Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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My favorite story updates on my birthday! Woooo!
What a badass chapter, the ending hit me so hard in the feels. I wonder what Nightie has to say about Celestia's actions.
Wow, nice "world of Cardboard" speech for Celestia. The follow-up met the expectations perfectly as well.
The feels.....
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Thank you I worked hard on it.
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In regarss to such a fine specimin of a chapter.
Yea update! a new chapter.
*reads chapter*
Stupid cliffhangers! You evil &$#%€^£ you! I will find you and......
I will force you to write MOAR!!!!
If that's ok with you of course
Damn... This is good
There's no next button!
DAMN. Well Celestia is quite scary and at least there was some kind of... reunion as the title of this chapter puts it. All in all another great one.
Meh....
A Plasma bolt would turn her into a green puddle
I wonder how Nightmare And Luna are going to interpret this new info? Next chapter I wait for you with baited breath.
> comet, which I'm pretty sure is wrong anyway, as she is in the atmosphere...whatever.
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In chronological order, because I like making bronies cry.
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Yay, someone else got that reference too!
"Hey guys! You see that legendarily pissed off god that just melted the entire army in front of us just from it's radiance?"
"Yeah, what about it?"
"Let's attack her with our hand-down equipment!"
*Roars of agreement as they charge*
With that bad guy minion logic out of the way, this chapter has been one of, if not, the most cool, and fun to read shows of concentrated pure badassery of power I have read. Or if I'm mistaken, the most memorable since a better example fails to surface in my memory. (This of course excluding those boring gods that live in that ethereal whatever outside of reality, and doing great feats of power in as unclimactic a way as can be)
And with this confession of heartfelt views (Of which I wonder what spurred Celestia to outwardly voice her feelings to the sky. Really, people speaking aloud that kind of stuff is not as normal as movies and books make it seem.) I hold my breath to see how Luna takes it, and how the Nightmare changes in light, or spite, of these new developments.
Still though, good show! I look forward to the next chapter, since holding my breath this long is really starting to hurt.
Fire can be quite pretty and deadly
Damn, Tia. Why'd you even bring an army? Was it just a formality?
That was definitely a nice read. I always love it when Luna/Celestia go full goddess and start smiting some hapless peasant armies. Not to mention the world of cardboard speech, those are always fun. Now I kind of want Luna to get one too.
Though, I just gotta say, despite Celestia's rage over Xanthos wanting to turn Luna into a puppet, isn't she guilty of the same thing? You've established in this chapter that Celestia is significantly stronger than Luna, to the point where Luna can't actually hope to stand up to her in a straight fight. So, doesn't that basically mean that Luna only has as much power as Celestia allows her, thereby pretty much making her a puppet? Even if it isn't by design it's still how it works in practice, minus the sex slavery. I dunno, I just think that if Luna could go mad/get possessed by a demon, then Tia could too, and unlike with Luna there wouldn't be anypony capable of stopping Celestia. Personally I'm more fond of the checks-and-balances idea that the princesses are mostly equal in power, and that the elements of harmony was the deciding factor. Just my two cents.
Xanthos: I HAVE AN ARMY!
Royal guard: We have a celestia...
So I was right about this spell. Huh, I wonder If they both realised that there is this weird time difference.
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I love you, I didn't even know the last one existed.
3909129 yeah, should really be a meteor.
Also, I've been seeing too much misusage of "too". "Too" can replace "also", "all so" and "as well" (and some similar phrases). It is a word used to indicate extremity of size or quantity (too big, too small) or an increase (me too). It cannot be used to describe a purpose, relationship or direction (give it to her, go to town, he is headed to the north, I am trying to help).
e.g. "I stopped going to her house because she's way too clingy"
Final Form Celestia is kind of terrifying.
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Heh, figured as much. Though I don't know if your Luna could pull it off in the Wasteland with the lack of magic (best bet would have been her assuming that form while dreamwalking in one of Sarah's dreams).
I am looking forward to how the relationship between Sarah and Luna develops though.
Now, as to the newest chapter, it was great, but there were some issues.
The bolded word should be "bearers".
I forget if this has been pointed out, but that should be "comet".
I think that you're missing "but" before the word "not" here.
You got an extra "a" there.
"modules" should be "molecules" I think.
The "bones fall with his bones" doesn't make much sense here.
That said, looking forward to the next chapter.
