Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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Ah yes, and with this we come ever closer to Fawkes. Sweet chapter, keep goin and stay golden^^
Oh Vault 87... I ran through that in T51-B with Eugene and about twenty thousand 5mm rounds. And a Missile Launcher.
Ahh, so many good times with my Super Sledge and a sniper rifle.
Oh ew. Having the possibility of getting blood in your mouth makes going through vault 87 much more disgusting than the game implies. I feel for Sarah. ^^;
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Not so bad if you'd gone through the Dunwich building first though. Also Cannibalism perk FTW.
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4466250 Try the MPLX Novasurge and Jingwei's Chinese Shocksword. With the Simulation variant of the Chinese Assault Rifle as the main weapon. All the while I was wearing Jungwei's uniform. Fun times.
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Two things: One, the SS runes are a little more boxy, and two, they're little lightning bolts inside the O's as a flourish. Fallout started it, though admittedly there aren't two O's in a row in Fallout. I think it's more about being faithful to Fallout, and the 'SS runes' was just an honest, unintended mistake. I: personally don't think it needs to be changed, considering that it's just the Fallout font, but I'm not gonna deny you your right to outrage, just explain it.
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What outrage? I think it's funny.
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Yeah, it was big red text when I responded, so it totally looked like outrage =P
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I was hoping someone would notice it and call me a neo-nazi. But people seem to be taking the other route on my blog too.
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Do you mind if I delete the comment? I'd rather not have that be the only thing people talk about for this chapter...
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Sure. fuck you
Nice work.
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Thanks, I did enjoy the joke though
Did you know the name Fawkes comes from the anonymous?
4466644 No friend, it really doesn't. Anonymous drew on Guy Fawkes, or rather the masks popularized by the film V for Vendetta, as an inspiration and manifestation of their anonymity and anarchistic ideologies.
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And Fawkes read the name in a History book and took it.
4466709 Major difference from "Comes from the anonymous," wouldn't you say?
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Indirectly yes.
Dude, you should've made it so Nim could give Sarah cat eyes as a part of her residing within her head. That would've been so cool.
Restructure this sentence a bit, as well as replace irony with metallic. I understand that you meant irony like iron-y, but it is slightly obstructive to your flow. Plus, how can blood be ironic?
Ooookidoke, let's get crackin'. You're doing a great job at keeping a creepy and dark tone to this mini-arc, and each chapter thus far has brought new and irksome surprises. There isn't too much to say, but it is nice how you're adding stronger and stronger mutants as they dive in. I expect some masters and maybe an overlord before they finally reach Fawkes. The scene with Sarah accidentally getting blood in her mouth was written well, and I was absolutely blindsided (in a good way) by the fact that it was gore bags. Let's just hope she doesn't start looting them, like I do . It's also welcome to see Sarah fully recovered. Charging into places blind is what I expect, and it's good to see Luna telling her when she has hit her limit. The only problem I can see was after Sarah said "Where did the blood come from anyways?" There wasn't much suspense to it, so while it did catch me off guard, the shock factor didn't really last long. Also, why wouldn't Sarah assume it wasn't from the mutants that seem to be gushing ichor? I think it would've been better had you used something along the lines of 'feel a drip, ignore, feel a drip-drop, slowly look up, scream' approach. But, it's only a minor error in an otherwise entertaining chapter. Solid job. All in all, this chapter gets an Irony taste of Irony/10.
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because blood is what irony tastes like
I get the feeling that Sarah is going to do what we never got the opportunity to do in FO3 and Leave a huge sodding bomb in the vault, blowing the whole place to hell once and for all. Or, is she can't do that, move heaven and earth to lead a Brotherhood invasion of the place though Lamplight.
Sure, the kids may not be too chuffed with the idea, but Slavers are not likely to try to nab them with the Brotherhood around and it is in their best interests to get the mutants wiped out.
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I rephrased that little bit in the chapter now. ed2481 published this before I edited the whole thing.
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Errr 4? I count three at the most (Sarah and Luna) makes one and the possible Twidash makes two. Finally the Cloud/Blossom is part of a reference and is thus essential. Cadence and Shining aren't gay, least as far as I've heard, and Celestia simply loves those who have the right qualities regardless of gender. As for mane six pairings, this isn't the canon universe, they're not really the mane six here. Regatdless of which, is it really something worth ranting about?
4468218 I counted the thing with celestia as one so that makes rd x twi, celestia x dragonthatIcantremembername, cloudkicker x Blossom, and sarah x luna (this is the one that I think I have the biggest problem with and think would have worked much better with just a friendship). Its just I am starting to get sick and tired of seeing gay shipping. I have no problem with it its just that it is way overdone. Not to mention the probability that so many characters in a story are gay (Unless that is the main point of the story) is just so astronomically small that it is near impossible which kind of breaks a bit of immersion for me. It is something that I am starting to get annoyed at seeing as it has gotten stale and just plain boring as someone who has been here for a long ass time and have read a lot of fiction. Not to mention it is nearly always contrived. For me I think a friend shipping is a bit more endearing. So its a personal thing. Its kind of why I avoid the romance tag on adventure stories most of the time.
Woohoo! awesome!
Bleagh! Blood falling into the mouth! that's not yours! *coughing and hacking fit*
Dat's nasty.
They're getting closer it would seem~ to le Fawkes :D Can't wait to see their reactions! X3
Good show my friend!
For a moment we worried she would get infected or something, glad that's not the case.
I wonder what the comic book was?
Keep going ;)
I thought that was a party.mov reference for a minute there. Still might have been, come to think of it.
"Oh my god it got in my mouth! You got any more fluids you want to dump on me, you stupid fucking vault?!"
And ah, Vault 87... What memories. I've never been one for heavy weapons, but A3-21's plasma rifle handles most of those mutants quite nicely. Failing that, well, this is usually right after I get the Wazer Wifle from Little Lamplight. It's a solid weapon that's quite efficient if a bit underpowered against the stronger mutants. Usually have Star Paladin Cross backing me up too, with a Chinese Assault Rifle or a regular Laser Rifle.
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I decided to waste ALL the flamer ammo I had, and went in with the Incinerator, a duster, a Cowboy hat, and the repeater. Good times.
4651567 Chinese sneak suit, Jingwei's Chinese shock sword, and Scoped revolver I killed them all and and pick pocketed one and put a grenade in it several times ah good times.
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I stuck with good old gauss rifle and winterized t51-b
Then I got bored and turned the vault into an explosives testing facility
4913034 I had fun with th Tesla cannon
5725804 Wow am I the only one who used the Fat Man then? It was extremely fun nuking muties in close quarters, though I did use up like 55 stimpacks every other room. Still so worth it.
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Experimental MIRV. MUCH more fun
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Alas, that came about in FoNV onwards...
Regardless, I usually rock some combo of Chinese Assault Rifle, Laser Rifle, Minigun, Gatling Laser, Missile Launcher, and Hunting Rifle. One of these days I'll delay the Vault 87 part of the story long enough to get my Fatman and mininukes, but not today it seems...
Just of deafening her permanently-not-permanently (ain’t alicorn healing nice?)