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That's a first, a cliffhanger i didn't mind.
Loyal, i eagerly await the next chapter.
Must Read MOAR!!!!
Thank you for your time and thoughts. Please continue.
well... I would say that the shitstorm is coming, but it seems that it is already here.
Oh, quite the twist...
I was expecting (and I believe Twilight and Luna were, too) that Regal was going to try denying it.
Still, I hope that Twi makes it out of this fine, as I doubt Regal is going to over-power both Celestia and Luna at the same time.
I hope, I hope, I hope, I hope, I hope, I hope.
All of my yes. The cliffhanger here is the biggest of all. On the other hand (hoof) i seen this coming. Regal and his shenanigans to kill a royal pony. (i didn't expect celestia) but hey, its a good story twist.
furthermore, i know you have just updated, but you need to update again. Like yesterday!
Haha that means rarity was being played for a fool the entire time, and now she'll have to pay the price for being such a bitch.
2422255 Predictions: 1. Celestia is gravely injured, can't heal the wounds with magic, going to take a while for her to recover. 2. Celestia's mortal form is killed, she's reduced to a spirit-type-thing (I'm tired, shaddup), needs time to recover her body. 3. Celestia is dead.
Have to say that I honestly feel sorry for Regal. I believe his story about journeying to the library, and suspect that the grief and terror he must have experienced weakened him to the point that when he accidentally read Blaze's journal he was unable to resist. Seeing as the journal was able to overpower a fully-prepared Twilight it's easy to see how Regal would have fared. So is he a villain? Yes. Is he evil? No.
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It's just about impossible to predict the actions of the mad!
-Mis
Charcoal Regal with a side of hayfries. ORDER UP!
Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes!!!
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Except the part where there's a cliffhanger. I wonder what's going to happen next. Also, I'm glad that Twilight was right in her first assumption. How horrible would it be if Regal turned out to actually be somewhat innocent and she just wrongly accused him with having a plot to kill the princess?.
Well that escalated quickly. I wonder how many of these kinds of things Celestia has had to endure over the years if within a few months she's the target of two assassination attempts, by two different groups. Also, rule one of conspiracys, never leave a paper trail. Or at least an incriminating paper trail. That whole bit with "request auidence with Celestia" written down was entirely unneccessary. Who was that even written for. himself? Why would he need a note to remind himself of his own end goal.
Also, I find destroy X and become X plans amusing. If you kill the committee you OBVIOUSLY become the head of the committee correct? And nobody is going to find it strange when you go after another committee, in much the same manner. Also, why even bother with the "Lure away the guards plan?" seems fairly unnecessary if You just wanna kill Celestia. Politics are crazy.
I'm skeptical of how that one Synthesis book managed to survive being locking in a huge library with an insane Archmage for a long ass time without being found and destroyed. Or even destroyed by Regal right off the bat if he got over taken by the same dark book emotions that Twilight was susceptiable too. Hell, why wasn't he nutters the whole time if he was rereading that thing.
Magical influences aside, the fact that a foreign diplomat tried to assassinate one of the immortal heads of the nation should be addressed as well. I can't see soemthing like that reflecting well on Saddle Arabia. Even if its just a "we deny any involvement" kind of thing. Followed by a "we're sorry that one our diplomats went crazy" present.
I kinda wanna get Cadance's and Shining Armor's input on this stuff here, though on that note, if Blaze came to kill Cadance, and only accidently went after Celestia because insanity, why is Regal trying to kill Celestia and not Cadance. Especially if he's been around for years. Also, maybe he could have used some sort of diplomatic privelage to see Celestia alone or explored other options, while working on the destruction of the Preservation Society on the side or something.
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we are already waist-deep in guano, man
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Uhm... thanks?
I just said that I, personally, don't think that Celestia is going to be (at least) Very Dead from this, just (at most) Mostly Dead.
So no rifling through her pockets for loose change.
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Yeah, but I don't think they realized just how mad he was. Still, errors appear to have been made, but I might be wrong. After all, we did get a massive time-slip in which they could have easily planned all this out.
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This isn't one of the episodes, so we don't know that everything is going to be A-O-Good after all is said and done.
And just because Twi might be on the way to becoming Twilicorn, does not necessitate that she is all-powerful or capable of regeneration now.
Now, a question that must be asked. Who is Regal? On his plans it said he needed to come up with a new name, so what was his original name? Also, even if Regal, somehow, manages to kill Princess Celestia (although unlikely, it IS possible), the room is filled to the brim with magic users, including the "Goddess" of the Night and the most powerful unicorn to ever live. Yeah, "Regal" is officially screwed. Repeatedly. Then stabbed, struck by lightning, have his skin peeled off, thrown in a tub filled with salt, struck by lightning again, flattened by a steam roller, put in a paper shredder, have the sliced up bits lit on fire, only to have the ashes thrown in a tub of acid. Then the tub of acid gets thrown in a volcano. Then the volcano has several dozen Nuclear bombs dropped in it. Then the planet (or what's left after the bombs go off) are then thrown into the sun. The sun then blows up, turns into a black hole, and destroys several solar systems. Yeah, that is how screwed he is. Oh, and at some point before he died he got raped up the ass with no lube.
Yeah, he's insane and evil, but I still feel sorry for him. All because he read that one book.
Celestia can't die, she's a main character!!
Plus, she read the prophecy, so she'd know what would happen and would be prepared. The white light was probably her counter spell.
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Bombs may be targeted at a specific person, but explosions still cause collateral damage.
