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Leave it to Twilight to become the only pony that can breathe life into a dying being. Or, at least that is how I hope it will be.
From the summary, it sounds like it could be Faust's vision of the show.
Been waiting for this chapter so hard, and it didn't disappoint :p I stopped reading the Exposition of Death Note as soon as I heard this had been uploaded ^.^
why do i get the feeling canterlot will soon have a mammoth tree as a tourist attraction?
im wondering where all this is going to head
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Omigosh... I can totally see that happening now... And poor Luna is still waiting for her
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Is it just me, or does anyone else suspect Twilight has been feeding life into an ordinary pebble?
When that thing grows into a tree...
Come on. Think how amazing that would be guys.
2108274 yes that could happen but I believe that a Ent would be more likely if we have a beam of light and a Twilight that's laughing
insanely and yelling "it lives".
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Life, uh, finds a way.
if she is learning all magic to create balance, doesn't she need to learn chaos magic? cause she is focusing heavily on order, and that isnt always good in the long run
I cant wait to get around to reading this! From the description it sounds great! Sadly my backlog is huge after my 3 week absence. But I promise to get around to reading this sometime within the next few days. ^.^
When I read "LIVE!" I instantly thought, "CLEAR!"
Great chapter!
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I'm thinking the fact that she checks up on it so often is whats killing it.
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Well, yeah. That's sort of what's been so heavily foreshadowed but...
hmmmm well the only thing plot holeish I noticed is how are they going to stay in their room if Luna has to leave to raise the sun? Why would they need to have the others watch the sun and moon raising? Couldn't Twilight and Luna just leave for that if Luna has to leave anyway, then go back into the room. Get Celestia to do that shit Luna!
hmmm I wasn't aware that Twilight knew about Cross Stitches disapproval of her whole thing with Luna. I kinda wish they had talked about it a bit more, but this was satisfactory. He might disapprove more if she told them "hey we're getting married after like, two weeks of dating."
Rarity should probably figure out how regular so Twilight can clear her schedule up. Archmage is busy job!
Also, I find it really amusing that Twilight fell asleep on Luna. Its like they're married already! Though on that relationship front, I'm wondering
I wonder if Twilight is going to create her own sentient tree as well. I mean, if there's sentient magic barriers, then a sentient tree shouldn't be such a stretch right? AND she is telling it to live, like she's Frankenstein, or the pony version of Frankenstein. Actually, if Twilight can detect the life of a little seed, wouldn't she be able to have like a detect pony spell? Man that'd be cool, but slightly pointless at the moment.
In all, this was a good chapter, and I look forward to more!
Great chapter but I'm kinda wondering has anyone ever watered the seed or is there no need to?
Well the way its been going so far I think it will die.. why? because Twilight just seems to be getting Fucked over everything almost... I want her to finaly have something go her way.
Commence read.
Fight Twilight! Fight to proceed and progress!!
2109881 Twilight watered the seed atleast twice a day before Gable told her that to much attention could be a bad thing. After that, it sounds like Twi watered the seed once every two days.
I've finally caught up. I really enjoy the deep feelings, the going back and forth in troubles, and all the troubles Twilie's coming across as she learns how to be Archmage the hard way in many cases, the gentle way with her mentors, and so many other things. It's lovely and well done.
And thus Twilight faces her greatest challenge yet- the necessity to do something other than study magic.
Nice chapter, hope to see more soon!
*moan* ZOMBIE TREE! SEEDS...
She is sooo gonna screw up that tree, can't wait to see how.
...when did Twilight & Luna get engaged? I don't remember reading that
2110958 It wasn't given as much attention as it should have been. In the last chapter it was split into two sections, time with Luna and then the Nature magic. It happened just at the end of the Luna when luna asked Twilight to marry her. And then it jump-cut to Twilight in the garden. It's a bit of a shame because that moment should have had much more of an impact on Twilight which it would've been nice to see but oh well :)
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Now that you mention it, I do seem to recall it.
And I agree, it should've been given quite a bit more attention.
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Without spoiling anything important, I can say that it gets better. Yes, I too disliked Luna in this story at the point where you got to (I assume it's when Twilight loses her innocense?), but I kept reading and stuff got better.
With the amount of power Twilight has, I wouldn't be surprised if the whole Canterlot mountain was overgrown in seconds XD
It appears like Canterlot is about to have a new tourist attraction.
okay so Ive been up since 5am reading this. it is now 1130am and i just finished. I love this fic and cant wait for more updates.
And thus Canterlotcastle was destroyed by a giant tree
2111861 and thus twilight made another tree-brary.
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I like this theory.
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Nah, it specifies that she felt the magic and growth of the tree. So... I'm gonna guess that's NOT what's gonna happen.
Yes! New chapter Archmage really. Is one of my favorite fics ever
I've just finished reading this story. OHMAGAWD IT IS AWESOME!
.......And then Twilight grew a second library tree in the castle gardens lol all and all i managed to have a free day dedicated to catching up on all my readings and this was at the top of the list and i have to say that you and Iroh have made a wonderful story that intrigues me on a deeper level and i can see this easily being on the top 10 of my faves list. hope the next chapter is just as amazing as the rest of the story.
I'm to lazy to read the comments, does this story have an antagonist? yes/no
Somehow I get the feeling that the seed was supposed to die and there is nothing Twilight can do about it.
Living and growing is part of nature but so is death and that may be part of what she needs to learn ...
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I agree.
I'd love for it to live, and become a massive tree in an instant, but this end seems very much more appropriate.
As powerful as Twilight is, I am sure she can keep a seed alive.
Thank you for not doing the whole "protagonist makes an extremely important promise sincerely, then something unexpected happens and they completely forget about it" thing. You had everything set up for that boring trope, and I wasn't looking forward to it. I was pleasantly surprised.
Dun dun dun! Will the seed survive? Come back next time on Archmage. Now though... now we have a promise of sexy sex. But... I'm pretty sure that the seed will die, and Twi will be sad, and so Luna will comfort her, and no sexy sex... darn.
~SolidFire
I'm quite surprised that Twilight didn't ask for Applejack and Fluttershy's advice on her studies of Nature magic. True, neither are unicorns, but if Nature magic is less about skill and power and more about experience and expertise at tending flora and fauna, I can imagine nopony wiser. It'd also might have given her an unique insight into how the other pony races interact with such an important branch of magic. But most of all, since she's unhealthily obsessed with her work, it'd be good to at least find work-related reasons to visit her friends. If the Magic of Nature has anything in common with the Magic of Friendship it's that, like a delicate flower, frienship can wither under the weight of neglect if not properly tended for. No matter how busy she's been, that after months she hasn't squeezed the time to even write is almost inexcusable . It's equally weird that none of the Mane 6 have written to her or attempted to visit, specially Pinkie Pie.
I fear that Twilight is becoming so focused on learning the other branches of magic that she's running the risk of jeopardizing her mastery over the most powerful magic of them all.
I've been rereading this just for that ending moment. And for the plot. ...Of the story!
Oh no. I just realized he's probably one of the shadow magic Luna-tics isn't he?
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Oh Noez! Poor Twilight.
He's saying that now and then you should stop to... smell the roses.
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that was bad and you should feel bad about it
So I've been listening to fall out boy lately, because I haven't listened to their music in like a year. So I was listening to Uma Thurman and the first line of the song was "I can move mountains." I just instantly thought of when Twilight was doing that smite spell on the top of mountain and the damage she had done. Now everytime I listen to the song I just think of that moment.