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7896959 7897021Thank you both for your constructive criticism. As much as I would love to give an explanation for everything you've mentioned (except for the part about it sounding like it's coming from a robot. No excuses there), that would take too much back and forth time for my liking.
One thing I've come to realize is that writing a fight scene where the main attack of the hero is punching things and they're only equipped with shotgun gauntlets is not easy, even with varied ammo. I have some other characters of mine with huge arsenals and unique powers based around those weapons, so there's more meat to chew on for writing fights for them.
I will answer one thing that was brought up, and that's Yang's aura. Think of magic and aura like blood and car oil: both can be cleanly drained, but the processes are very different. Tirek couldn't drain Yang's aura because he had no idea how. He was able to see it, but thought it was just some other type of magic.
7905558 please define 'reverse harem'.
7922735 Good thing RWBY can be viewed for free on Youtube or Rooster Teeth's website.
This Yang doesn't have anything to do with the one in V2, V3, or V4 of RWBY, aside from when in the show's airing s/he was displaced. Spoilers for RWBY are elsewhere, away from this fic. Spoilers are also wing-like attachments found on the rear end of various vehicles.
Moar? Plz?
7967637 Because it was practically a requirement given the premise of the story? Brownie points if you can figure out when or what the next upgrade is. Cheesecake points if you get both.
7967706 More will come soon.
7968079 umm..... Training?