Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Red vs Blue when Tucker was talking to Tex and Caboose didn't understand it?
Bit of advice; NEVER underestimate people's ability to complain about something.
Luna does bring up a good question; how has Blueblood managed to avoid a Celestia punishment until now? I guess no-one wanted to be the tattle tale and without a direct accuser Sunbutt couldn't do anything about it.
No doubt she knew what was going on but if no one steps forward nothing can be done.
Blueblood needs more lessons in humility, not enough of it yet. Or he could stand to be in the story less, but as it is right now things are unresolved but, well, not everything in life gets resolved. At least in a way you know about, pretty sure time resolves all at some point.
Not much else to talk about this chapter. Other than that silly maid, I don't want to be speciesist but she really proves the "feather brain" syerotype... .
Luna is best pwny
I got to say that Blueblood just won the title as the stupidest stallion in Canterlot/Equestria for thinking that his "plan" to punish Thomas even though Thomas has Luna's protection. Hope that his humiliation continues. Also, thank you so much for the Monday chapter.
6423424 Victory is yours.
6423445 That does seem to be one of the themes of this story.
6423466 You are most welcome. I'm happy to please.
6423529 I'm surprised there aren't any. Could have sworn there was a group dedicated to Blueblood in a positive light. Oh well. Thanks.
Love it... I love ever bit of it! I'm very happy with the latest chapter, its very well done and I'm kinda glad Tom stood his ground and didnt cower in fear...
Cant wait to see how much intrest he has incured from Tali... LOL Thats gonna be amusing!!!
6423601 We shall see.
6423617 Happy to please.
That was awesome it was awesome that Thomas and Luna where able to double team Blueballs bitch fit .And that Thomas stood up for himsalf.I can.t wait to see what Tia does to Blueballs.
6423557 Did I win?
6424941 First and only.
6424973 Really? Nobody else got that reference?
6425341 More likely they saw you got it and didn't bother.
*sigh*
I honestly hope Blueblood's punishment involves a French Maid's outfit, a chastity belt, and a leash that gets passed around. Anyway, why did Luna give her attendants a disapproving look? It's not like there was anything they could do?
6427198 I'll consider that. As for Luna's disapproval, that will be addressed later.
6427872 Not my fault. It just popped in my head and demanded to be written.
Yeah! Che insegnerà Blueblood una lezione!
Bel lavoro.
6428392 Thank you
Seeing Blue Blood suffer is a thing that comes often in your chapters. 8D
I was wondering what would happens if Blue Balls was thrown by the window and be catched not by a pegasi but by a batpony who will scare the shit out of him. 8D
6431085 As opposed to sticking with the story that he's merely relatively fragile compared to other Equestrians and, say, not give foreign powers or terrorists motivation to kill or kidnap him.
oooh! threatened Demonstration in Definestration! (Tossing people out of windows) I approve.
Also nice to see Thomas learning he can stand up for himself against these giants.
That's three unicorns so far who can teleport. I think you're using it a bit much. It has to be at least a slightly difficult spell so I don't see why so many would use it so readily.
It was nice seeing Blueblood being put in his place here.
6544453 i agree with your reasoning there.
How come Luna gave the attendants a disapproving look btw?
Aaaand I'm out.
Yeah, this went as I expected. Franky is right, just once a portrayal that's not this one-sided... Oh well. Have fun.
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Almost all Anthro/Clop stories involving someone in a relationship with Celestia or Luna use Blueblood (if he appears) as a one-dimensional Hate Sink to make their OC look good. That's why I noted my worries in an earlier chapter.
This looks to be the case here as well. At least the setup makes more sense than most I've seen, but it's still something I'd rather not have to deal with. So, the story just isn't for me.
hmm, i know this is late but im' gonna guess gelding for Bluebitch.
A proud fist in the air for thomas. And a for LUNA!
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delete 'the'
Champagne anyone?
Comma
No. Describe it, with actual description words.
I must have missed something. What did the attendants do, aside from snicker at Blueblood?
8117889 It's more what Moonlight did that the attendants didn't.
AHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!!!
🤣
YES!! KARMA AT ITS FINEST! great job on this man! :D
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Appreciated.
Blue blood dun fucked up xD
Take that Blueblood!!!! Mwahahahahahah!!!!
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Glad you're liking things so far. However, I'd wait a bit before jeering old Blue.
That little blue prick got what he deserved I would have shot him in the head with a fucking 50 cal sinper I REALLY hate him THAT much.
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Uh, no. Blueblood wasn't that bad in the show, and he's not that bad here. Keep reading to see.