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His plan did seem a little contrived, but apparently the empathy spell addles your brain a bit, so that could explain it. Either way, I think Twilight went into super-mode at the end there.
Not sure if I like the rapid escalation here. The tension was building at just the right level for the past 3-4 chapters, but it goes from a nice slope to a cliff face. I think it could've gone on for another chapter without Regal doing anything too outrageous (and publicly trying to kill Celestia, Goddess of the Sun, is the most outrageous thing one can do). I would've liked to have seen him storm out and draw the suspense for a touch longer, but eh, decent chapter nonetheless.
I must have more how dear you leave us with a cliffhanger you monster.
>About to get up to go to bed.
>Stands up.
>"Hmm... Maybe I should check FimFiction..."
>See's update.
>It's Archmage.
>Sits down faster than Rainbow Dash after the newest Daring Do novel.
>Reads.
>Loves.
Loved the chapter, I just wanna sit here for a while and wait for the next one with that cliffhanger... But I have a life to live (kinda..)
And 2422448 I keep forgetting about that prophecy... Kinda makes you wonder how much of it they read... We know they read a lot, but could they have read it all? If so then they must've known at least something about all of this happening... BUT they also have to go along with whatever the book says... Can't interfere with the prophecy!
well fuck you crafty bastard you sure know how to keep a reader hooked don't you.
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But whatever the prophecy says has to come to pass or *bewm* happens... So even if she did know something bad was going to happen to her, there's not a whole lot she should or could have done about it.
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But you yourself also said we don't really know who he is (and therefore how powerful he is.) I do agree, he is very screwed with how out -numbered and -matched he is, but he might not be screwed to such an extent, maybe he's strong enough to put up a fight...
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That's exactly what I thought was going to happen the whole time until he attacked Celestia. I was waiting for something weird to happen and completely unravel the tension that was built up, but it didn't happen
Commence read.
Well....dang.
Cliffhangers are fine.. throwing us over the cliff and stoping us 3 inches from the ground wondering how we survive is not... please hurry with the next chapter.
FFFFFFFFFF...buck. That's a killer cliffhanger.
My god, that is the worst cliffhanger ever.
I want the next chapter now!
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I came for regicide (Regal!)
But I have feared today (It's all ruined?)
I'm going to fake beguile and I will infiltrate your ci~ty
It doesn't matter now (You fool?)
For my plans you just blew (Jury!)
And nothing left to lose just means Celestia is doomed
Since I live to make you die, die, die
Yes I do
To kill immortal sun gods I say why,
Yes I must!
Since all I really need's a deicide
But it's been a bumpy ride.
I thought that I would win (Curses!)
I'm not what I must seem (Facade!)
Until that darned Archmage turned up I'd almost lived my dream (Hoof bump!)
But now I'm kind of worried
For my plan to kill the crown
I'll drop the act, sur-prise attack, to end that sad clown, bring her down
Since I live to make you die, die, die
Yes I do
Tear her up from limb to limb let it begin
Just give me a clear shot, grin, grin, grin
Even if my life ends here
It's true that Bolt's a broken pony.
And that Blaze was quite mad
A pony who was irredeemably evil and bad
There's one thing that keeps me going and makes my whole life worthwhile
And that's when I think about plans to make her die
I'm Regal and I'm crazy
Like a fox, though, certainly.
I give a smile it's not my style
But I'll end the monarchy
'Cause I'm forced to shoot my beam, beam, beam
Yes I doom!
Tell me what more can I do for certainty?
That I doom!
It makes me lethal when I beam, beam, beam
Yes I'll kill she who brings the day~
Come on Celestia die, die, die
Stop your heart beat with sunshine, sunshine
All I really need's a deicide
And I'll bring eternal night!
I am actually more worried about Rarity at this point not celestia, she was the one who so adamently defended Regal. and what is up with ponies being attacked during court or even meetings, I wonder what celestia did to create the blinding white light. but is regal really evil or is he just taken in under the influence of a book, could luna'a spell knock him out of it
2423593 EPIC WIN
Oh shit. If what I think just happened actually happened, Twi just hit Super Saiyan 3.
Those cliffhangers....
And then everypony died.
The end.
OMG I cant wait for the next part loyal!!!!!
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That was unexpected
I was kinda looking forward to either Luna impersonating Cadance or Shining impersonating Bolt then watching Regal flip his table and thus blow his scheme out of the water ...
What I write next is my thoughts on what I think will happen. I'll 'spoil' it just for the sake of everyone not wanting to not read it.
The spell that Regal casts is a sort of 'thundering lightning', or at least that's how it's portrayed. What Twilight sees is 'pure white'. I suspect tat this pure white is Celestia casting a counter spell. She is pristine white herself, her "domain" is the sun and as such; light. I believe that Celestia just went balls to the wall herself. If not just to defend herself, then to kill Regal.
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Every. Fucking. Time.
I'm either in tears of sadness or joy. Oh, and my sides hurt.
This is the latter. *Slow clap* Brilliant. *Continues slow clap*
CLIFF HAAAANGERRRR!!!!!!! sweet love love cliff hangers also...
*Continuously slow claps* I love this chapter!
Amazing goddamn update. But you... you ended it on a cliff hanger. Why... why have you done this?!
Awsome update. Then that cliffhanger...
This story is def. goin on my top fav. list.
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Absolutely brilliant!
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Rarity was probably being magically influenced by Blazers journal...
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That aside, keep up the good work.
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... the journal she told twilight she had never read?
2424551 you and iroh lied to me.... you said twi was going to get knocked up by regal...
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If the journal had brainwashed her, perhaps she lied to Twilight. We can only guess...!