Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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Perk Credit goes to Speven
my lunch break just became more interesting
"occasionally foalish she can be."
I never know when someones trying to say foolish, or childish...
I get that it would transfer over to childish, but people use it more in context with foolish.
Nice chapter. Winthrop would also have something I'd assume. Is Sarah not finding more out about Rivet City yet and hears mention of Pinkerton?
Just because the voice doesn't say kill your loved ones doesn't mean it won't tell you to usurp them
Anyway, nice chapter, and jeez Luna, quiet down at night, some of us try to actually sleep.
You know. When i started reading this, i did not think i would like Sarah more than Ethan but you proved me wrong.
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You know, I had the same feeling... maybe it's that I've matured as a writer, or maybe it's just that she's more focused, not sure personally.
So far so good.
Personally, perks in storys are fine with me. Fallout:Equestria had them aswell and it did not break the immersion, at least not for me.
Those last three paragraphs were the perfect time to add in an innuendo!
So perfect, yet missed...
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Add? That's what they were.
Next Sarah and Luna should learn more perks of being together, if you catch my drift...
Somehow, I dread the day Luna returns to Equestria...
Happy as James is for the couple some things are just a wee bit disturbing to hear as a father.
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Ahhhh! Subtle, oh so subtle!
Android, not andriod.
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If i were to take a guess, it would probably be that Sarah has more personality than Ethan. he was all shenanigans except when he got mad then it was all hack and slash.
Don't get me wrong. the dark wanderings was one of my favorite stories but i think Sarah is probably one of my favorite characters in any HIE.(you also did a really good job with luna and Nim btw)
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Did I mention Charon?
Nim doesn't give a perception bonus,Or a INT bonus...Or a CHA bonus?
He can't complain. Sarah had to listen to an audio log of herself being made
Another good chapter.
Part of me wonders though what other perks Sarah might get the longer that Nim is in her head though. After all, having a being of such power in her head should have more effects then that. Also, why is it that I'm thinking that when the spell brings Luna back to Equestria that Sarah goes along simply because she has Nim inside her?
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Glad to hear that it's a good chapter
As for Nim pulling her along... sorry, not happening. Good idea though.
I want to see what would happen if they came across Paradise Fall, though I'm pretty sure I already know the answer.
"Yeah, just try to keep it in your sheath okay?” the woman asked as she patted Luna’s neck.
“We are not some jumpy stallion trying to stick his blade into everyone he sees,” Luna stated with a roll of her eyes.
I laughed sooo hard at this. Was it intentional?
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Yes, yes it was
Lightly touch your eyeball with your finger. Is it wet? No? You are a robot. Can you not tell due to a lack of nerve endings? You are a robot.
Or he could sign in to one of the computer terminals that still work and see if he can post a comment on 4chan by filling out the captcha correctly.
4075106 I don't think that would actually help. if i recall correct those androids are very realistic, they feel pain, bleed and can even eat and all that. Maybe if you took if an arm...?
... in the future i demand that Sarah and Ethan meet. possibly with Sparky, Luna & Nim there too.
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Did you mean take off an arm? Because that would probably kill someone in the Wasteland, so that wouldn't be an option. It has to be a non-lethal test.
4077151 Nah, it was more of a joke. I just wanted to point out that i think you would have to do something drastic to actually find out if the person is an android. But i agree, relly doing it would be stupid.
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Okay then. Though I do wonder what other perks Sarah might get from having Nim in her. After all, one cannot have a being of such power in them without it affecting them somehow...
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True, Cherchez La Femme is a definite. I'm curious about your thoughts for others, either existing or made up (Totally not a fishing for new ideas)
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Depends on how she affects Sarah being in her I suppose. Most likely ones are those that could imitate pony abilities like the toughness and strength perks. Other then that, maybe ones that do things like give her night vision? Or possibly something like Ethan's and Cassie's regeneration capabilities?
Unless human relationships place far less significance on sex then ponies.
Think you mean than.
Another well done chapter ^^ nicely done my friend :)
Hehehehehee Dang, that must have been loud! XD I love it! XD
Man this is such an awesome story, good work on it once more ^^
4085125 last time i checked having a voice in your head didnt affect your body i think it would mostly increase speech and combat (from all the advice she gave luna)
I'm I the only one who saw that innuendo?
I'm surprised Sarah hasn't stopped by the diner to pick up the Xuanlong assault rifle yet. She did complete Prime's quest after all
4553052 Not if you're talking about the same one I am.
"But this one is helpful and isn't trying to make you kill your loved ones"
...anymore...
4553052 It's right up there with keep your pride tucked In my book of things like that
Silly Sarah, you're supposed to turn in the android to Zimmer and get the upgrade, then extract his XP and get the reward from the android.
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
The voices in your head usually aren't healthy... Sure, but then again, neither is bacon, Oreos, ice cream, quadruple-hamburgers and deep fried food. Sanity, like non-hardened arteries, is overrated.
4742627 Im sensing a dirty joke in there
The setup to this clop was perfect! Luna, who had known and interacted with this separate being in her head for some time, is now going to have physical sex with her for the first time.
This is Fucking golden! So many opportunities! But then all we get is "No clop 4 u". It's like dangling a delicious candy in front of a child and throwing it in the garbage disposal, then giving them the wrapper to look at! It's not cool!
Damn, wish I could get that Perk in the actual game
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4077151 Pulse grenades don't bother people much, find your Android by zapping everyone! There's like no other use for the mines... stupid things don't even activate on Gutsy's and only work right if you suck with them...
Only because she is your loved one!
Oh-ho-ho! I think I can guess how this will be important later...
You cheeky, lampshading bastard.