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Well, seems Searing had a good time. I'd like that kind of adventure.
.....DO IT!!!!!
My god, Discord you mad lad.
10357090 But really, would he be any fun otherwise?
10356948 WAIT NO MORE! BEHOLD! SVUA.
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I thank you good sir. Now I will await the release of 2 more chapters before reading.
Moonlit stroll makes me think of a Hellsing Abridged Reference
On second though after rewatching the scene, he says Moonlit Walk
10357229 Well, who's to say that Midnight Stroll doesn't go on moonlit walks?
Also, yes, you got the reference.
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I wouldn’t have it any other way. Searing should count herself lucky she met Tzeentch, if it were the other three, she wouldn’t last long.
I'm reminded of the mlp loops
Yeah.. this definitely reminds me of the mlp loops
If this was it's own side chapter or it's own one shot story. I would gladly read it. But I just skimmed most of this because it did not interest me at all and neither did the weird powers or the warp.
The added backstory feels unnecessary...
10357287 And who's to say that the loops didn't have a part to play in the crafting of the unusual adventure?
Wait, hold on, what? I don't reremember Searing....
She sounds familiar though....
i have no recollection of a Searing Victory. Wow this BPS is some serious shit
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I thought so XD Made me go and rewatch Hellsing ultimate now
10358210 Sounds like it's going to be a party party party.
10358335
gotta have a party
While there was no reappearance of santassassin this chapter made me smile none the less. First time something I suggested was actually added.
Figures Discord would still see her, but not sure I like just how involved he seemed to be in curing her. Or maybe he did that ages ago and was just messing with her because he had good excuse, those do not come by often. Then there was the turning human part. I wonder if Searing will ever see the pony Yang, they really should have gotten some perspective on the other with the experience. Oh and for a moment I thought warp was guestioning its existence with his line:
I did not get why Yang suddenly had nose bleed, was there some hidden reference? You didn't describe the suit at all so I doubth it happened because it was too revealing. Also the guns, I do not know about these things too well so with only being ridiculously big and even being 2 to go on I could only think of those things Seras Victoria used in Hellsing. Was that intentional? Because if it was I think I get why you described Searings bodytype the same as Yangs. They already have such a similar names.
Considering its discord repeating himself might not be mistake.
P.S. I kept one possible mistake I found at the end when writing this review. How it happened to work as reminder for my last question is just by amusing and helpfull chance
You can put a link now
10360862 The Warp is a strange place, and Tzeentch (at least in TTS) does ask those kinds of questions.
10361025 Link is in.
10357122 Chapter five has been released.
Is this goign where i think it's going?
Yes it is, now off to go listen to this song
that better not be a Yu-Gi-Oh! reference.
10378376 I've already written out the game, but the chapter's not published yet. It'll be in this story: Searing Victory's Unusual Adventure.
I promise you this: the game is suitably chaotic.