Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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Color me impressed
Xanthos's speech reminds me of something.......oh yea!
Just have to fix that 'one this battle' ...
WOW that was great.
Also i love how you got the followers of luna to do something I gusse am not the only one here
I had a smile on my face and it grew larger and larger as the chapter went on. The only thing I can see wrong is
I'm guessing that either Jonathan was really cryptic and there is more to that statement than it looks or that it was a missed typo.
Poor Clover is nearly dead
Celestia is having some trouble quelling Luna's admirers.
I want more!
Your authors note makes you sound like an old dementia patient "oh looky! I gave you two quaters instead of one! Don't spend it all in one place!"
In all seriousness though, I like this.
'In my little one'? I do hope theres supose to be a 'life' or something in that sentance...
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Great
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Yep, they're busy bees out there
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Great to hear And yeah, it was a typo, was supposed to be 'won'
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Thanks for the catch, writing at 1:15 causes things like that
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Yeah, she's getting old alright
3558742 happy to help!
3558742 It won't be long until luna come back and give them AK sytal weapons to them lol
Hehehe, oh if you only knew, Speven...if you only knew.
Uhm... I think you might want to look a bit more closely at this phrase, then facepalm (or facehoof if you prefer) when you realise what is wrong with it.
"All that was once good has died and is decaying"
...is that a Disturbed lyric I spy?
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Maybe
do i sence Sarah x luna?
hehe dang good job in this chapter..
sooooo yep
LUNA X SARAH?
am i right ?
Can you put a romance tag in this story?
Hah! I knew she was going to set them up as real guards when she put them to sleep! It's definitely not fun and games...
Woohoo! another great chapter ^^
I freaking love the princess she's so cool in this :3 legit!
Crimson Lance... Borderlands? XD hehehe JK.
Good show and awesome work on this my friend ^^ I like where this is heading :)
Keep it up!
So...there are more Cenatours like Tirek out there? Well were doomed.
I do love seeing where the blood lines started from tying a lot of fanon and cannon history together(if m reading it right)
Crimson. Lance. Was that Borderlands reference intentional?
For some reason. I read the Title as Xanatos That villain from Gargoyles..
4552284 well yeah, they are an entire species you know.
Something tells me that Xanthos is the father of Tirek and Scorpan.