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Oh no... here come the feels...
Hm, sad times ahead it seems. D;
Huh... It looks like you yourself grew tired of your story and are now ending it the same way you ended it way back, before you deleted those chapters - through lots of exposition. Pity.
I'm getting teary eye'd...now to prepare for the onslaught of tears
but, but, but...
Wow... she can remember all that?
fuck you you magnificent bastard THE FEEL THEY BURNN!!!
these things are contradicting
2677851 probably intentional.
And then Twilight died... Right?
wait a minute, why is there no mention of spike here and in future chapters? you explained him away in this story because he took a century long nap, but this would mean he would be awake during the funeral and the events following it.
Commence read.
That is a moment, to just take in.
Yet another time skip filled with exposition, most of which would have made good story material. I assume you've grown bored and just want to end it now?
suddenly 150~ years pass in a single chapter.
I feel like I was more right than I knew when I commented that this story was taking on too much- we've got a ton of exposition, and you've made it clear you're covering Twi's entire life up, more or less. Not to say it was done badly, but it feels rushed. I'm not sure how to improve it, though. I suppose certain aspects might deserve a little more elaboration, but eh... that might take away from the feeling of time rushing by, which is a very effective device.
So I'm not sure what to say about that.
One thing I would have to complain about, though, is the space between saying 'they were happy for a time' and explaining what that means. You're not going to save that for a different chapter, so use that as a lead in, don't just abandon that thread and pick it up somewhere else.
L2, have you grown bored of Archmage?
This was my favorite story recently, and now suddenly exposition. Why?
That was some sudden emotional trauma you just caused me. Oh god bless it. That was the most amazing, beautiful, best, awesome, marvelous,sad, happy, great, perfect, mother effing story I have ever read in my whole life. Fuck. so damn great. Thanks. And now its almost done. It pains me to know I'm so close to the end FUCKEN AWESOME
DAMNIT
I ACTUALLY
FUCKING
CRIED
do you know how hard that actually is?!
It only takes a few feels to get my eyes watered up, but it takes a truly powerful story to get me to this state, with tears actually streaking down my face.
this story deserves so many more likes than this
I have ONE problem/complaint.
Ch. 2:
Ch. 40
Century = 100. Twi = 195.
95 years of bliss missing...
Where is the touching reunion?
Other than that this story was ah-maze-ing! Thank you for writing it.
YES!! BEST CMC!!
Go AJ Go!
And you sir, are a dick. I had things I wanted to do tonight, now I NEED to see how this ends.
Beautiful. These last few chapters have all had me tearing up. I really didn't know the level of emotion this story would reach. I'm impressed.
I seriously do not know whether to praise you for a beautifully written chapter, or want to kick you in the teeth for the sadness at the end.
Sorry... just had I known how sad it would be, I would have chosen another time. When your having a really rough night battling severe depression, a sad chapter is not a good choice.
Still, it was very well done
Buck.
Buckity-buck-BUCKING BUCK.
There goes my man-card. And my entire bodily supply of saline.
They aren't tears! It's liquid pride, I swear!
This chapter
I'd be lying if I said I didn't cry
no words not one true word can exspress how hard that hit me.
now if you will excuse me i need to go and eat a gallon of ice cream then i shall return to finish the story
Well, I'll admit that a few tears fell on this somber evening, but it wasn't unexpected. I did like how you brought everything to a sort of conclusion in this chapter. Well, everything that we've actually known throughout the story. The lives of the other element bearers was a nice touch, and I am kind of sad that Dash never had any kids. Her 20% cooler genes won't get passed down. Finally, I'm a little bit surprised that you didn't make Twi an alicorn. Now, that is because I had been psyching myself up for the end of this story, saying, "He's going to make her an alicorn, I just know it. The prophecy book and all that, he's going to do it." I'm glad you didn't. Even though death is sad, life should be a finite thing. Grand chapter!
~SolidFire
Poor Spike. Even in fanfiction he gets forgotten
Oh my god I'm actually crying wow sorry be right back gotta man up and be right back for next
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Well if you remember in an earlier chapter Twilight said that Spike was going to take a "one hundred-year nap" and that she might never see him again, and even if she did, Spike wouldn't be the same dragon he once was. (sorry if I sound mean, i don't mean to.)
i swear to freaking god, this thing is making me really depressed, even if it isn't a true story... *having thoughts of suicide*
Heh, I'm actually crying. Wow, I loved this chapter, so much, it was so perfect, so bittersweet. Honestly a perfect ending in a lot of ways....oh but wait!? Three more chapters!? I don't know what's waiting for me, but I'm gonna go find out!
I shed a single-- To hell with it. Shed a lotta man tears. However, I have a suspicion that Luna either will get really, really depressed and try to kill herself. Or she'll go all Nightmare Moon again.
3 things in life seem able to make me cry.
Cats dying.
This scene from One Piece:
And that the last time I saw my mother face to face was three days before she died of pneumonia, and she'd struggled to write "I love oyu," and I'd said "Yeah, you too."
This has almost reached "Cats dying." I gracefully put this in its spot as tied for 15th, along with eight other things tied there.
Oh god how could you! I fried the entire chapter so much, the most ive cried in any story in my entire life, that was an amazingly written chapter, whilst being depressing and sad and beautiful as possible.. Thst was cruel though. So much tears
What the hell Loyal? First Moonstone then this.
DAMN IT! LOYAL! I swear you make me cry every time!
Wat, no. No, no, no ,no NO! Not the feels! Augh! Right in the heart!
2676715 Deleted chapters?
Cap.
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Yeah ... I read this fic way back when. And I never saw any deleted chapters. I think he was smoking something that day.
Gods dammit. I'm gonna need a bucket for all these tears.
I don't think I've ever cried while reading a story, but here I am, laying in a puddle of my own tears. Well done.
I am very picky with my favorite stories section. I only add stories I know I will reread or have reread. Up until the end of this chapter I thought it was a very good story (even if it felt like the word whimpered was used a trillion times) and that it wouldn't quite live up to the others; now I'm on my third pass of this point to the end.
The brilliance of Loyal's portrail of grief was shown early in this story and I respected it then...but the depths of it from this point forward are awesome. Loyal was a master of grief and it is a cruel irony that such an artist of grief has now been grieved by so many.
If any know of others that write or have written loss this beautifully please message me. I will read it all.
ah. AHHHHHHHHHHHHH. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
MY HEART