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Does she keep the robot twins?
Interesting and relatively lazy, but a great chapter anyway, please keep up the good work.
While I would like to see the combat, this for some reason feels more glorious.
Honestly, we get the picture. Nice Doom reference, though.
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Imagination fills in the blanks. It is both scary and gorgeous.
ROFL exalent DOOM and Boarderlands reference I approve and the fact the fight section was the censored version says a lot on what she did
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Also a very good question
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/45860/1/diaries-of-a-madman/prologue
Read the prologue, Nav is Discord, just without Discord's memories.
10297073 You do realize your reply won't reach its intended recipient since you didn't hit the reply button on the comment you're replying to, right?
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I did, it just reloaded because something went wrong and I didn’t notice.
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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/45860/1/diaries-of-a-madman/prologue
Read the prologue, Nav is Discord, just without Discord's memories.
And no one thought to tell him over the MONTH he spend there waiting? Youd think would be counqueror would be intelligent enough to do some intelligence gathering on their opponent. And why would he stand there and wait for her to slowly turn around to look at her shortened hairstyle?
As much fun as it is to poke holes at your story I also came up with reasoning for opponent of ...last week apparently. He in fact did know that instanly enrages her and wanted to test just how bad it was, since he consider her a warrior and those with training tend to be more reckless and therefore easier to defeat when controlled by their emotions.
You just failed to hint at this being the case.
As for battle being cut shorth I can understand. I sincerel doubth aura, as impervious as it is (as long there is any left) I still find it being able to block light saber hard to believe. You out right skipping need to test it was a good call. And I can rather easily imagine opening move being umbearably hot wave of fire melting majority of useless foot soldiers, clearing area for more serious fighting and forcing elite 4 to back of long enought for her to lock on the next victim. Rest of the fight? You did mention craters.
You did disapoint with Yang not being forced to adapt on new hairstyle untill it eventually grows right back up. It would have also given her a nice break for not needing to watch over it to protect creatures around her. Oh and also let us have some pity on diamond dogs, they already have suffered enough during this story and no doubth did that battle collapse some...most of their tunnels underground...and glass everything above ground.
Will you show us comedic break of Rarity trying to find gemstones from surface of metal, ash and glass?
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True, but I have come across them. It always annoyed me that I've found several displaced as evil characters stories, and they fell into the evil role "just because." Like, couldn't you at least give a better reason to go conquering a people that were not only nice to you, but helped you get used to your new body and powers? And I have rarely found people that did that with characters that were already evil dicks, otherwise I would have little to say about it. Those tend to be good stories I will admit, even if I don't like them personally. Misunderstood/Phobic!Equestria/etc actually tend to be decent stories, and ties in nicely with the theme of "misunderstood" characters, allowing creative flexibility with how the alicorn sisters and said misunderstood displaced interact and their history. Did said misunderstood person do morally gray things? Did said misunderstood person not do morally gray things? Were they actually a dick and well deserving of 1k years in stone(or whatever imprisonment fits the bill). Take the Gilgamesh(Final Fantasy) displaced stories, for example: he simply wanted an honorable fight, and when literally every race on the planet joined forces to fight him, he let them win out of pride for their progress. Those two stories are great examples of that trope written well. Grievous displaced here? A one off villain doing it for shits and giggles with literally little to no character development. I'm glad he didn't have a story of his own.
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I'm referring to the claim that he's "Cooler" than VADER.
AW.
10298821 My defense of Grievous letting her slowly turn around: for all the conquering and combat drive he has, he still makes mistakes. In SW Episode 3, Grievous made a dumb move when he fought Obi-Wan: going straight to four arms. If he had decided instead to wait a bit, then break out the extra arms, that would have changed the whole flow of the battle.
As for him not knowing about the hair triggered temper, it could simply be that nobody told him so he would have that disadvantage. The citizens knew Yang would come back, there would probably be a fight, and giving her an advantage would help free them.
Also, rule of drama.
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The malachite twins are from rwby not star wars
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I am aware. What I meant with star wars and not wanting to assume was that since I am not invested in star wars besides having watched the 6 movies and 1 of hated continuation I do not know if there are actual droids as described here or if they actually were RWBY reference to Juniors twins.
10299858 I shall answer.
Red and White are referencing the Malachite twins, albeit with huge guns instead of claws and kicks.
Additional answer: VSX is straight up Good Cool Kaiser VSX.
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I have watched some videos explaining star wars universe and in one came up that the reason Grevious was so succesful jedi killer despite not having any connection to the force was because he was trained in ways inflicting fear, helped by being scary looking cyborg and usually larger than his opponents he could prevent them from using force on him. I don't recall exacly whether it was ingrained repulsion to the dark side which includes fear that kept them from acting, or if fear actually could hamper ability to use force.
That was why he tended to show all cards in his hand at once, to give him a window of time jedi he was after would only use their combat skills wich usually werent enough agaist 4 lightsabers coming at them at once. If scaring them wasn't working like with Obi-Wan then Grievious would flee, not much he could do if they though to levitate him around. Apparently Anakin would have kicked his metallic ass even faster had they ever fought since he wasn't as concerned about being ruled by his emotions. Kinda like You had Yang beat him now that I think about it.
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I've said they arent related to star wars and they are rwby characters which you just admitted to knowing. Do the math please
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It feels like you arent even trying to understand what I am saying. I didn't want to assume. And now one who wrote it admitted it was refrence to RWBY and not star wars. Where do you see the need for me to do math? Or are you just insulting me for no reason?
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