no hint to the content on this so i will read this
edit: <like>
edit 2: i love this a lot i will be keeping an eye on you
im sure you will not disapoint

An interesting concept to be sure. Added to my read later list!

New clopfic by Loyal...

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Commence read.

And it was pretty sad there. Guess she finally was called by name then.

Will be interesting to see where this goes.

Excellent start! Tracking and upvoted!

First chapter and somepony has died? this is good so far

i cant waitt looks interesting so far

I don't know who down-voted this but they're crazy, this is awesome, I can't wait to see what happens next.

good opening chapter! i want to see where this goes.

EEEEEEEEE~~!!!

That was a great opening chapter.

Man, now I want to know more about this Glow...... Hmmmmmmm..... Twi's been able to travel to the past before.... That very well could work. Yes. MUST COMMENCE FURTHER SCHEMING

Well, looks interesting. Continue, please.

Interesting story, Glow some how reminded me of Gandalf for a tad reason.

You have my attention. Please, proceed.

WHAT THE FUCK WAS GLOW GOING TO SAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!! IF I DON"T KNOW I WILL PROBABLY PUNCH A NUN!!!!1!

A good start to the fic, I think I'm going to enjoy this immensely.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_pea.png

1657301 he was about to announce his undying love for the lunar princess? Or maybe he just wanted to say her name because he always called her princess?

Why do I have a feeling he would've said "Luna, I love you" ?

Or...
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What this guy says actually makes sense. I only noticed it after reading that comment.

Well that was one hell of an opening, makes me wonder what else you've got in store for me.

Well
I got this feeling at the end
DUMBLEDOR NO!!!
also
simon: BILL NOOO

Luna....*he dies but you can hear* I want your body against my wrinkles so bad.

Maybe he died from being penetrated too hard. Hmm..

So, erm. Very kind of nervous about this thing. When it says mature, sex. Does that mean just like sexual innuendo's or sexual concept / jokes, like how two and a half men has a lot of sex references. Or is it . . . full blown? And would this revolve around it, or will it actually have a full blown story and stuff, and the. . . other stuff, is just thrown in as the story would have it in?

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lel, some people just can't handle a joke.

“I’m done, princess…” He wheezed. “No more for me… No more spells or incantations…” He shook his head then, his white mane hanging limp down his neck. In this pony, Luna saw no more strength. His heart was failing. His body was done. But his spirit remained indomitable. Somehow, he mustered the strength to raise his head, to look at her one last time. “Forgive me, my princess… But… There’s one last thing I must say…”
“Anything, Glow… Anything at all.” She stepped closer, hardly a foot away from him now.
“Luna...”
The old unicorn collapsed. His magic died along with his last breath.

The ultimate troll

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Nun punching, yet another sport shot down from the Olympics.

I must say with regret that I haven't read the sequel to this story having wanted to start this. I'm sad that it took me this long to start on this due to its size and that's a shame.

This story just from the first chapter is gripping, as it is amazing. The characterization and way you capture personality, even in an OC that only last one chapter is beautiful. I'm nearly weeping along with Luna from just this prologue. I am eager to see what else this story holds. *Onwards to the next chapter*.

This is, this is JUST.SO.DANM.GOOD.FUCK. Even on my 8th read this chapter gives me goosebumbs.

2656847 I hid a million bits at....

To bad i'm so late that I have no one to take this adventure with. Oh well. Its been a while since I read a long fic, and this one seems good

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Did you really read this 8 times

You had 300 years and you couldn't finish one sentence.

I have to wonder at what point in time this fic is based. After all, being only 300 years old, Luna would've still been stuck in the moon by the time Nocturnal Glow was born, so by the time she finally met him he was probably ancient already.

Ummm... What?!
Now I wanna know what he was gonna say!!!
"I wanna! I wanna know!"

4098494 "Luna". Nothing else. For the first time since he met her, with his dying breath, he finally called the Princess of the Night by her name.

OH FFS Y U DO DIS
1 page into the story and I already have feels

I've been unsure about this fic for awhile, having it just lurk about my read later file forever. But I;m finally getting to it and I must say, one chapter in and I'm already hooked. I'm invested into what's going on and even just the short appearance from Glow had me very interested in him and saddened by his end. I'm hoping to see flashbacks with him in the chapters to come, but if not he really served his purpose here. I have no idea what to expect (always avoid comments, lol) but I'm looking forward to the ride!

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I've had this in my read later pile because I use to think the mature and sex tags = clop
I think it was like 2 years ago when I first saw it
Idk why I was so hesitant to read it even after I learned that the above was not true

OK, screw the length, screw my slow reading, I am officially sucked in. Beautiful prologue, and I want more... well... my desires seem to have been answered, there is 200000-or-so more words to go! Lets get reading!
Beautiful death scene by the way, and I seriously feel sad for the old man, even though I just met him...

What a start. Already tugging at the heartstrings

Dear Faust, bless me on this gigantic fucking journey that lay before me.
It lasts for many a story and its roads already seem sharp and hard.
Steel my nerves Ma'am, for I have just embarked on an epic.

I remember reading this and loving it... But I don't remember any of it.

This is a glorious occasion. I can read as if it's the first time all over again. AND there's three sequel things in the works.

It's binge reading time!

The feels though. and his last word was luna, his last word was to remove professional relationship .

Well THAT was a first chapter. that was... a very well done hook.

Second time reading this series ^_^. It's a massive tale, but damn if it's not time well spent ^_^.

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It and the sequel only get better ^_^.

Well talk about a kick staerter

7365393 Ouch, my flesh is being pulled to read more.

Oomph!

Oww I just got sucker punched
But damn way to kick off a story
Here, for your writing skill I present to you: