Luna and Nightmare Moon are transported to the Capital Wasteland during the final battle against her sister. Join them in their attempt to return home and reclaim her birthright with the help of a girl named Sarah, fresh out of Vault 101.
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Rainbow Dash promoted to: Sub-Captain.
Ed, buddy, pal of mine, you worry me sometimes. I sincerely hope our dear associate Sarah won't be getting the short end of the shaft here? You follow? That'd make me very angry... *lights flame thrower* And you wouldn't like me when I'm angry.
Judging from this chapter, I can see what going to happen. Luna and Sarah battle some shit, during the climatic moment, Twilight summon Luna and left Sarah (and possibly Nim if she inside Sarah head at that time or maybe not). Luna was pissed at Celestia for causing her to abandon Sarah and she research for spell that will allow her to go back (probably for many eons) and later return to the wastelands that is after 2 years of the Vault 87 event.
Shit is about to hit the fan .
Also, you are evil, you and your cliffhangers.
Not sure if I've said it already, but this fic has made me replay FO3 once again. Great game, but I get disappointed when I realize that Luna is not a possible companion character.
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I'll do you one better:
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so since twilight is going to summon luna "and only luna" will sara be left behind or since there mentally linked, will it summon both of them?
Loved the update. Just noticed one typo.
Blossom.
Nice chapter and I can't wait for Luna to introduce her lover to Celestia.
Well, I'm glad you did include this chapter. Alright, so you started off well; I can see how Tornado Kicker and Celestia's relationship has matured into a more steady and less secretive affair. Their banter felt natural and flowed well, and the chemistry between them was apparent. A lot of things have changed since the last Equestria chapter, some of which set up several points that you should deliver on. It was cool to see how Dash actually joining the Wonderbolts made her much more mature than in the show, and it was also cool to see a different set of friends, including Cloud Kicker. They probably won't ever be significant, but it was a nice touch. Meeting Blueblood was welcome, as well. His personality is well-rounded and much more princely than one would expect. I would've liked to learn more about his scar, but it probably is trivial. Your shining moment, pardon the pun, was meeting Shining Armor. He and Rainbow Dash felt like siblings, and I could tell that Shining dropped his professionalism just to push RD towards going for Twilight. It was a warm and tender moment, only detracted by how out of the blue it was. I understand that you skipped time, but there wasn't enough development in RD for this to seem real. All we got was hints of it from the last Equestria-centric chapter. But, it still was a fantastically written scene. This was a solid chapter that I enjoyed thoroughly. All in all, this chapter gets a You Wanna Know How I Got These Scars?/10
Imma be honest, I usually just skim through these chapters just to get the gist of what is going on.
I find myself far more invested in Sarah's and Luna's story.
And for the love of gawd, PLS let them find Fawkes!
Also, for some strange reason the site doesn't notify me correctly about your updates.
As in, I see a new chapter has been posted for one of my favorites, but it doesn't show what story updated,
so I had to read the past few chapters in bulk.
so, on the matter of time passing randomly between worlds,
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vY_Ry8J_jdw
Oh. I forgot that for once, Blueblood isn't an asshole in a fic.
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Called it motherbuckers.
I love reading these comments as an editor now, especially when I know what will happen... But I won't spill the beans
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If there's an exclamation then a name, you put a comma after the exclamation. In this instance, the comma would be after 'I won't fail you".
I saw it a few times. Minor mistake, didn't throw off the flow any. Just me nitpicking. Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Thanks for spotting that, I had a slight feeling something was off
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No problem.
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Thanks, I've been working on Celestia/Tornado Kicker and I'm glad I made it such a developed plot point
And yeah, the Wonderbolts kicked a lot of the 'hot head' out of Dashie, being in the most serious military branch in Equestria will do that to a mare. Cloud Kicker will get another few lines here or there too
Blueblood's star doesn't have a major tale behind it, but I'm sure it'll come up at some point
As for Shining advising Dash to move on Twilight, to fill you in on what you missed during the time skip, it got so bad that by the time that the last Equestria chapter happened http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/EveryoneCanSeeIt was in full effect.
Also, I like how my shining portion of the chapter was the one with the biggest issue
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Yep, being raised the right way sure has an effect on someone eh?
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Thanks for mentioning that
Another well done chapter, good show man! *claps*
Heheheh, Twidash, awesome~ :D so much!
This was an awesome chapter man, legit awesome work on it.
She quit the wonderbolts? huh... didn't think she would do that :/ hehe.
Keep it up!
Cowabunga mother fucker!
i see what you hath done here sir ed2481?
4455896 Most likely when Sarah is being captured by the Enclave. If she disappears Sarah might feel betrayed or broken.
Oh great, just how hard are we going to get hit with Murphy's law this time? I mean, you have Twilight follow-each-jot-and-tittle Sparkle here!
We sense much grief and anguish in the near future....
Keep going! ;)
Well, it seems Equestria in general is better off, Blueblood is nicer, Sunset Shimmer is Archmage and helping out, Rainbow has gotten to the level where she can Rainboom through a dragon's skull... which is FREAKING AWESOME BY THE WAY!! I can't wait to see how the summoning ritual goes and when exactly Luna gets brought back relative to the Fallout universe.
i can see were this is going.... Luna's ganna kill a bitch when she gets summoned back
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Murphy? What's she doing out of Chicago?
This is one of my favorite chapters, I liked the way every character was portrayed, I didn't wince reading Rainbow's lines and I finally got the "By Luna" part.
4459724 She musta had a terrible time getting all that brain matter out of her coat though. Prolly smelled like sewage for a month.
TwiDash ........ Gah!
Well at very least I can enjoy most of the rest
The Celestia relationship with Tornado seems to be progressing at an accurate rate of how they see one another.
To be honest I liked the idea of having Luna's departure sever Nim from Luna thus leaving Nim in Sarah's mind. Therefore not having the Elements purge her existence from Luna, thus she never looks like S1 Luna.
I know what's coming and it's gonna be ugly, but I'm gonna read it anyway for the drama.
Ok I just have to give my two cents here. *Start Rant*
What is with all of the gay shipping? One lesbian relationship ok whatever, then two and I go ok that is getting stupidly redundant and a little contrived, then three and I go seriously? , and now four and all I can think about is HOW IS THIS RACE EVEN EXISTING If everyone is gay? Also, I hate mane six shipping. What is wrong with just having good old friendshipping? *End Rant*
4457556 *Brings out can openers*
We'll see about that...
So me and my brother were contemplating for five minutes how one would
since humans can't turn into grammar
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Good thing she is not a human then :P
Uh-oh...
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I WANNA CRY RIGHT NOW!!!!!
4468018 I completely agree, it is getting a bit much isnt it? There has been what, 1, 2 straight ships in the flood of gays?
I have noticed that you do not write out the sex scenes anymore. Would have said something before but forgot and it really wasn't important. Just a quip.
thousand years of ruling with military in mind and stuck with basic crossbow?