CHAPTER 12
I sat there, drinking my Pepsi, wondering where everyone else was.
I looked out the door, and saw a girl with blonde hair looking lost. What the heck, might as well help out whilst I'm here.
"Hey there. Need any he- DERPY!"
She spun around at the sound of my voice, and ran to me.
"Kyle! Where are we? When are we?"
"Umm... We are on Earth, sometime in the 1960's."
"So, what do we do?"
"Apparently, the Angels sent us all to the same year. Now we find Zephyr and Rainbow Dash."
Great. More wandering and searching.
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Me and Derpy were supposed to have met back up at the gas station almost 2 hours after we had found each other. But as I walked past the malt shop I noticed when I first arrived here, I saw that those greasers were harassing Derpy. Great.
I walked over, and saw they were starting to try to coax her out of her . Not good...
I looked at the now-empty glass Pepsi bottle I had, and flipped it over so I held the neck instead of the body of the bottle. I looked back at the greasers. One stuck his hand up Derpy's grey tanktop.
Big mistake, sicko.
I ran over and smashed the bottle over one of their heads. He fell to the ground with a mighty THUD.
"You just messed up, punk." A bigger greaser said to me. Who are you calling a punk?
"You messed with my friends. That is the last mistake you will ever make." I cracked my knuckles. They could see the angry fire in my eyes.
That scared the remaining two. They took a step back. "Umm... H-hey buddy, we don't want no trouble."
"Well you found it."
I grabbed the big lug by the arm and spun his arm around, flipping him over. He hit the ground, and that knocked the wind out of him. The other punched me in the gut. I felt nothing due to the rush of adrenaline I was under the spell of.
I looked at him. I slowly walked towards him. He punched me in the face. I didn't feel a thing. He punched me again. Nothing. This went on for about another second before I grabbed him by his collar and yanked his face close to mine.
"Now, here is what you will do. You will wait here. When your buddies wake up, you will all go home, and think about what you did, and what happened. Are you going to do anything like that again?"
"N-n-n-no sir."
"Good. Now, where do you want it?"
"Wha-" is all he could say. I punched him square in the eye. He was out like a light.
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Derpy was walking with me again, as to prevent another accident (And to assure I don't kill anyone in a blind rage.)
"Umm... Thanks for saving me back there."
"Don't mention it."
I noticed a small lock of rainbow colored hair flow into a doorway. I ran up and looked to see where it had entered. It was a little town house. I looked on the mailbox to see who lived there.
"James Riggleman"
OH LORDY.
"This is my grandpa's house."
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Don't worry. The Doctor will be back soon, and we will go back home.
dont tell me rainnow is is great granma
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No. I am trying to keep this story rated Everyone.
OH LORDY INDEED!
HO-BOY! The more I read, the more addicted I am to this fic!
Still, I gotta call bo-schitt on the fight. I don't care if you're friggin' Mike Tyson, if you get punched in the face you'll at least get stunned. Same goes for the gut unless you've got a really big six-pack. If you ask me, it would've been more believable if the adrenaline gave him a speed advantage rather than turn him into Chuck Norris.
I think I know what will happen...
But as a character of the story... Well, I wont say anything! :P
...this is the one of the most random fan fics i have ever read
XD
thats all
XD
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Actually, that was referring to something that happened to me. Only it was one kid who was trying to kick my ass, not three. But greasers always hung out together. Whenever my adrenaline is pumping, I never feel any pain, but don't worry, it will all catch up to me soon.
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Erm... How did the main character fuck it up?
HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!
Yeah, I gatta call Mary Sue one the fight.
Sorry. :/
Confound that doctor... messing with everyone..
This story is poorly written, has severe pacing problems, and numerous plot holes.
However, I will keep reading out of curiosity.
OHHHH SHITTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!
Great I gotta take out my time paradox book...
Looks Through Shelves
Aha! Here it is!
A theoretical paradoxical situation that happened because of the time travel. The time traveler went to the past, and does something that would prevent him from time travel in the first place. If he does not go back in time, he does not do anything that would prevent his traveling to the past, so time travel would be possible for him. However, if he goes back in time and does something that would prevent the time travel, he will not go back in time. Thus each possibility seems to imply its own negation - a type of logical paradox.
A typical example of this kind is the grandfather paradox, where a person goes back in time to kill his grandfather before he had any biological descendant. If they succeed, one of their parents would never exist and they themselves would never exist either. This would make it impossible for them to go back in time in the first place, making them unable to kill their grandfather, who would continue to produce offspring and restart the situation. But if they fail, their grandfather would be alive and produce offspring, one of whom would eventually conceive the time traveler and the whole scenario would start over.
Alright, now I'm done. Can't read this.
*face plant* good god... my head.. someone give me the license plate to the truck that ran me over... b/c that was too fast!
I liked how Kyle saved Derpy.
I know this story is old, but holy shit this pacing is crap.
coax her out of her?