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That is a good point; of course, Celestia would never think about it that. Remember; she's still her sister after all. On the other hand while Celestia is stronger overall Luna has talents that she doesn't. For example, Luna is a better tactician in the heat of battle (she kind of has to be) because unlike Tia she can't just power through everything (this hasn't come up in the Wasteland yet because no situation has really called for strategy besides duck and shoot). She's also much better at math and taxes then Celestia is... as will be apparent eventually.
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Oh; now there's an idea!
As for the rest of the stuff, thanks for the catches. I was only able to put it through one set of proofreaders (the other was really busy and I didn't want to keep it sitting there for another day).
Anyways, glad you enjoyed it
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You're welcome.
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3910294 Hahaha I lost it.
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You're welcome.
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I have seen Celestia use the line about boiling tea when she could boil oceans in "The Immortal Game", not the same wording, but quite close "Centuries of boiling water for tea when I knew that I could boil the seas. Of lifting quills when I could lift mountains. Of breaking wax seals when I could break anything I please...." ya, either drawing a bit of inspiration, or a case of great minds think alike.
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Was waiting for someone to see that I love the Immortal Game so when it came time to choose what should be in my Celestia's 'world of carboard' speech I knew who I wanted to base it off of.
And then luna appears back in her body only to find sarah crying over her , screaming for her to come back......
Well, this is good. You sir, have earned yourself a fav. I look forward to more!
3909503 Yes, fire can be very beautiful, and very dangerous; that's why I work with Fire and Steel, Hammer and Anvil.
3909597 I think the army was more for mop up than anything. Besides, when has Celestia ever gone anywhere without an entourage?
3909707 Xanthos's argument is invalid
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>“Shut. Up.” Celestia’s voice, calm and controlled though it was, managed to cut off Xanthos in mid shout. “I have spent the last century boiling tea when I could have been boiling oceans. Signing treaties and laws when I could have been signing other leader’s names with their own blood as I wrote their obituaries. Breaking seals of wax when I could have been breaking continents,”
I can almost understand. Some people are just too easy to underestimate, but there's still no excuse. She's a physical goddess given form. She moves the damn sun. She moves. The damn. Sun. Uh...oops? Hahaha. This definitely holds a spot in the top five bad ass boasts I've ever heard.
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Wham! Pow! Right in the feels! You seriously just kidney punched me in the emotions :(
...Holy shit, here I am, seeing Princess Celestia as this, kind Mare who's totally not violent.
And here she is, burning an entire army alive with her angry and causing eruptions of lava and magma...
Oh damn I hope I don't make her that angry O_O
Good chapter man, this was freaking badass! :D
4330705 Dude i shat in mah pants and went to take another dump after i cleaned my butt from my previous shat
you know iv been playing to much dark souls when i go "the flame may burn strong now celestia but it will fade and only dark will remain" still damn good chapter
4330705 Um yeaaaah, Pro tip on how to do that?
DONT
PEEK
IN ON HER
WHEN
SHES HAVING
HER "SPECIAL TIME"
IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN!
"DOOOOOOOCCCCTOOOOOOOOOORRRRR!!!!!"
...*gulp* Mummy. ;-;
Jesus, since when did a "kind and benevolent" ruler burn their enemies to death or using Deatomization?
Even us humans have banned the use of fire-based weapons in combat, due to being extremely cruel. And this is humans we're talking about, the ones who constantly try to kill each other in crueller ways than the last.
Celestia and Luna have the same name for their swords?
But no matter how fast light is, it will find that darkness has been there first.
What is Luna better at than Celestia if Celestia is more powerful in magic and combat?
That was one the best curb stomps i have ever read. Great job.
To this day I still stand to reason in the main show that they severely under-power the alicorns especially Celestia and Luna.
I firmly believe the only reason Chrysalis was able to defeat Celestia. Is because Celestia was caught off guard and didn't want to MELT everything and pony around her. If she were to power up.
To see Luna so much weaker than her sister...things like that just ruin a story. Luna has nothing if not better than her sister at something.
6928349 I like to think Luna is stronger then Celestia. Mainly because, even if they aren't the same size as the sun, she still controls more stars, planets, and moons then Celestia. Even more so if the stars are fully sized.
This whole chapter felt wonderfully apocalyptic. I could see it in my mind in the style of Leiji_Matsumoto and his luscious firey doom battles...
6509617 Exactly! She would have killed everypony in the room, friend and foe alike if she had fought within her power level.
6422939 Speed and Guile maybe?
*finishes reading celestia's fighting style* .....*presses intercom to assistant* get John from the update commity...celestial needs nerfed.....badly....
Lol but to be honest I loved this XD open tiara is best tia!!!!