When a human is thrust into Equestria on a whim, he struggles to fit in with the locals of this strange land and tries to figure out how to get home, making new friends along the way.
you whern't kidding about short...
but its all cool, just try to keep a good pace, like update every monday and friday or once a week if you're up to it.
You should continue producing this, looks interasting, traackiing.
Thanks for being understanding. I just have a LOT of serious and bad things happening to me. I actually only had 10 minutes to write the first chapter. but to day I have a huge chunk of free time, so I should get chapter two and maybe chapter three out.
Rainbow is a bitch. Twilight, is best pony!
Naah, she isn't a bitch, all she need is an action from Kyle what makes her loyal to him - like saving her life or something.
So, let's see what will hapen!
Yeah, she isn't supposed to be a bitch. She is having mixed feelings towards Kyle (Me) because she saved his life, but he is some strange creature that fell from the sky, so of course she doesn't trust him (Me).
That was exactly what I meant! :)
Very nice, very nice, make more!
I think I might need to take a break, I'm starting to feel very ill, and all this writing isn't helping. It is fun and all, but I think I had best go lay down. I might write ONE MORE chapter before that.
Okay, nobody want's a good writer being sick!
Humpfh, may I ask you about Rainbow?
When will she appear again?
Soon. Lets just say that She may hate me even more after what is going to happen, or she may begin to trust me. I took some medicine, and I am feeling better. I am writing the fourth chapter now.
You attracted my attention!
And now: waiting for the new chapter...
Y U NO WRITE FASTER???
*engaging audio output system*
wait, do what now? Was that your reaction to the end?
Yes, that was indeed.
You should have heard it...
An now I can't wait to read the next chapter!
D'aaawww, so sweet of him!
Oh shit! Horse shit!
Evil stalker or crazy lover?
More or less of a secret admirer who takes WAY too many risks. He is actually a friend of mine, who i decided to put in the story... As a pony of course.
chapters out the ass like a motherfucker
Well i have quick wits, which allow me to carve out an entire story in one day, and I am a VERY fast typer.
And now, I'm out of words.
First I was all like then I was then then then I had some toast. This story is better with toast
Man, I had -just- finished reading chapter 5 when it updated. >MFW
Oh come on!
Well, I am pretty quick. Just a little under an hour for 500 words... With about 10 minutes worth of distractions. I finished pretty much every one of these chapters in an hour or less.
I told you, they are my specialty.
lol a me gusta gif file XD
That was a short wait and a short chapter!
Let's see what will happen now...
Yeah, that was supposed to be an "Aftermath" chapter. A short one just to "Play off" the previous chapter. ONWARDS TO MORE SHENANIGANS!
I need the urban dictionary now....
nice idea with the shoes he is part pegasis now
Oh man oh maaan oh maaaaaan!!!
I'm gonna herp-a-derp if you don't continue it!
I just KNEW that cliffhanger would get you.
Moar cannon preparing to fi.....y'know what just keep em coming at this pace and it won't even need to be fired.
green eyes? i cant remember
Sorry, it is a very subtle reference to an older chapter. You have to really pay attention. Let me refer you to Chapter 5, and read throught it, VERY carefully.
Confusing name huh?
Nonono it's like a breeze in your face, then an EXPLOSION! And the power of the wind sweeps you away!
Erm... OK? I am just bad with names, and your name sounds like something out of a Greek play.
And why Greek? O_o
Because Greek plays have a lot of strange and complicated, and sometimes very cryptic names. Like Antigone, Polyneices, Etc.
But think about it: My OC's name is the standalone description of his love for speed, the flying!
What his cutiemark represents too...
I'm the Doctor.
And the Tardis is taking us somewhere.
Just wait and see!
I really admire/envy your writing talent, you put so much into so little chapters while not making seem forced or rushed. I mean, it's taking me FOREVER () to write the SECOND CHAPTER in my fic.
