Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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Then just wear it UNDERNEATH the armor, like, you know, THE Vault Dweller?
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It's the armored one, you wouldn't be able to
crouch-like position
When'd the 10mm turn into a burst fire pistol? I understand what you mean, but this implies that this 10mm can be semi-auto/auto. Nothing wrong with that if that's what you want, but I've just never seen it in the game.
Comma between "Vault" and "Luna"
"That's because I am from a Vault, Luna," ...
This implies she was hit with multiple shots, but then it later states she wasn't. It's contradictory and it needs some rewording.
Other than that, fun read. Kind of a bit... Fast for me, but, I understand why. It's the Wasteland and shit can happen.
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Thanks for the catches
And yeah things move quickly in the Wasteland
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Fiiiiiiiiiiine. *sigh*
mmhh.... don't remember having any kind of trouble with any raider or mutant early on.... might wanna tone down on how powerful the enemies are.... considering you haven't had a single battle were they don't almost die yet, and I know that she only just got out of the vault, but Sarah was trained in fighting, its just annoying how they whine over everything..... unless your going for the whole "realistic" thing.... then maybe you wanna take two steps back and recall what stories your crossing over. (just my Point of view)
3346018 I forsee spray paint and power armor,Vault 101 power armor....Hunh...has that been modded yet?
Pretty good, and you have a good explanation for Luna not tossing people around like ragdolls. I'm assuming she's just using a minimum amount of telekinesis to stop people from pulling the guns' triggers, since guns were explained to her. I can't wait for someone to try and throw a grenade at them.
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Yes, and she was only able to manage to stop the triggers because she was so close to them, otherwise with current conditions she wouldn't have been able to concentrate enough magic in the right place
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I actually do remember those type of baddies in those places in the FO3 game.
Oh shit, Super Mutants this early.
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Yeah, in the game, you meet the Super Mutants pretty much the moment you enter the city.
That being said,3346362, I have a question regarding the previous chapter.
Does time flow differently in Equestria as compared to Fallout?
Is that one month since banishment in Equestria only the day we see when Luna first landed?
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You'll just have to wait and see, hopefully as the story goes on the answer will become more clear
hah, they should've checked the building to their right first before crossing in case something was searching for swimmers to use as target practice. They would have been able to kill the Super mutants with ease, and take their large guns+ammo.
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Actually, near the first Metro station you enter to head to GNR, you encounter a group of raiders (excluding Super Duper Mart) on the river bank and two Super Mutant Brutes wielding assault rifles and/or Miniguns across said river. The mutants will only spawn when you head down the river bank, and they'll be firing upon the raiders.
Good story so far. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens when Sara is made aware of Nightmare, or better yet, meets her face-to-face.
As well as what her reaction will be when the whole "eternal night" thing is revealed. Because eternal night is stupid and any human with any education at all should know that it isn't even remotely good for the planet's biosphere, I doubt Miss 101 will be all that impressed by that "genius" plan.
As far as consequences go, we actually have something similar to Eternal Night in real life. We call it "nuclear winter".
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Yeah that will go over well considering how she took the fact that Clover "Betrayed" her.
3346552 I haven't seen this in the comments yet but you're painting Clover to look like Twilight...... I think I see how you're going to tie this all the way back around to present day Equestria. You clever bastard you.
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To be frank, eternal night is a stupid plan. No, scratch that, I'd flat out call it retarded if Luna didn't at least have the excuse of ignorance. She does come from a medieval time, there's no way she fully comprehends the long-term consequences of eternal night as of now. She might not even have considered those consequences at all, and Nightmare doesn't strike me as the type who would either.
She/they might be... educated by Miss 101, however. And then we'll see how Luna (and maybe Nightmare) reacts when it dawns on her that her plan would have ended up killing everything on the planet if she had kept at it. I doubt she'd be happy about it, since all she really wanted was to be as loved as her sister.
Freezing everything to death isn't exactly conducive to that goal, and as we have seen by Luna's portrayal so far, she isn't quite hardened enough to take death lightly, and that's when we're talking about humans, a species she's never encountered before. Seeing potentially countless dead ponies, most of which would be innocents, would probably affect her far more, especially since she'd be responsible for it.
My point is that 101 most likely will call Luna out on it at some point. It'd be hard not to, really. Some things you just can't keep silent about, and hearing that your companion was effectively attempting to fuck over a whole world is one of those things.
Just so you know ... the cloth strips were covering Sarah's waist, not waste. While such things aren't usually commented on in-game (toilets being mainly a source for water and the occasional microfusion cell), I don't think she'd bother wrapping it after leaving it
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oh... typeos!
Great chapter, however I did find the use of the wrong wording when you said "bound free at a time" you used the word free as in letting some go free rather than three meaning the number
MOAR!
OH GOD I REMEMBER THAT PLACE. Anyways, nice chapter. I especially liked the the small glimpses of Sarah's training taking over from her normally naive personality in a fight. Not many people think to do that with their characters. Keep it up!
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You can thank me later.
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Does eternal night in Equestria mean eternal day for whatever's on the otherside of the pony planet?
Because if it does, her plan's gonna wipe out all life on the planet.
Kinda counterproductive if your goal is to be loved by your subjects.
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Well, eternal night on one side of the planet means that side will freeze and everything there dies.
Eternal day on the other side of the planet... Well, that would probably turn that side of the planet into a desert and everything starves, thirsts or heat-strokes to death. Or it becomes a furnace and everything is grilled into charcoal.
Either way, everything on that side of the planet dies too. It just a question of how long it will take.
...Hmmm, that means the "twilight ring" around the planet where day and night meets could turn out to be just right for supporting life. So not everything dies, just almost everything.
...However, that means that enormous amounts of cold and hot air from the Day and Night sides of the planet will meet along this possibly habitable zone, which in turn would mean the Twilight Ring would suffer some seriously big storms and very often at that. It wouldn't be a very nice place to live, I think.
Well, at least the pegasi would be kept busy :D
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Typeos...
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I LOLed.
3351780 Maybe, lesbian relationships are used at the drop of a hat but romance in general is overly common as a side-plot.
I'm a die-hard conservative if that's what you want to hear..... I don't support gay marriage. However while that may have a small influence on my judgment, in this case its more of, "Everyone does it" give me, the reader, something new to read into.
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Heh, I remember it as well, though last time I went there early game things got even more insane.
First, the raiders, then the mutants, then as I'm trying to survive them, Talon turns up so I'm playing tag with shotguns while minigun fire rains in, THEN the Brotherhood arrive to mop everything up.
I didn't stick around after that but I DID very shortly run into some Outcasts moving in that direction.
That bank basically sums up the Capital Wasteland for me after that mess.
Man, I love, Love LOVE Fallout 3. I put nearly 400 hours into a single game.
Luna + Fallout = ARGLFLARGLEEBLARGLEJOYGASMHAPPIES!!!
Another really good story that's way too short, please fix that,
3359025 So? I can two thousand caps within ten minutes of leaving the vault, without looting corpses and selling their possessions.
3377299 HA I found an alien pistol outside the super duper mart with several rounds and made short work of everything between me and the GNR building.
3500591 I found Death claws not my happiest moment.
Another well done chapter, man these two are tearing it up! :D
Dang super Mutants man, they're such a pain X( legit, especially when they're coming at you with miniguns and flamethrowers.
Good show once more my friend, I like this story so far and it is just awesome! :D
Keep it up!
Is taking a swim in an irradiated river really such a great idea? I mean, mutation might be fun and all, but really?
4573865 The fev is what mutates you dipshit the rads just kill you.
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Correction, FEV (Forced Evolutionary Virus) was developed before the war by West Tek through a failed project (the Pan-Immunity Virion Project); guess where the project was? Mariposa (see where im going with this?)
education mode engaged;
You are correct about FEV mutating, but rads also mutates, ghouls are a result of mutation (some are FEV ghouls, but are more commonly rad ghouls)
Almost every giant animal is a result of rad mutation: Radscorpions, Brahmin, Ants, to name a few.
The difference in all this, is FEV almost always has the same result (strains may vary), the fat f**ks known as super mutants (centaurs a bit more rarely)
some exceptions here, like Harold or Talius
Rads do mess with your DNA a bit more and is more random, so a lot of the time rads=death
lecture on rads vs FEV over
TL;DR: FEV is taint, and rads can mutate (in moderated doses) (I wish there was a Little Pip or Blackjack face)
Damn what is Sarah level 3... level 4 and she already has combat armour, a combat shotgun and an an assault rifle she doing good for herself as a player character
3351944 Why? Who gives a shit who marries who and who sticks what where? Don't everyone got enough problems without you making it worse for yourself and everyone else. Worrying about gay marriage when there is Mutants, Deathclaws, and Gonorrhea everywhere. Just stop giving a fuck and learn from all the depressed or extremely happy people. (His mind is screaming" dirty liberal" right now)
Hurry the fuck up Bethesda I want fallout 4 NOW! It's been like a decade! Forgot the Elder Scrolls Skyrim sucked (Compared to Oblivion) stop collecting your paychecks and drinking margaritas and make me a game so beautiful and amazing I shoot myself in the face after I complete it 100% because nothing will ever be better than that game.
4847421 Bethesda isn't infinity ward and the other CoD companies that spew out as much as possible, they take their time. And it's entirely possible that they dropped the Fallout franchise
Gramgrams
Technically third, but who's counting?
hurr hurr
Two and a half days.
Interesting view of a parasite.
If shes going to swim THAT much, she better be well-used to radaway
I was delighted when I realized that people were sending waves of Talon mercs against me in Fo3. Practically free weapons and ammunition, caps and combat armor that I could use to repair my stuff!
Now, we all know that THAT isn't necessarily true! I seem to remember a little grove, somewhere...
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I was going to say, there's no way in Hell that the G.E.C.K. is anything short of part magic...
What kind of trained noob fires a gun to the face?
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Wonder what your reaction was when it came out