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My morning.
She just got better.
*WARNING - APPROACHING SEXY TIMES AHEAD*
Brilliant chapter!
So glad to see this out, fantastic chapter
ok.. that's it.. cashmere's a bitch like no other (i started to warm up to her, but that's over with now).. where did she even get the aetherweave?
but seriously great chapter
i have to be up all night because my dog is whelping right now. thank GOD for this. gives me somthing to read. thank you so much ^_^
Congratulations, you're making me hate Cashmere even more
sometimes I wish something bad happens to Cashmeers buisness, so she needs help from Rarity...
someday, someday...
I'm sobbing. always happy for the updates
Cashmere makes a great rival for Rarity. Unhanded but still talented.
Are we proposing to Rarity for Christmas?
Whee, plot development!
And that concludes this weeks fashion battle royale! Any closing statements Captain?
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Fabulous!
Well done, as usual. More plot to the, er, plot. To be honest, I can't wait to see how Cashmere is gonna get boned in the end (and not the way she wants to).
Continue... You have my full attention.
That was a pretty good chapter, happy it's not on hiatus anymore. Looking forward to seeing what's going to happen with the proposal, I can feel the drama from here.
Update!
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Cashmere is one of the best villains (maybe even the best) to come out of MLP fanfiction.
She's such a massive bitch! But a believable bitch/whore at that.
I swear, her naughtiness makes Cloud Kicker look like an adorable little kitten by comparison.
I can't wait for her downfall.
you snooze you lose Rarity
Hmmm....nice fiction I must say. I really do love how you portrayed Rarity in this story. Cashmere is nice character too... I like and hate her at the same time. Sex scenes are.... not bad. Besides I'm usually skip them, focusing on the rest of the story, there is something missing in them for me, a little boring maybe? Dunno. One way or another this story is well written and really entertaining. Fav and thumb up.
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Thank you! While I admit the sex scenes aren't for everyone, I'm glad to see that you're enjoying the story on its own merits, which was exactly what I was going for. Much appreciated.
Sometimes the hero (or heroine) has to "lose" to make the next win so much more satisfying. I believe this chapter has quite literally lived up to the name of the story.
Impending sexy times with Rarity!
And Cashmere, wow, I knew she was a prick but stooping to thievery? Low.
Another great chapter, I really like where things are going!
Well to think, most shrewd bussiness people reach the top through lack of ethics, and then they get MURDERED
Actually Cashmere makes for a good antagonist. We aren't given her methods on how she came about to the aetherweave idea. If Rarity stumbled upon it by happenstance, the same could have happened for Cashmere. Or, Cashmere, was looking through fashion histories and came across the mention of aetherweave through those. Or she could have had somepony "snoop" around the Boutique to copy any outstanding plans of Rarity's. However, Cashmere does have resources that Rarity quite frankly does not. She could have hired magically adept unicorns to focus on aetherweave production, and having more financial resources due to her other stores makes it more feasible and easier to achieve than Rarity who is just one unicorn, and dividing her energies between fashion production and aetherweave production as well as customer service. Cashmere is a business pony. In business the goal is to deliver a better product or service than your business rivals and appeal to the desires of the consumer. Cashmere simply took a different direction or "vision" than Rarity. So while I sympathize with how Rarity might feel, I nevertheless can't not respect Cashmere in her goal to attract business for herself and her company.
"You can lead a horticulture but you can't make her think", Dorothy Parker, when challenged by Franklin P Adams to use 'horticulture' in a sentence.
Wow, Cashmere not being a complete bitch?
I cried for Rarity when Cashmere did that bullshit... seriously that was some bull shit if I ever did see it. How did she do it? is all I can ask... fucking bitch...
Fuckin Cashmere >:( also coiffer means Hair-dresser or hair stylist or at least that's what my French teacher taught me! :p
Cashmere was just like "Yoink!"
Hmm, the section from the flight into Canterlot to the venue felt a little on the dry side, but hot damn... I never in my life thought that reading about a fashion show could ever be considered enjoyable. I loved Rarity's 'be naughty' performance and was able to visualize it quite well.
EDIT: Huh, managed to get a downvote on this comment. I can't help but be completely honest here. I've praised Drefsab at every turn (and for damn good reasons); so when I run into something that feels less than expected, saying anything less is a complete disservice to the author from my perspective. A little dry reading never killed anyone, so it certainly wasn't a scathing black mark on the chapter. Quite to the contrary, I loved everything from the moment they made it to Canterlot all the way to the end.
I'd just like to note that the song 'Ladies love Country Boys' fits the first half of this chapter (and he'll the whole fic honestly) rather well.
Couldn't keep it out of my head when I was reading their banter.