you whern't kidding about short...

but its all cool, just try to keep a good pace, like update every monday and friday or once a week if you're up to it.

You should continue producing this, looks interasting, traackiing.

>>4907449074

Thanks for being understanding. I just have a LOT of serious and bad things happening to me. I actually only had 10 minutes to write the first chapter. but to day I have a huge chunk of free time, so I should get chapter two and maybe chapter three out.

Rainbow is a bitch. Twilight, is best pony!

>>4936249362

Naah, she isn't a bitch, all she need is an action from Kyle what makes her loyal to him - like saving her life or something.

So, let's see what will hapen!

:)

>>4938349383

Yeah, she isn't supposed to be a bitch. She is having mixed feelings towards Kyle (Me) because she saved his life, but he is some strange creature that fell from the sky, so of course she doesn't trust him (Me).

>>4947449474

That was exactly what I meant! :)

Very nice, very nice, make more!

>>4955549555

I think I might need to take a break, I'm starting to feel very ill, and all this writing isn't helping. It is fun and all, but I think I had best go lay down. I might write ONE MORE chapter before that.

>>4955849558

Okay, nobody want's a good writer being sick!

Humpfh, may I ask you about Rainbow?

When will she appear again?

>>4956149561

Soon. Lets just say that She may hate me even more after what is going to happen, or she may begin to trust me. I took some medicine, and I am feeling better. I am writing the fourth chapter now.

>>4956349563

Good!

You attracted my attention!

And now: waiting for the new chapter...

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Y U NO WRITE FASTER???

xD

*processing*

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*engaging audio output system*

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*ready*

D'AAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!

>>4962649626

wait, do what now? Was that your reaction to the end?

>>4962749627

Yes, that was indeed.

You should have heard it...

An now I can't wait to read the next chapter!

D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

D'aaawww, so sweet of him!

Oh shit! Horse shit!

Evil stalker or crazy lover?

>>4976249762

More or less of a secret admirer who takes WAY too many risks. He is actually a friend of mine, who i decided to put in the story... As a pony of course.

chapters out the ass like a motherfucker

>>4977149771

Well i have quick wits, which allow me to carve out an entire story in one day, and I am a VERY fast typer.

And now, I'm out of words.

gj!

moar pl0x!

First I was all like then I was then then then I had some toast.  This story is better with toast

Man, I had -just- finished reading chapter 5 when it updated. >MFW

Another cliffhanger???

Oh come on!

>>4983649836

Well, I am pretty quick. Just a little under an hour for 500 words... With about 10 minutes worth of distractions. I finished pretty much every one of these chapters in an hour or less.

>>4983949839

I told you, they are my specialty.

Problem?

>>4984149841

okay.jpg

>>4981849818

Wait, what?

megusta.gif

lol a me gusta gif file XD

That was a short wait and a short chapter!

Let's see what will happen now...

>>4989149891

Yeah, that was supposed to be an "Aftermath" chapter. A short one just to "Play off" the previous chapter. ONWARDS TO MORE SHENANIGANS!

>>4989349893

Sheni-w00t?

I need the urban dictionary now....

nice idea with the shoes he is part pegasis now

Oh man oh maaan oh maaaaaan!!!

I'm gonna herp-a-derp if you don't continue it!

>>4993749937

I just KNEW that cliffhanger would get you.

Moar cannon preparing to fi.....y'know what just keep em coming at this pace and it won't even need to be fired.

green eyes? i cant remember

>>4997449974

Sorry, it is a very subtle reference to an older chapter. You have to really pay attention. Let me refer you to Chapter 5, and read throught it, VERY carefully.

Whohuhuuhuhuhhuhuuuhhhhuuhhhuhuhhhuh!

http://cache.ohinternet.com/images/thumb/2/2d/Trollface_HD.png/618px-Trollface_HD.png

Confusing name huh?

Nonono it's like a breeze in your face, then an EXPLOSION! And the power of the wind sweeps you away!

>>5010050100

Erm... OK? I am just bad with names, and your name sounds like something out of a Greek play.

>>5010350103

U JELLY?

And why Greek? O_o

>>5010950109

Because Greek plays have a lot of strange and complicated, and sometimes very cryptic names. Like Antigone, Polyneices, Etc.

>>5010350103

But think about it: My OC's name is the standalone description of his love for speed, the flying!

What his cutiemark represents too...

So,

PROBLEM?

I'm the Doctor.

*shades*

And the Tardis is taking us somewhere.

w0ot?

>>5014250142

w00t indeed.

Just wait and see!

I really admire/envy your writing talent, you put so much into so little chapters while not making seem forced or rushed. I mean, it's taking me FOREVER () to write the SECOND CHAPTER in my fic.

