Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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well thats kind of... dickish of celestia to do. :(
I wonder what would be on Thmas playlist about now?. House of Fun by Maddness? Hotel California? The Birdy Song?
As for Gemini, Celestias been watching Dan Vs Equestria again.
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Which one? I'm in the middle of one, but they all seem pretty fun.
shit now i'm dyin to know where this ending leads
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There one where Dan upgraded the Treebarys security system again.
This was at the end of the chapter text before the A/N, just what is this?
I have to admit. This was pretty good. Something different from the typical "bucking the cute little human" most of these chapters are. And it even got me a few chuckles. Well done.
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Yup. Feels good to do something different from time to time.
And the end to this chapter was garbage. Celestia deliberately manipulated them into ending up there and says they need to be punished for 'breaking into' her room? That's like someone intentionally standing at the bottom of a slide and when someone inevitably runs into them, they tell them that since they ran into them that they need to be punished despite not knowing someone was standing at the bottom just so they could 'punish' them.
Enjoyable, if un expected
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I'm inclined to agree.
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The punishment is mild humiliation for falling in Gemini's trap. It's basically a lesson on not talking to strangers, which Celestia allowed to happen in the first place because, without knowing who the parties were, she figured the lesson would be warranted.
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Yes Celestia was a part of it. Gemini normally can't do what it did without approval or as Celestia told them, 'a bit of Alicorn magic". She perpetuates the rumors about the hidden pools exactly so she can do what she did to them.
The story was actually very good up til now but the ending to this chapter seriously has already turned my enjoyment into a bit of disgust.
TROLLESTIA STRIKES AGAIN!!!
Yeah, gotta agree with the people saying Celestia was being a dick. Helps set up prank, prank happens, punishes the victims for being pranked. Makes sense to me
All in all, tho, it doesn't hurt my enjoyment of the rest of the story. Keep on keeping on, dude.
I got a severe case of "The Shining" when Gemini appeared.
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That's why she's disliked. Her chess mastering abilities can cast a dark light.
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its call entrapment. and its VERY illegal. basically she created a scenario where they cant win. all they wanted was a pool to swim around in and she created a situation where she can "punish" them? then even wanted to back out and leave it alone. its like when someone in an anime accidentally sees the chick naked and is called a perv and gets the shit kicked out of them. but this is much worse as she created the problem for them to stumble into then punish them for it. id of told celestia to eat a dick. but atleast you are changing it. really if they knew it was her pool and purposely snuck in to spy on her.. then yeah. fuck em up :P but really. this, just really bugs me. :P
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If you'll notice, that ending is no longer present.
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see that is a much better ending.. both offering them a resolution and conveying celestias motherly, if still raunchy side. still the original ending still has a little marit for a story later on if you want to use it, so id hold onto it. :P surprise being a little pervy and wanting to go have a little to much fun, the punishment will fit the crime :P
The new version of this chapter is so much better than what was the original idea.
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Weird. I guess you could just copy/paste from my comment? Or copy/paste from Google search itself?
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Ah heck, that's almost spoilers my dude. In any case, I hope something happens with that arc (just don't tell me anything, just let me read it for myself)
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Those are some fitting gifs.