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Am I the only one who cant wait for the proposal? because I cant see that going anyplace but a bad one.
Gahhh! friggin propose already!
Good chapter by the way
Pipe and his wife are the best OCs in this fic, don't let anyone say different.
That was 15K words? They just flew by :/
1969078 I'm with you on that one. It's gonna be messy
Hoo boy. I like where this is going.
this fic just gets better i give you A MOUSTACHE
Great chapter! So we've got the conforntation with Cashmere AND the proposal coming up. I look forward to more very soon!
Yeah, sucks to be him. At least once the Cashmere stuff is put to rest, they can figure out what to do with Fluttershy. I mean Anon is a nice guy, but I kinda think that he is a little to giving, if he wants something for himself he should go get it. There's no pleasant way of saying, "I don't think you fit in with my plans." His only solutions without becoming an asshole is to try and set her up with someone else or talk to Rarity.
1969078
Yeah, I agree that diabetes inducing marshmallowy proposal needs to happen already.
My reaction when I found this had updated...
The confrontation with "Cashew" is coming up.
And honestly, Pipe reminds me of a friend of mine. Same TMI! type behavior, very similar personality and accent's kinda close.
One thing I noticed:
- shouldn't that be "mare"?
Lovely flashback too!
1969249
My thoughts exactly. X3
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I'm not entirely sure what it was specifically about this chapter, but it felt so... relaxing? Like, everything's at a time of ease? I don't know, I mean, really, only 3 things happened in this chapter. Each one highlighted some kind of problem, but it all felt so nonchalant. Which is good, but I was just taken aback after it was over and I reflected on what I just read.
There was just barely more bad situations discussed than good ones in this chapter, but something about it just made me feel like everything is going to be fine even after it all boils over. It's wonderful really.
Drefsab, I'm glad I'm following you, pal. You've crafted something really mysterious in this chapter. Maybe it's the calm before the storm...
1969249
Pipe and Da Missus thank you for your kind words
1969897
I will accept your mustache and raise you a top hat! Though there's no top hat emoticon. Just pretend Spike is wearing a top hat.
1970985
You know, I debate this in my head every time I use a word like that. Personally, I think "woman" and "lady" are fine; Rarity refers to herself as a lady, right? Just because they also use 'mare' doesn't mean they can throw in 'woman' or something similar. But then, that's my person headcanon. YMMV.
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I think your link is broken
1974161
Good! It was supposed to be. Half of the chapter involved a significant moment in Rarity and the protag's relationship, and the other half was discussing the future with either Pipe and Da Missus, or Rarity and Fluttershy. It's meant to be relaxing. Somewhat, anyway. Maybe 'contemplative' is a better word? I like that word. Let's go with that.
Calm before the storm? I'd say you wouldn't be too far off. Hope you've enjoyed relaxing chapters, 'cause shit's about to kick off in the next one...
Oh, and thanks to everyone who's left a comment saying they're enjoying the story. It's always very appreciated.
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Contemplative is close enough, It just had this strange air about it. It felt like reading a chapter of Xenophilia: FT. You know what I mean? You know the story and what's happened, and now all there is is just more chapters, tales and happenings with the characters in that world. That's what this felt like. It was very nice. Airy, a fun conversation with Pipe, a fantastic flashback scene (very much reminded me of Preggity, so kudos), more of the regular ramblings about Cashmere from Rarity, Shy and the protag... Just right and nice.
I'm so eager and terrified to see what this storm brings. You're such a tease, pal.
I think we're all going to miss this story very, very much (this is Xenophilia all over again)... But I think we will certainly enjoy what little time we all have left with it.
A bit pre-emptive, but thank you for writing this story, Drefsab.
1974271
It's been my pleasure writing it! Thank you for enjoying it so much, that's all I wanted to do: entertain people.
I've never read Xenophilia, so I can't comment on it, but it sounds like a good story. I might have to check it out.