>>5016550165

Why thank you. I think the literary and linguistic skill came from advancing my reading skill so far, that I could read college-level books in 4th grade.

Severe diabetic reaction.

>>5018750187

Uh... What?  

is she nude?

>>5018850188 Churro, iz gud! Also your writing skills are good.

>>5020250202

Oh you pervert. But no. We will all see in the morning. I am way too tired to keep writing. I have been up for about 42 hours. The first chapter was uploaded at 3:30am USA EST. It is currently 10:00PM. I think I am done. I feel sick, and all the typing is making my carpal tunnel act up. I might upload the next chapter, but probably not.

>>5020550205

Well, thanks!

>>5020750207 dude.... Why the hell did you type all this up in one sitting with all that shit piling up on you? Take a break. Sleep plox.

if this is conversion bueruo I will hit you

>>5022150221

Nope.

>>5022050220

Ahhh, this is nothing. If you wanna see me do something worthy of a "What the hell", then I will stay up for another 3 days typing. I have enough Mountain Dew. But I'm not gonna do that, because I don't feel like feeling like I am going to die.

>>5023350233 i stayed up for three days typing once, for largely different reasons. i dont understand how people do that regularly. I always assumed that people who did that on purpose were crazy. Seriously though, i really DONT wanna see what happens after you stay up another three days. Im sure it would be a fun learning experience though.

HAH! Now THAT was an unexpected change of pace!

......what happen to the pony wwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaa

>>5029850298

Don't worry. The Doctor will be back soon, and we will go back home.

dont tell me rainnow is is great granma

>>5032450324

No. I am trying to keep this story rated Everyone.

OH LORDY INDEED!

HO-BOY! The more I read, the more addicted I am to this fic!

Still, I gotta call bo-schitt on the fight. I don't care if you're friggin' Mike Tyson, if you get punched in the face you'll at least get stunned. Same goes for the gut unless you've got a really big six-pack. If you ask me, it would've been more believable if the adrenaline gave him a speed advantage rather than turn him into Chuck Norris.

WOOPS Ya went an fucked it up now bro.(refering to the main character, not the author)

I think I know what will happen...

But as a character of the story... Well, I wont say anything! :P

...this is the one of the most random fan fics i have ever read

XD

thats all

XD

>>5033950339

Actually, that was referring to something that happened to me. Only it was one kid who was trying to kick my ass, not three.  But greasers always hung out together. Whenever my adrenaline is pumping, I never feel any pain, but don't worry, it will all catch up to me soon.

>>5040350403

Erm... How did the main character fuck it up?

Lol i'm loving this story so far and the doctor whooves appearnce made it even better.

Painas Cupcake.

CUP-CAKE

Yeah, it's hard to write about time-travel in such a short form.

Forward to the ADVENTURE!

Allons-y!

I wonder about how will I reapper next time...

Ha i'm really loving this story bro! can't wait to see what else kyle gets up to!

Please let it be something that includes the cutie mark crusaders...

>>5082750827

This will be done. I could totally just try to coach them, and they balls it up every time. OHYUS.

I understood EVERYTHING!

>>5071650716 I understand having a bit of an emotional breakdown and forsaking common sense in favor of staying on his own world but in doing so he got caught and managed to drag his friends with him (im assuming they ran out to save him and ended up getting caught themselves. I may not have been paying enough attention while reading, which is known to happen, so i apologize if i seem misinformed).

>>5091250912

You hit the nail on the head. That is EXACTLY what happened. Cookie for you.

>>5091450914Muffin?

>>5092050920

Sure.

TARDIS!

Y U NO CAN LAND SAFE?

Also, it can't be too difficult... To fix... A roof.. *gulp*

Mah gaddamn ruf! Yo bruke it! Fiex et nao!

Lol looks like a different languege but...meh *shrugs*

The TARDIS is taking them somewhere? I know almost nothing about Dr. Who but that doesn't seem normal.

>>5117251172

No, it's normal, search for the episode when the TARDIS gets a body.

It's in the 6th season I think.

HOORAY FOR CONFUSION!

Too much is focused on the fact the main character is a human, and everyone else in a pony....is that the only reason you wrote this?

Wait, I'll answer that:

Oh come on!

I'm not THAT addicted to her!

>>5137151371

You are now. MUAHAHAHAHA!

>>5137751377

Yooouuu!!!!

You planned this!

>>5138451384

Problem?

Woo update!

>>5140451404

trolling your readers now are we?

Iz gud!

Also, Dash is Zephyr's fetish!

>>5141051410

I'm not just a reader, I'm IN the story!

:P