ray.
4536121 ... she'd probably pass out do to severe orgasming.
4534701 But she doesnt have sandvich!
(also, sup man, havent seen you for a long time)
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It's fine, I can tell it was good natured. Glad that you enjoyed it enough to recommend it despite its flaws.
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FIRE EMBLEM FTW
First of all, HELL YEAH to the Meatloaf. I was listening to it all day yesterday.
Second, when Luna does get pulled back, with Sarah (and hopefully Fawkes) with her, I'm hoping she accidentally brings someone...extra.
"NO MORE COMMUNISTS DETECTED ON AMERICAN SOIL. ANCHORAGE HAS BEEN. LIBERATED."
"Uh, Luna, you brought Liberty Prime."
"Uh, my bad?"
"Can we keep him?!"
You've already gone a little Dark and sexually promiscuous with this story, and I know it's a Fallout crossover, but don't you dare have him rape Twilight.
Other than that, I'm glad Luna is bound and determined to bring Sarah with her if/when she gets dragged back to Equestria.
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Don't worry, no real rape will be committed, this story.
When I saw that this updated
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4536225 Then ve make sandvich!
(Also yeah, just been trying to get over this writer's block by writing a new story for LoHAV)
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ALL THE SANDVICHES!!
(Cool, gl with that. Hope it helps. Got my own blocks and stuff to work around too)
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Wait..."real" rape?
Fix that dialogue, there.
Are you sure you want power armor under the coat?
Man, you've come a helluva long way since chapter one. Things are coming to an end, but from the way you've been setting this up, it'll end with a bang. As for the chapter itself, it was written well enough, despite some weird structuring and grammar mistakes. You've been doing well enough with Spencer; he is still finding his niche in the group, which isn't made easier by his naïveté. I love how Fawkes keeps him in check, especially when Spencer has no idea about what the hell he's talking about. The little conflict at the Citadel was entertaining. I'd always assumed that the presence of a super mutant would throw in some confusion, but the game never did that. The introduction of Liberty Prime was awesome, and so was Spencer's reaction. Then this happened:
You're doing it again, Ed. While I'm all for comic relief, arbitrary dialogue like this seems inappropriate for the situation. I understand that Nim is excited, but that doesn't seem like something she would say. It's pointless and tasteless.
The Equestrian portion of this chapter was a bit slow until Celestia came back, but from there, things really picked up. The silent conversation between Celestia and Tornado was impactful and really gave a sense of the situation's gravity. I especially loved how serious RD became. Normally, one would expect a gung-ho reaction, but when it's Twilight at risk, things change. I certainly wasn't expecting Tirek to make an appearance, nor was I expecting a significantly darker version of him. Is the whole Starclan thing a reference to the Warriors series? Anyways, this chapter was pretty good. All in all, this gets a "Communist engaged!"/10
And I'd like to reinforce the fact that I exist to
4538070 Ed was actually wondering if anyone would pick up on that, but yes it was. Even I didn't pick up on it , sneaky bastard that Ed is.
edit: also, given that I changed that particular bit of dialog, what was wrong with it?
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Damn, that was just spitballing. I read the ever loving hell out of those books as a kid.
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What a deceptively mature series about sex and violence... I mean look at all the cute cats!
New chapter incoming in around half an hour btw
As did I.