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Nope, stand-alone. The flashbacks are doled out piecemeal, by chapter, to fill out the backstory and keep things interesting. You'll get a feel for it soon.
I was looking at the story page, fell asleep, woke up, refreshed, and found that it had updated. Definately going to have to read this when i get home.
OMG UPDATE!
*reads*
Love it. I just hope the next chapter won't take another four months
I'm thankful
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That makes two of us!
Finally. A new chapter.
I really liked this one. Mostly because I got to read it with a fresher perspective. So the long break had some advantages to it.
With this fresh pair of eyes in hand, I was reminded on how well you write Rarity's parents. Both of 'em seem like such fun
peopleponies, with realistic and consistent character traits. All around well done.By GOD! Sweetie Belle was diabetes inducing levels of cute! From how you described the scene with Sweetie's cape, to the dialogue, Sweetie was drop-dead adorable! Amazing.
Rarity's feelings of Cashmere, and the scene where she even started to cry a little, felt very genuine and sad. You haven't lost your ability to write emotions either. Fluttershy, too, was as well written as ever.
I also got a reminder on how well you write the more steamy stuff, as was evident with the quite titillating scene with Fluttershy and Rarity. You truly are a master of romantic eroticism.
If I had to mention something negative, it would be that the dialogue seemed a tad off. It was all well in character and all, but it didn't seem as rounded as previously. It might need just a tiny bit of smoothing out the corners.
All in all, amazing work. Welcome back Dref, we all sure as hell missed you.
P.S: IF this seemed a little bit bland, it's mostly because I'm really freaking tired.
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Heya Amppi. Been a long time, eh? Glad you enjoyed the chapter, to say I feel rusty is understating things. Next chapter is going to be more of the 'exciting' kind of story development, so hopefully I can pick up the dialog then. Feels like I've lost my touch a little. No writing for three months will do that to you
I've been waiting for this forever! Everything rolls in smoothly as silk, you truly are a master of your craft
Holy shit...
And I thought I had a long clopfic...
Dont write a thanksgiving chapter. Das stupid.
A new chapter!
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Keep up the fantastic job, my friend.
Great to see you again.
my reaction once i saw this story had updated = fucking
Holy crap, you're not dead!
Nice chapter, as always. I still find my self hoping Fluttershy finds love elsewhere, but it's nice to see her opening up to intimacy. The concept of a "herd" like in Xenophillia is interesting, and makes sense in a way, but it'd make the story a bit fresher to have the pony NOT end up with the human.
Either way, glad to see you're back in the game!
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Hey hey, welcome back dresfab. Was wondering when the next update was coming.
Haven't read it yet. I'm re-reading the whole story before I Get to this specific chapter.
It lives!
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1662957 So you falling asleep leads to updates to Sophistication and Betrayal?
Don't mind me, I'll just be over here, drugging your food....
When I saw the update, first thing I thought was ...
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After reading the update...
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YOU ARE ALIVE!!!!!! ONE OF MY FAVORITE FICS GOT AN UPDATE!!!.........................yay
Eee! It's back!
I love the Interaction between the Human and Rarity's family. It was sweet and pretty realistic.
And the Rarity X Fluttershy scene added just the right hint of heat at the end.
Yay, new chapter! Haven't read it yet and it's already awesome.
Alive and now longer on hiatus. YEAH!
Meant to comment earlier but got distracted by the holiday. went to check fim and noticed this story had updated. started reading it and almost forgot my turkey. it turned out a little dry but it was worth it.
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Sitting pretty at something like 250,000+ words. I was looking at other erotic fics on this site, just to compare, and I have yet to see one that's even HALF the length of mine. Man, I sure am full of hot air.
In this case, size does matter
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Agreed. I thought I'd throw a reference out to the release date in the chapter title, though.
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Hell no, Drill Sergeant! Kickin' ass and taking names and all that good stuff. Dref is a fighter! Hooah!
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*ahem*
You maaaaaayy want to check out my combined works... Between my original, the request-based sequel, and the two following it, I'm close to 500k. A Different Kind of Love: The Lost Chapters was, I think, 260K upon completion. Given it's predecessor and the work following it, yeah...
Hate to brag, but I got you beat.
Then again, length means nothing in light of quality. I don't know how good this is, as I have yet to read it, but I'm sure it's better than my aforementioned work.
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Man, I thought I wrote a lot! Though I did go through a spell of three months where I was unable to type a single word, or this story would be bursting with upward of 300k! For a single story, I don't think I've seen longer, except for the big-ass ones like Fallout: Equestria and such.
man. waiting for each chap. i feel like the cookie monster in the bathroom trying to cook cookie dough in a spoon with a lighter.
come ooon come oooon...
*somome walks in*
GO AWAY! :P
Finally an update. I've been waiting forever
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Cheers to us long-winded clop writers!
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I'll drink to that.
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Oh damnit. Thanks Loyal! Just what I needed. Hundreds of thousands of more words to add to my "will never ever again have 0 chapters waiting to be read in my favorites list" list. *sigh* I need Twilight to schedule my reading to maximize my fimfiction chapter-per-day potential.
First off, I didn't notice the alert that said this story had been updated
secondly
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and thirdly
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Finally read this chapter.
Enjoyed it, amazing characterizations and emotional development as per usual. You are a very high tier writer that deserves a spot in the upper 15% of FimFiction writers. Right up there with some of the greatest pony fic writers to grace the fandom.
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Thank you so much for the kind words. I appreciate them more than you know! To think that something I've put time and effort into is actually enjoyed by others is just...amazing. The whole reason I continue this story is because of readers like you
The top 15%? Wow. I just wanted to write a decent waifu-worship story with Rarity. Glad you've enjoyed it so far, my friend. Thanks for reading
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Just saying, You're up there with the likes of Device Heretic and Applejinx in quality. The different styles between the three of you make it difficult to pick a winner so I prefer not to try but those are high caliber writers and this story sets you at their level.
Just some actual perspective for ya so you know I'm not just blowing hot air.