1974279
It's quite cloppy in places, but there's a lot of character development and world building in there as well, and it's worth reading just for the latter two.
And stop teasing us damnit!
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1969078 Agreed. I think Fluttershy is gonna get the short end of the stick here.
I can't wait for the next one I hope it doesn't end soon because this is what I wait for when I get updates .
1978006
I've been asked this quite a bit, and my answer still remains: I have no idea. lol. I love writing and I'd like to write something else, maybe an entirely different type of story with a different narrative (like I did with The Grey, I need to finish that some time...), but nothing's set in stone. We'll see.
You have this all set up for a few things and I'm too tired to tell where it's going. Good set up chapter! Building drama, so many thing that could go wrong, so many that could go right, hell, there's even some down right out of no where things that could surprise everyone involved! I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
1979355
So basically you love writing and such but you're not about to claim that you're going to write fic after fic after fic when you're done here.
1979728
Pretty much. I do enjoy writing, but it takes a long time to get it done. I find myself having less time lately with work and home life and such, but I still do what I can.
i see what you did there
1980371
Wha?
Hmm, the protagonist's feelings with Fluttershy obviously don't match up with Rarity's feelings. Does make proposing awkward.
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capĂtulo es bueno
Drefsab.
You terrible man.
I hope you're happy!
2007306
That depends on what I'm supposed to be happy about.
Because of you I've...
Been obsessed with this fic since last spring.
A Human x Pony romance of all things!
And yet you made this work somehow.
So now I decided to watch the end unfold.
I salute you and this marvelous story.
2007323
Well thank you! I'm glad I could expand your horizons and make the idea of a human x pony story work. I've enjoyed writing it as much as you've enjoyed reading it. Thanks for being a loyal reader for all this time, through the highs and the lows.
Oh good, now I have my drink in my nose. If Pipe doesn't refer to "Candy Ass" at some point in the future just for laughs then I'll be sorely disappointed.
And as usualy, whenever she's brought up in such a manner, now I want the story to explore Celestia's personal life. Damnit.
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Tis true, I will be looking forward towards that decision, writers such as these are almost infinity impossible to come by nowadays
I am kind of surprised that having a conversation with Fluttershy about his announcement hasn't been brought in as an option... Either it would cause a new bit of adversity in the relationship(s?) to overcome or it could cement the marriage either way.
Settling vendettas, ending a threesome, and starting a life of wed-lock.
I wonder how they'll intermingle.
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Well thank you very much! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'd say you've a bit of catching up to do, though I admire your courage in doing so
Thanks for the kind words!
Wonderful chapter. Unfortunately I can't write about it now. Time constraints. Tell you what, I'll read both of the new chapters today, and then drop a review of all of 'em tomorrow. How's that?
Yeah, and I know just the pony....
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Shy needs to hurry up and find another pony to date. Doesn't mean she still can't put on a show with Rarity though.....
Ah, the "Yellow Rose" of Texas. Loved that barmaid.
Rarity always struck me as a wait-for-marriage kinda gal. It's only proper, ya know.
It's so saccharine and yet I love every ounce of it.
Though I have to say, it felt like an odd transition going from the touching flashback, to the bar scene, to picking up where we left off in chapter 22. Nothing bad about the sections themselves, just the feeling of moving from a sweet touching moment, to relationship woes, then shifting to dealing with Cash felt a bit disconnected, though that may have been completely intentional. Sorry if I'm not making much sense.
Ya know, usually clop scenes are supposed to bring arousal to the reader (I say usually because not everyone does get aroused by them) Oddly enough, the scene in he flash back, only made me feel emotional. It was actually rather touching in it's own way and the pillow talk after so to speak was even more so, even brought a tear to my eye. You've actually made me appreciate and like Rarity much more because of it.
Double check me if I'm wrong, but if a character speaks for more than one paragraph, doesn't the second paragraph get a starting quotation mark?
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"You know this was orginally