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I’m a bit saddened that it looks like brain Storm won’t survive, and I have no idea why I want him to survive
9676275 Oh, he's dead. The exploding flare was a sign of that.
I get him making the thematically inappropriately designed driver that rips off the weather dopant; it just makes sense. The knockoff Genius bottle Build transformation seems like something he’d be less likely to make on his own.
9676357 Eyecon Driver G and Evol Driver, actually. And sealed away for so long inside the machine, he'd probably come up with something like those. Also, I like the Kamen Rider franchise.
I meant that the grateful driver doesn’t really fit what I can only think of as a Rider version of the weather dopant. And of course I would think Build Driver when the transformation and item were paralleling genius form.
Another Unique enemy, instead of some threats who rely on brute strength or imposing numbers, Brain Storm relied on Technology.. But as brilliant as the scientist, tech or machines are, they are hardly perfect and are bound to have flaws. His Flaw was overreliance on his machines which lead to his defeat.
For a moment there, I thought it was a reference to another story...Or Is IT?
I liked the finale when the 1812 Overture played and the destruction within the machine. If it can't be destroyed on the Outside, Only way to destroy it is within.
It seems that he's alarmingly excited for that question.
Damn, you’re on a roll.
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Because he was a compelling enemy his reasons are those many can understand. So he is endearing to the reader. though having him comeback after making repairs to him self would be cool especially if he dose so as no a main villain but as a enabler, who makes weapons and tools for others.
I say you did good keeping with the music
I really wanted a redemption here.
I on the other hand find trying to listen music while reading too distracting. It is also rather difficult to time song with the scene in text so I have to skip the musical addition every time it comes up.