Page generated in 0.072 seconds
Total duration
965 users online
111,659 hits today, 1,872,792 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I hate being a critic, but that's not a haiku. A haiku is 5 7 5, while you've got 5 6 4.
Well...That was both Horrifying and unexpected... So much for the Surprise, This is gonna take awhile for Yang to get over this Ordeal and After This, I Doubt Yang would try going near the Sea or Transforming into a different species again.
As Pinkie said: "What Now?"
Wait, Celestia's spying on Yang? Or is it the entirety of the Mane 6?
...... Fine, I'll ask the obvious question. Why?
I mean, it's a diplomatic mission, but that just makes it worse! If you don't trust the people you send, don't send them in the first place!
Or... maybe he was just in the right place at the right time? Maybe he wasn't there specifically to spy on the girls?
8413810
It's got a tvtropes page that can do that for me!
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/MyImmortal
8413846 Hero's is two, Endangered is three, trail is tw- no, trail is one. I'll fix that.
8413847 It certainly will be tough to get her back down there.
8413856 Diplomatic mission? No, it's a casual summons so Skystar can see Yang. And that beach, unknown to Yang, is watched over by the royal lifeguard(s) because that's the shortest way to and from Seaquestria. He only reports when something strange happens, like Yang coming out bleeding a whole lot. If she went down there and came back just fine, there would have been no report. So it was more that he was at the right place at the right time and just did his job.
8414027 Hooray for laziness. And I didn't have to read much of the page to see what you were talking about. I promise you, I couldn't write that bad if I tried to.
My god. I sat for about a minute just silently screaming Ow!!! To what happened to yang. That seriously sucks
8413847
I agree fully. I myself was thinking about giving a long explenation (I tend to be verbose ) about how traumatized Yang must be now and how they could try again after months of therapy to help with her new fear of the sea (Thalassophobia). So thanks for saving my time.
PS: If Skystar has at least a bit decency, she will agree to meet Yang at the shallow cost.
Cryptic
you know a funny thing happened I just finished reading this story and was wondering when it would update and lo and behold it updated too bad I was too tired to read it when the update was fresh and hot
....... nope still doing it
8414361
That, or, if the clues and semi-common interpretation of the movie trailer is correct, she can turn back into a hippogryph and visit on land....
8414573
No, haiku. :3
I want MOAR!! *cough cough* Scuze me.
8422393
I did say I can't spell good and I meant the W in RWBY
8422405 Hey, I'm right there with ya, buddy. I want MOAR too.
Oh, wait, you're talking about chapters. I thought you might have been talking about Lego pieces. Sorry.
8422374
You know that not the first time I some ones parents got the refinance I made. Being from MLP g1 is painful some times
8422529
Why do I get the feeling that she is going to be tramatized
reason number 1242 why you should NEVER substitute a baleful polymorph for the simple combination of freedom of movement and water breathing. Seaquestria has some DAMN retarded mages if they can't figure that shit out.
8414573
Zero from borderlands vibe here
When writing haikus
The last line very often
Refrigerator