Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Someone put that cab driver on the Princesses Special Reserve.
So, like a real relationship?
So Thomas is now broke.
Luna's reaction at the fact that she didn't need to forge documents to learn cooking was absolutely hilarious, especially with how serious she became in the aftermath. Thomas, Talon, and Moonlight buck-brained reaction to Luna forcing the driver to driver at lightspeed and the amount of accidental positions they got into was funny. The last line had me rolling in the floor with laughter. Great job.
6915307 You assume she doesn't have someone better already on reserve?
6915319 A remarkably fitting comparison.
6915328 Just a little bruised. He'll walk it off.
6915339 It wasn't the forging documents that was the issue. She realized that there are ways to learn besides going to a fancy school with professors who are paid more to talk than to teach. I certainly had fun writing those parts as well.
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This is Celestia.
Why not have your cake And eat it too.
thanks for the update!!
6915359 I was referring to Luna throwing ALL HIS MONEY at the waiter.
6915387 She'll reimburse him as soon as she comes back to her senses.
LOL! Good chapter was good, Later chapters could show how Moonlight is hoping to be more involved, and also Tom could start understanding body language more.
I also Sooo want to see some new maids for luna, that's gonna be fun
Eating is the primary function of a mouth. And no i am not talking about a girl.
Great chapter, just a bunch of fun activity between all of them. Simple yet kept the story moving.
this had be LOTF I loved it all ,It was a funny,sweet and cute read.
Mwahahahaha ! Lot of akwardness and fun ! 8D
*put on the horsemask* I love it !
Were is the prench batpony ? :'(
6916713 Happy to hear it.
6917168 Application for this job takes time. We will see new members shortly. And by shortly I mean in several weeks because I'm still waiting for my editors.
Not sure which was more amusing. Luna not thinking to take cooking lessons or the cab ride?
Also curious if all those suggestive positions were entirely accidental or alicorn assisted?
6917416 Luna had her focus elsewhere. The only logical explanation for this is that the universe is conscious and is messing with them for it's personal amusement.
6917423 Yeah, I can see that being the case.
The carriage part was hilarious XD
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I have a feeling this is about to get good.
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
6922996 You have my permission to write it out, so long as you credit me as the source.
Yes I get to fuck Luna.
Wow, did Luna get pissed. I guess Luna is upset for not thinking about it...or was she told she had to go to cooking school by somepony else?
6924588 More like she's been made aware of her mistake and is set on correcting it.
Luna eats an oreo.Can Thomas save her in TIME??
They finally caught up with your story. and my curiosity. we know that Luna had also personal desires cook and her incazzatura hope not bad ports in regard to Thomas.
The scenes of the coach made me roll on the bed laughing. compliments!. the next update!
I and Captain america catched that reference, May the force be with you
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Welcome to the Force Tali!
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Thomas replies,"Tastes like chicken?"
Because eating is the primary purpose, you clop-minded whorse.
Nah, not all of us.
Comma after 'you.'
Some tense confusion here. Either it's "I feel weird", or it's "not have the sun".
*schedule