Why thank you. I think the literary and linguistic skill came from advancing my reading skill so far, that I could read college-level books in 4th grade.
Severe diabetic reaction.
is she nude?
>>5018850188 Churro, iz gud! Also your writing skills are good.
Oh you pervert. But no. We will all see in the morning. I am way too tired to keep writing. I have been up for about 42 hours. The first chapter was uploaded at 3:30am USA EST. It is currently 10:00PM. I think I am done. I feel sick, and all the typing is making my carpal tunnel act up. I might upload the next chapter, but probably not.
>>5020750207 dude.... Why the hell did you type all this up in one sitting with all that shit piling up on you? Take a break. Sleep plox.
if this is conversion bueruo I will hit you
Ahhh, this is nothing. If you wanna see me do something worthy of a "What the hell", then I will stay up for another 3 days typing. I have enough Mountain Dew. But I'm not gonna do that, because I don't feel like feeling like I am going to die.
>>5023350233 i stayed up for three days typing once, for largely different reasons. i dont understand how people do that regularly. I always assumed that people who did that on purpose were crazy. Seriously though, i really DONT wanna see what happens after you stay up another three days. Im sure it would be a fun learning experience though.
HAH! Now THAT was an unexpected change of pace!
......what happen to the pony wwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaa
Don't worry. The Doctor will be back soon, and we will go back home.
dont tell me rainnow is is great granma
No. I am trying to keep this story rated Everyone.
OH LORDY INDEED!
HO-BOY! The more I read, the more addicted I am to this fic!
Still, I gotta call bo-schitt on the fight. I don't care if you're friggin' Mike Tyson, if you get punched in the face you'll at least get stunned. Same goes for the gut unless you've got a really big six-pack. If you ask me, it would've been more believable if the adrenaline gave him a speed advantage rather than turn him into Chuck Norris.
WOOPS Ya went an fucked it up now bro.(refering to the main character, not the author)
I think I know what will happen...
But as a character of the story... Well, I wont say anything! :P
...this is the one of the most random fan fics i have ever read
Actually, that was referring to something that happened to me. Only it was one kid who was trying to kick my ass, not three. But greasers always hung out together. Whenever my adrenaline is pumping, I never feel any pain, but don't worry, it will all catch up to me soon.
Erm... How did the main character fuck it up?
Lol i'm loving this story so far and the doctor whooves appearnce made it even better.
Yeah, it's hard to write about time-travel in such a short form.
Forward to the ADVENTURE!
I wonder about how will I reapper next time...
Ha i'm really loving this story bro! can't wait to see what else kyle gets up to!
Please let it be something that includes the cutie mark crusaders...
This will be done. I could totally just try to coach them, and they balls it up every time. OHYUS.
I understood EVERYTHING!
>>5071650716 I understand having a bit of an emotional breakdown and forsaking common sense in favor of staying on his own world but in doing so he got caught and managed to drag his friends with him (im assuming they ran out to save him and ended up getting caught themselves. I may not have been paying enough attention while reading, which is known to happen, so i apologize if i seem misinformed).
You hit the nail on the head. That is EXACTLY what happened. Cookie for you.
Y U NO CAN LAND SAFE?
Also, it can't be too difficult... To fix... A roof.. *gulp*
Mah gaddamn ruf! Yo bruke it! Fiex et nao!
Lol looks like a different languege but...meh *shrugs*
The TARDIS is taking them somewhere? I know almost nothing about Dr. Who but that doesn't seem normal.
No, it's normal, search for the episode when the TARDIS gets a body.
It's in the 6th season I think.
HOORAY FOR CONFUSION!
Too much is focused on the fact the main character is a human, and everyone else in a pony....is that the only reason you wrote this?
Wait, I'll answer that:
I'm not THAT addicted to her!
You are now. MUAHAHAHAHA!
You planned this!
trolling your readers now are we?
Also, Dash is Zephyr's fetish!
I'm not just a reader, I'm IN the story!