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and dreamsception
Did you mean to center text of the chapter?
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Yes, just to see if someone would notice and say something.7802733 haha point conigwolf :p
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Tirek Arc: 3 chapters.
Maybe cut the pacing down a bit, it went fast as fuck.
7803828 Pacing isn't easy for me. Still, it's not as fast or as dangerous as an electrical arc at least.
And it also mostly happened in a single day, so stretching that out didn't make much sense to me.
7805275 fairy enough, pacing is a hard thing to do, I know I can't set good pacing even if it meant my life.
7807514 One thing I do know is that I can write a decent fight scene, like a weapon copying character of mine taking down Team CRDL alone.
I'm going to go reread that. It's very cool.
Slicey Lifey stuff? Do I smell a doctor who reference? timey wimey stuff?
8841146 I don't know what you're smelling, but I've got me some popcorn, and it smells good.
Do this soon please.
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Haha! I knew I read this before! I found my old account! Hazah! Although it's alot different from what I remember, dope
Yeesh. Poor Yang must be super exhausted. Hope she sleeps well.Glad she has realized that there are indeed things worth literally fighting for, and sort of found her fighting spirit?