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A bit belated but I want to wish you a happy year's anniversary for this story, Drefsab. Few ship fics are as high quality as this one, and it's always obvious that you put a lot of work and love into it. Keep up the good work.
Yay!
For real, dude, I am so happy with the way things are working out in this story. You've taken what most stories fumble into a ridiculous mess, a threesome situation, and turned it into something believable and sweet. Xenophillia jacked that up big time. More than that, the sex feels organic to the story, not tacked on or gratuitous like most. Hell, we haven't had any in, what, 4-5 chapters?
This right here is the best 2nd-person romance fic on the site. Any idea when we can expect the thrilling conclusion?
So looking forward to the next chapter. I can practically taste it.
Seconded; this is one of my favorites here on FimFiction.
I just noticed that it had a TVtropes page... You've made it big, congrats man!
Also, great chapter, as always.
Well, after a death at the 172 minute mark of a 3 hour Path of Exile race, this is exactly what I needed. I even got quite a bit of the best OC EVER dispensing his sage advise. Thanks for the chapter Dresfab.
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Why thank you
I'm just glad that people enjoy it. It's certainly been a labor of love.
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Actually, I think the last sex scene was back in...23? So yeah, 4 chapters. Funny how sex has kinda faded into a once-in-a-great-while sort of thing. I think it's better this way.
I have 2 more chapters planned, with maybe an epilogue after that. Not sure yet. It may end up being 3 and an epilogue, depending on how this all pans out.
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Hooray, I'm an internet D-List Celebrity! Surely I will be drowning in bitches and overpriced champagne soon!
But yeah, it's pretty cool. It's mostly thanks to Abstract Indigo.
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Ouch. Iron mode, or Hardcore, or whatever it's called in PoE?
And Pipe Wrench thanks ya for da kind words, even if ya are a funny-lookin' human, pal.
GAH. Ends right before the big reveal I’ve been waiting for. A POX ON YOU.
Oh, and wonderful chapter full of Flutterwin, BTW. I love how you remain realistic (or at least, believable) without delving into pessimism, as is all too easy to do. One reason why this is such a standout series on this site.
I must say.That was handled beautifully...
My only regrets is that I can't get naked and make love to this fic.
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But you can! All it requires is a printer, some lubrication (preferably bacon grease), and several hundred band-aids to cover the papercuts.
I BELIEVE IN YOU.
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Some characters still need to be slapped a bit for being so stupid. Metaphorically slapped of course. And you're a bastard for that cliffhanger. Why would you fail to include dramatic music? It completely ruins it!
Now let us never speak of it again. At least, until we next speak of it.
Good god this is brilliant. I can't get over how you managed to write a story in 2nd person. Not a one shot, mind you, but a full blown story!
That, is a true measure of writing talent. This truly is one of the best HiE fics on this sight. So glad I came across it!
Well, this chapter came just at the right time, between endless hours of hardcore studying !
I'm so glad things turn out quite well for the Protagonist and our adorable Fluttershy, and I'm looking forward for some more Marshmallow.
Can't wait to get more of that awesome story ! Keep on that good writing of yours ! (Not sure if that's gramatically correct, but you've got the Idea :) )
A single like and a favorite can't even express how much I love this fic...
That cliffhanger!
So this is it huh. At least this ended a lot cleaner then most break ups. No threesome family couple generic happy ending for this story. When you started this did you flip-flop on the outcome of what was going to happen? Fluttershy stays or this.
Amazing chapter I hope everything works out with Rarity
AGHH CLIFFHANGER oh well i'll be sleeping until next chapter very good work my man here's moustache
Brilliant, as always! You really know how to wright. This fic is one of the best on this site, imo.
2484948 That would be hardcore. All the race events they have on Path are like that. It's entirely free to play and not pay to win with their in game shop being only cosmetics. Basically the spiritual successor to Diablo 2. Highly recommended.
A shame it's drawing to an end, but like all good things..
Wonderful story, wonderful depictions, easily tied for best MLP FanFic ever imho.
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I love Hack 'n Slash/ARPG (whatever you wanna call 'em) games. I play the hell out of Torchlight 2, I find it way more fun than D3.
I may have to give PoE a try at some point.
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If you liked Torchlight 2 and hated Diablo 3 then you would probably like PoE. The game has a crazy amount of depth and the designers are patching in new stuff/fixes all the time. If your interested hit me up for some advice cause there is no respecing in this game. If you completely slaughter your build beyond repair, then its time to re-roll. Then again the learning process is part of the fun!
Yet another great chapter!
Edit: That was 10k words? I had that read in under 10 minutes. You sir, are a damn good storyteller!
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Every new chapter I read makes me wonder why I'm continuing the abomination of a story I'm writing.
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Dude, don't get discouraged. I read some of the best fics on this site, and I always feel inadequate. You gotta push past it, bro. Don't try to be better author than them, just be a better author.
If nothing else, if I find out you quit, I'll smoke the dogshit outta you.
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Thank you Drill Sergeant!
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I especially love reading this story because Mr. Protagonist Guy thinks so much like me sometimes, it's like you secretly intended it to be me. ;o
Loving this so much my man. Been here since the beginning.
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Well, like any actual, realistic, good relationship, sex is only a component, not the entire focus.
I. Am deeply angered. By the cliffhanger.
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Relax, it was a one-off.
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I understand the sentiment, and indeed, I'd actually tend to agree. 2nd person is a strange story medium; even more so when that 2nd person story tries to give personality and character to what is, essentially, an audience-insert protagonist.
As I've said from the beginning, though: This story has been, more than anything, my best attempt at exactly that. I will readily admit that it's less "this person is you" and more "you are this person" (if such a thing can really be explained properly), but I'm quite happy with how it's turned out. I've never seen a 2nd person story where the protagonist has a defined personality.
I admit it's probably not the optimal narrative style, but I wouldn't change it if I could. S&B has been an experiment; the fact that many people seem to enjoy it despite the 2nd person narrative makes me very happy
Keep up the great work. Would leave something more substantial but I've got to go soon.
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The one I had pretty much looked like that. I actually took my nice $50 watch to Basic with me, thinking it would be fine. Yeah...not so much. Pretty much ruined that sucker in a week. Got a cheap-o that lasted me forever after that.
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Luna mid-dream blowjob is now my headcanon.
Glad to see you're enjoying the story so far!
Comment no. 28 and I have finally caught up!! Glad to see the Fluttershy conflict is somewhat resolved, but am slightly disappointed that in ended before we saw her reaction to the necklace.
I would've been through this quicker if I didn't have to move bases for further training and spend the last two days doing admin. What fun!!!
I'm just going to say... ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!