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Blame me for how long this chapter took to get out, it was in my mailbox for almost a week.
I'll make up for it this weekend, expect two more chapters.
Alrighty. Commence read.
1707444 hello general having tea rather than fixing the chapters i see. think you can catch up?
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Good fanfiction and good tea have many things in common, the most important of these is that it takes time to get it right.
Patience is an important virtue that you would do well to learn.
Really nice story. Do continue :)
1707576 true true however I find when you let them sit too long they get cold and disgusting you must do it just right or not at all.
I wake up...
I wake to this...
This is a sign that today is gonna be a really good day for me.
Another excellent chapter. Even better than the first two I feel. (The ceremony was done perfectly)
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In my country, cold tea isn't much of a problem...
1707664true true but cold story's would be. you don't want to set them on fire now do you?
Wow... I just noticed this is a featured story.
It belongs in the feature bog, with such quality right from the start.
yes yes yes yes a new chapter
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Looks interesting so far, still waiting to see the romance but its just build up for now.
Hoping its not Twiluna but im going to be disappointed aren't I?
Hmm... I wonder what kind of romance we'll see.
Will it be a daring love affair between mentor and student? Perhaps with her mentor's sister?
Or perhaps a romance with a dashing stallion assigned to assist Twilight?
...Or maybe it'll just be some rutting here and there. I guess that works too.
Anyway, I found out about this story today and, wow, I'm glad I took the time to read it. This shows some incredible promise, Loyal.
Looking forward to the next chapter, keep up the excellent work!
Nice! I got to read JUST before the real plot begins. I've joined the crowd!
Oh, but... everything else up until now was, for a lack of a better expression, beautifuly done.
I'm a sucker for TwiLuna. I'm a sucker for badass, powerful Twilight. I like seeing characters reach their potential.
This story is relevant to my interests.
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I just don't see this happening, especaly with the way Luna is acting towards Twilght.
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Ok now I see a possibility of some Twiluna
I feel like this chapter was a bit out of order, like the Equestria-wide announcment should have been done after she makes her decision.
Now hear this, Twilight Sparkle chickened out
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That is my face when Luna shied away from branches on magic after hate.
Also, the princesss' dick moved Twilight, giving her the illusion of choice is a bad thing to do.
2311850 Making the other choices less attractive doesn't remove the choices.
“The position of Archmage is yours, but only if you want it.”
Would have been more realistic if they told her this BEFORE making it a royal decree, don't you think?
Anyponies body may be lifted to the heavens, but only the Princesses can place them among the stars? Reminds me of the spirit ceremony in Echo the Diamond Dog, which I beleive was commented on as being based on one of the Final Fantasy scenes?
Im glad the two are seperate spells, otherwise Id end up in soooo much trouble its scary.
The number of directions a story like this could go is just incredible. And with such a long length... it is quite possible that it may explore all of those ways. Glad to see Twi's being supported by her friends. Can't wait to keep reading!
~SolidFire
the story so far is just pure gold nice to see trolestia making a return dumping that news on twily at the last second "thanks for plannig this"......."OH by the way TAG your it"
yeah 5 weeks is a good distance for a reread
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I don't know why, but now I'm wanting to read a spinoff where Twilight gets assassinated here and Sweetie Belle becomes the Archmage. ...It's possible!
Great imagery here! during the funeral scene, I could realy feel the atmosphere you built up. ... never mind . Just get a
I think that should be "too".ignore me I should have read the rest of the paragraph.
First, I'm still going to be reading this, as I feel it does have promise (and it's hard to get so many likes with so few dislikes without doing something right), but I have to be honest. I have two major issues with these opening chapters. The first is the way you dumped Spike. I don't have a problem with making a reason for him to not be in the story, he's not always easy to find a role in fics. My issue is the way you dumped him. If this takes place seven years after he and Twilight moved to Ponyville, he couldn't even be twenty five seeing as he was still a child when they moved. This means he's going to be sleeping four times longer than he had been alive when he went to sleep. That is 4/5 of his life, asleep.
The biggest issue, though, is Celestia's idiocy. Why, oh why would the wisest of all Equesrtia wait to tell Twilight that she was the new Archmage until five minutes before the rest of Equestria? That was such a stupid, ignorant, immature thing to do. That should have been discussed before they even left Twilight's home. I get you were wanting to have it be a huge shock to Twilight, but it comes off as just Celestia being an ass hole.
Anyway, I loved the 'Star Pony' spell, and the fact that Luna is very critical. I'll read more later, though. Now is time for sleepy-sleep.
That makes me mad with how she was pretty much forced into a position that dictates how she will live the rest of her life.
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Fukken LOVE re-reading through old comments and stumbling on gold like this XD
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I have to criticize both of your statements. First of all, even though Spike may have only been alive not even 25 years, he's a DRAGON. That only represents 4/5 of the time he's been ALIVE, not his entire life expectancy.
Secondly, the part about Celestia not telling her until just before everypony else. First of all, while not doing so does make Celestia look like an ass, she did have reasons that I think forced her to wait. The first reason was that she was still coming to terms with Glow's death. Second, and most importantly, how the hell DO you tell your student, somepony you see as a surrogate daughter, that they've been named as the replacement to a pony they hardly met, let alone even know?! Celestia probably wanted to tell her many times over the course of the three days before the funeral. At that point, she had little choice. Besides, Celestia didn't tell her; Twilight figured it out. The nod was just confirmation. So before you go criticizing a scene, get you facts straight, and really try to understand both the characters and the setting.
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Huh? Are you sure? Cause I seem to have read that she was given a choice. Her friends may have done a lot to convince her that this was her destiny, but nopony FORCED her to this. She still could have refused. And this is TWILIGHT SPARKLE we're talking about here; she's the ONLY pony for the job. Plus, magic has always been her special talent; that's why she's the ELEMENT OF MAGIC!!
I'll admit to relief. Something about the last couple chapters- Twilight having to schedule a block of time for her friends the next day, phrasing which sounded like she was looking for an excuse not to bring them to Canterlot, her noted disconnection from her family- made it seem like this was one of those stories which starts off with her having grown obsessed with her work/studies to the point of eroding all her relationships despite explicitly studying friendship.
6039296 it's sort of like proposing to someone in a stadium I suppose. Sure she could say no but Celestia and Luna already announced to the world she was the new Arch Mage. Saying no after that would be really hard.
I'm glad Twilight decided on it for better reasons than guilt though.
”By decree of the Royal Pony Sisters, Twilight Sparkle is herby named Archmage of Canterlot.”
i know this is an older story but at the same time i have to note , youre missing an e
7096393 I dunno Maybe twilight is suddenly a car
reminds me of
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Okay, so some grammar errors that I skipped / missed my first readthrough.
Doesn't take away from this being a very emotional chapter.
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She's best Car. Even NASCAR says so.
Mmmm, this takes me back. This was the first long fanfic I really got into.
7622951 I started with the titular Fallout: Equestria, but this followed soon after. Damn good fic.
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It pisses me off that I can never find the community artists that do these on forza. I would kill to have ponies all over my dream cars.
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This might be a good place to start. But yeah, if you google people who do custom paint jobs. And need a custom picture that doesn't exist google, or derpibooru. Then all you need to do is find a pony artist that does work you like. Then ask if they do commissions.).
Hopefully that helps ^_^.
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Some of my own personal work no actual ponies but pony themed cars. It's too difficult to get the shapes in Forza 4 to look like vectors. I also have some others including a ram 1500 AJ theme, a RD themed skyline, and a Twilight themed 300zx. Though I wish I could get them to look like that. I guess I got tired of waiting for images to open up on DA.