Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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Thank You, something to get me away from that gauntlet of misery Dark Souls for a minute.
Very nice update and I wonder what else Nim has changed.
If I am going to judge this correctly....Luna will be the one who goes through that radioactive chamber of Project Purity (forgot what its actually called though). Because radiation is equal to magic and the long walk inside that chamber kinda fitting for Luna to return to Equestria. I think
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Na, that's Tony/Speven's world. In mine Radiation and Magic are different things entirely
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Ahhh I see, but I still can see Luna going to sacrifice herself to activate Project Purity
4498567 you know fawkes can too right?
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Why yes he can. But Luna plot DEMANDS IT!!!
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Part of me is thinking Sara will sacrifice herself, Luna comes in for support while she dies, and the radiation burst sends them both to Equestria right after the events of the last chapter. Maybe Fawkes as well, but that might be a bit much.
4498474 its tag line is prepair to die right?
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Actually that is quite awesome!
Imagina Sarah, Luna, Nim and...... GASP! FAWKES.
THE HORROR OF YELLOWISH GREEN MONSTER! Then again, this is alternate universe so I expect to be more rational than those Panic Trio (you know which one)
4498501 well her eyes for one and now her ears i am similarly curious as to what will changer next. Fangs perhaps or finger nails?
Hah, yeah new keyboards always take a bit of time to adjust to. Great chapter! Nightmare accidently morphing Sarah strikes me as a potential perk. Curious to see where, if anywhere it actually goes though. Don't forget Luna's sword on the way out!
I don't know about anyone else, but I really want to see more of Spencer. He seems like a cool guy. Reminds me of Arcade in a way, with the whole Good-Enclave thing.
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To add my own two cents in, my money is on Sarah(and possibly Nim if she is still hitching a ride) being the one to sacrifice herself. Canonically, the Wanderer can survive the ordeal. This assumes Celestia and company manage to drag Luna back to Equestria at an inopportune time with not enough warning though.
4498635 I think Nim would be the mental couch if Sarah gained fangs for a month.
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Or if you want to get really fancy, Luna can use her magic to press the damn button from outside the room.
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Oh good, I was worried about whether or not people would like him
1.So Project Purity for one ending only for luna to go back home with or without Sarah
2. Having the UFO from Mothership Zeta or whatever to go back to Equestria with Sarah
3. The spell works from Celestia/Twilight to have luna with or without Sarah
4. Or just flat out luna dies and gets back to Equestria
5. because im batman
New companion maybe....??? Please?!? Pretty please?!? PLEASE?!?
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That depends, do you like him?
Early in the chapter, President Eden compliments Spencer on his innitive, when I think it should initiative.
Also I do like the idea of Spencer staying a good guy. He doesn't seen like the brightest person, but he does act honorably, honestly, and seems like a pretty nice person. I can also see his background, both as an officer, and as a lifetime member of the "everything which has ever been irradiated ever is unAmerican, and should be killed" club as something he might not be able to overcome in order to be a good guy.
I don't know how long this story will run, but if the story is as far along as I think it is, it would be an odd time to add a new character.
All said, I enjoy this fic a lot, and am excited to see where it goes.
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Two things: 1) Spencer is awesome. Again, he's good Enclave, and that's something that 3 and New Vegas don't have enough of, though I will confess to not having played 1 and 2. I took a look at them and the layout confuses the crap out of me, but I tried to play 2 anyway and I made the mistake of a Guns character (and I ended up punching the radroaches and missing like 2/3 the shots because my Unarmed skill was so low but it was still better than the only melee weapon I had been given which was craptacular). Also, I think it'll be good for Luna/Sarah to see that not all Enclave are evil. Hell, very, VERY few people want to think of themselves as evil. I feel sorry for President Eden, even. Poor guy is just trying to be an American president, but, shyeit, Eden's got no real power to change the course of the Enclave. Sure, he could try, but because plot shenanigans it totally wouldn't work because they'd just think he's turned on them/got converted by a Waster. I can also see that it would be REALLY cool to add in some character dynamics where they're adventuring and hopefully trying to make friends with someone they don't really trust, whose motives they don't really trust, but who, after escaping from Eagle Rock will probably want to atone for Enclave shitheadery.
2) I feel for you on that keyboard issue. I got a new keyboard with some macro keys off to the side a while ago, and what I didn't realize was that my left pinkie kept my hand in the right place while I type, essentially so I don't drift off. Before, it would sit on the edge of the keyboard or off of it, so once the left of my keyboard got expanded out but the keys stayed in the same place I got thrown off really badly. Took me forever to get rid of that error-causing mindset, and now I just rest my pinkie in the trench between keys and macros.
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Aren’t supermutants immune to radiation, why can’t Fawkes just do the purity thing?
Or just you know press the button with magic.
OK, now everything was OK, but i'm wondering about Spencer. Is he an OC? Someone I should know? Just who is he?! Great job though, keep goin and stay golden^^
well..................................................................................shit.
I mean, I actually expected them to meet the president, but nope. We get a plot twist.
Oh, and if you could somehow show me how you get these chapters out so quick, that would be awesome. I need to work on mine, but progress has been slow.
4498709 lol I don't think your wrong there would be one definite silent treatment at least.
4498709 but you must admit if you follow the way the lunar guards look fangs are very definite option.
I like Spencer. He has potential in seeing that the people he's sided with are
evilnever mind, evil's too strong a word. How about, less moral than he originally thought, and has received a chance to perhaps change his ways for the better. At least I hope he will, it's also likely that he'll die..... which I really don't want to happen.4498919 I'll be honest I never thought this story would surpass light or dark wanderings but I am pleasantly surprised to say that not only does Wandering Moon appeal to me more than both storys it is slowly becoming one of my favorite stories on the site. Plus it made me pick up Fallout 3 again. Ahhh such a good game.
4499441 Yup.
Nim: I said I was sorry!
4499451 Yup,
Nim: I only wished to make you more befitting of our relationship! None shall doubt your place by our side!
4498700 People are assholes
4499563 lol wow your really spot on with that accent.
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Would I beg for him to live, if I didn't like him? HMMMMM
Well maybe... depends on the story. Either way, this character is awesome in his own right because he adds a whole new perspective to their group! Think of it as having Cass and Boone with the Courier. Two people who are the same in how they handle things for the most part... then throw in Arcade and now you have that one shred of sane logic that isn't focused purely on killing things.
Spencer adds that little shred of... well how about insane logic in this one? Either way, the guy is a great foil for having two extremely open minded and knowledgeable characters (though Luna is slightly less open minded about certain things).
What I'm trying to say is... WE NEED YOUR HELP!
Oh... wait... that's Space Jam.
Ahem, MAKE HIM A CHARACTER!
4499637 Thank thee!
If only Nim had her own body, I'm sure there would be a lot ear pulling.
I was hoping they would meet the president, but knew it would be unlikely. Strange he couldn't belay the orders of an interior officer. It would be cliche if he ordered them to his office for a nice monologue after all!
Keep going! ;)
Very nice chapter, though I wouldn't have minded seeing Twilight's status after her disappearance.
Spencer: I like him, don't kill him off. He's just doing his job and got tossed under the bus by Colonel Autumn. I could totally see him becoming the new president after adventuring with Sarah, Luna, and Fawkes and making the Enclave go in a better direction.
And I just had a thought regarding Twilight's situation: Celestia was considering to have her mom do the spell... so what if Twilight Velvet goes Mama Bear to rescue Twilight???
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I always love good Enclave character stories, they're the only faction in the game that seems to have no redeemable qualities about them through all but NV where you get primarily geezers whom have past regrets.
Bestiality*
I like that you brought Spencer into the group (or are considering doing so) because the Enclave always gave me a sort of nazi-cult feeling. It's very rare that a story will portray them as anything besides a scourge on the wasteland, only being used by the characters as targets and plot devices.
Hope you like your new computer, great chapter!
Woohoo! ballin work on this man! legit :)
Wow, guy's just following orders, and he's suddenly a traitor... typical of the Enclave O^O
FAWKES! KILL! :D
Good show man, keep it up!
Alright, so this chapter was adequate, with a lot of potential lost and weird decisions made. You started off well, and did a fantastic job of giving Spencer a personality. If he survives, he'd be a really cool addition to the team, especially since Sarah could really show him the Wasteland. I'm sensing some Arcade Gannon-esque characteristics tossed in. Anyways, it started to go downhill once you got to the elf ears. I mean, I understand the transformation in terms of cat eyes, and maybe sharp teeth, but elf ears? It seems arbitrary to throw a characteristic like that in there. I get that Nim has pointed ears, but that's because she's a pony. Had the Enclave soldier been referring to her eyes, the scene would've felt satisfying to read, since we've already seen them once. But, knowing your shenanigans, Sarah is probably physically turning into Nim . But then you get to the labs, which I'll admit, was written very well. Fawkes's commentary was humorous and fit well. It's nice that you're developing him more than he was in the game. I can't wait until he finds his Gatling Laser. All in all, this chapter gets a Level-20 Elven Fighter/10.
Also, forgot to say this in my previous comment, but transformation! YAY! I really want Sarah to keep undergoing feline-esque changes to become a black-cat-morph-lone- wanderer! A pony morph would be cool too, but as a human-cat she will be adorable and have claws AND will still be able to use guns! It's the perfect thing! I really hope it happens because I want to see what would happen if/when she goes back to the citadel as a mutant cat-morph followed by an alicorn, super mutant and enclave officer. The Wtf from Lyons would be the best.
Anyways, I hope it happens, but you're the author. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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I'm glad that you enjoyed Spencer, I worked hard on making him.
Have no fear, Sarah's not actually turning into Nim, she's just changing a bit. Don't worry, she won't get fur or god forbid wings/hooves.
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It's called summer vacation with nothing better to do then write
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He's a mix of an OC and that one random enclave officer that stops you outside of your cell if you play the game (though that guy's a wuss)
I have an inkling that with Nim in Sarah, she is slowly transforming into an alicorn
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Na, going to nip that one in the bud. She's just changing her a little. Changing her into an alicorn would be way overboard.
Does General Autumn have Lunas sword? Because I think that would make the ending confrontation a little more exciting.