Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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so is James an object now, or....
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Thanks for the catch, any other thoughts?
any ways, nice chapter bro, glad i had no school today to read it.
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well instead of "Its in the Jefferson Memorial building northwest of here."
maybe.
"He headed/went to the Jefferson Memorial building northwest of here."
ehh?
I liked the little, not-so-vague, descriptions of Harkness being a robot.
That being said, you really need to add some more meat to these chapters. I like short chapters, but, I think you could do with one a bit longer. Maybe 4k words for the next one? Assuming it'd reach that much. Don't push out what isn't necessary, but it'd be nice to see some action.
Also, I really hope Luna starts bickering with Nightmare more, considering she's always one to say "SHE'S ABANDONING US!" over and over. Personally, that'd agitate me to the point of just yelling directly at Nightmare and telling her that she needs to shut the hell up and not immediately assume that.
Personally, I think it'd be useful to do it as soon as possible and in a fitting place. Could you imagine Sarah legitimately abandoning Luna and then having Nightmare nag on to Luna about how right she was? Although that'd be a huge cliche "WHAT A TWEEST," but I personally think it'd be interesting to just have Luna shut Nightmare up for a bit, only to have Sarah leave Luna in the dust for a few chapters and cause Luna to just go "Wow." While Nightmare fuels a plot to try and murder Sarah or something.
Actually, you could probably pull this off when they're in Vault 87. The Enclave secures the GECK from Sarah, and then bring Sarah back, leaving Luna in the vault. Luna has no clue where Sarah went, and Nightmare immediately believes it was an elaborate plan (the stun grenade) set up to leave Luna there. Since Luna has no other way of refuting it, she'd believe it and starts to wander off alone, hoping to find Sarah and figure out how she'll repay her for the betrayal.
3833096 i approve of that last idea there buddy.
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Don't worry, the chapters are going to be getting longer starting at around 25, which coincidentally is where the action level is going to raise. At the moment I'm working on a scheduled set of events and unfortunately, there isn't much action in the game at these parts aside from cleaning out the mutants in the Rotunda
As always, thanks for the comment man
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If it werent so obvious...
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Alrighty.
Do try to take my suggestion, though. If you feel that's what you want to do. I could see it working out later.
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Awww, but that's not very conductive to the fluff that was happening....
Also,
was hilarious. Thanks for that.
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Me no comprehend.
PLOT TWIST.
I'm just wondering when they're going to do the DLC's. Anchorage was a bitch, but that T-51 man...
Does luna get her own power armor?
yes, yes, we've all played that quest, you can stop beating the metaphorical dead Luna about how Harkins a robot.
see what I did there?
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Actually, I may be mistaken, but it looks like there she was referring to the project, not James. So, with a subject of "Project Purity", yes, it is the right pronoun. I'm pretty sure I saw it hasn't gotten changed, though, so maybe I'm just being extraneous.
3833539 people had trouble with that? I pretty much just strutted though the whole thing, it was SOOOOOOOO easy
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No. Just no.
Call of Fallout: VR Warfare is definitely THE WORST DLC in both games. No exploration, no shortcut, no multiple ways to complete the same thing, (Except the speech check at the VERY end.) barely any story telling, and... and... those Chinese voice acting, those FUCKING Chinese voice acting...
Also, NMM, can you be more annoying?
Sarah: Hey Luna, I'm going to use the toilet, wait here.
NMM: She's abbandoning us, FUCKING KILL HER!
3834260 I always did Anchorage as fast as I could, usually somewhere around level three.
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Best to wait till level five actually. Rush your small guns skill and science. You'll breeze right through.
3833854 Wait... Harkin's the Pinkatron?...
That explains why I never completed that quest, I shot 'em dead.
I want to see something done with this.
Damn, Nightie, you really are afraid of being abandoned, aren't you?
3834471 .... i feel dumb now... i did it at like level 25. xD everything makes sense now!!!
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Somebody sure is bitter. :V
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Oh great, my notifications are broken and I can't get this message out of it.
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I'm going end this now before I have to read ten of them. People are entitled to their opinion, good or bad. Deal with it and don't start comment wars. (There is no negativism being directed at either of you I just don't wish to read the comments)
3836285 Well, you do it at the lowest level possible for Power Armor Training, then you use the WT-51 and Shocksword or Gauss Rifle to kill everything attacking you, and then some. Screw Casadin.
Wow, that Harkness guy seems really...cold blooded *wink wink*
3834695 I always waited for lv 50, get the almost perfect perk and then the +1 to all SPECIAL stats from the DLC. If you put int to lv 9 and rushed to the science lab you could create a toon with 10 to every stat and most perks in the game.
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You said you liked the idea of:
And I responded to that in a negative fashion because it discourages the romance between Luna and Sarah....
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The problem with that is we were talking about Fallout 3, not New Vegas. The level cap in three, even with dlc, is 30.
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Honestly, a better one might be the Mothership Zeta DLC. For some reason, Luna is not with Sarah when she comes across the crashed ship and when she does not return, at first thinks that she abandoned her (Nightmare not helping). And then the two overhear someone talking about how they saw the Lone Wanderer getting beamed up by an alien spaceship (and looking into said person's memories, they see it to be true).
Which leads to a pissed off Luna and Nightmare preparing to storm the spaceship (possibly flying up), only for Sarah to have completed it. And then the two vow to never again let her out of their sight again.
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I... really wish I could do this... it sounds spectacular. Maybe a AU chapter... hmm...
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what do you mean "wish you could." you havent gotten that far into it yet, theres still plenty of time for it. unless of course youve already worked out the plot and everything. but you could still squeze it in there. people tend to do that shit quite often actuallly and tends to turn out good.
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Yes, please put this in. I would love an alien joke about Luna.
"So I got abducted by some aliens and you decide to fly into space to get me?"
"Umm, yes."
"But aren't you an alien too?"
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No, no...
"HAVE NO FEAR, SARAH! WE HAVE ARRIVED TO RESCUE YOU!"
"Um... We already beat the aliens..."
"And Sarah has already teleported back down..."
"..."
This somewhat reminds me of this.
Sure, it mayy be just a sjign of foreshhadowing, but I cant help but wonder what Fallout would be like with weather.
I always thought getting to Doctor Li, everything after was quite anti climatic for me, in the game.
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Nope, small guns and lock pick, so you can get the Intel and get the Covert Ops perk. And, by the way, I spotted two Harkness is an android references.
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Never bothered trying to track down all the intel myself, but then again I don't really play stealthy characters in Fallout. I got for the sniper approach. High perception and rushing small guns. I hit up Minefield asap to get that sniper rifle.
3848893 Oh, and before I forget. There were three.
"I could be made of metal..."
"Stared off into space like a robot"
"Brain switched off like it did..."
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I did it because it gave +3 to science, small guns, and sneak, and at the time, small guns and sneak were 2 of my 3 main things. I try to avoid conflict until higher levels, which tends to work out until I hit a bunch of enemies the Enclave, but because of that, i tend to have a lot of ammo. I also hit Minefield early, though it kinda sucks how little .308 there is at the start, though.
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Didn't see that last one.
Awesome chapter! ^^
heheh, Luna isn't fat~ she's festively plump XD XD //slapped
Good show once more my friend, highly entertaining ^^
3846932 same here
...... *snickers*
4499338 oh the sweet irony of that statement....
Or an android.