Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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So ... they made her a Big Mac, complete with special sauce.
Rogue formatting characters at the end?
So ... I still want to punch Blueballs in the face, and I imagine Thomas does too.
kinky samish is kinky. well done. i didn't see that comin
Doesn't feel too good, does it, Celestia?
And Shimoneta makes its return once again.
Hell yeah it is. This story is definitely in my top 10 for HiEs, if not my top 5, and I've read a lot of HiEs.
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Thanks for the catches.
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Probably because its actually kind of gross and only cute/sexy because of author creative liberties.
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Good times!
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Happy to entertain.
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lol true dat
Luna loved her Big Mac Whopper with Ranch Dressing?
Blueblood, aint?
A jizz sandwich. Gross.
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A love sandwich. Not the same.
If I got a damn sandwich for Christmas
That has to be the weirdest sandwich OF THE WORLD!!!
Quick question, are the royal harams system excludly for only Luna and Celstia or could any princess create one for themselves?
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Cadence just hasn't gotten around to forming hers.
Too bad Luna can't pull a Cimerrian from Reykan's "A Substitute Nightmare" and pull some of Thomas' memories out for others to see. He could show everyone the "Nightmare Before Christmas" movie. Then again, "The Grinch Who Stole Christmas" would probably be more appropriate, though personally, "Home Alone 3" would be my choice. I can just picture all the foals in the room watching this movie and thinking of building traps to catch super spies at their own houses. Luna and Celestia would probably get a kick out of that (so long as nopony got hurt).
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We're getting around to that, but not until Thomas' herd gets a particular new member.
Hey Typist Gray I want to say that I love your story and I need your help. I can't read further than Best Nightmare Night Ever and it is driving me bonkers. I can't stand the idee that Firestorm is just seeing every intimate moment of Thomas. It kind of spoil all of those moment for me, especially the romantique, emotional or sexual ones. It's like Firestorm is suddenly a god who can see everything relevant to the plot and is going to be the heroes next opponant and I can't root for theme because I have no idee how they could win. And I can't stand that all of Thomas intimity is just thrown out the window for no explained reason and that Firestorm can see all of the sex Luna is having. It feel like he is going to use it against her somehow.
Also I am kind of disappointed of how in this chapter : Time to Tell the Truth Thomas just glanced over the fact that Talon knew is secret from the beggining and juste didn't tell him for... reason? It felt like a quick to the balls and I think Thomas should have a heartfelt talk with whoever is responsible because that was kind of mest up. I haven't seen anyone else say the seem things so maybe I'm just taking that to seriously. If so, sorry for bothering you but I really really really liked your story so far and now, suddenly, I feel bad reading it.
It's like Thomas stoped being the protagonist of the story and started being it's victime. Equestria throw stuff at him and either he take them in the face and suffer before other tell him the solution or he's not even aware of it and all of his most intimate moments are broadcasted to some random stallion. At this point I actually feel bad for Thomas constantly and can't take pleasure in reading anymore.
If there is anything you can give me to make the story fun again, like, he's going to get his intimacy back soon or he's going to start getting on the same level as the rest of the character, that would be great. the intimacy stuff especially because it's really messing me up for some reason.
Sorry for the typo and thank you for writting. :)
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Oh yeah. To be honest, I'd forgotten all about Firestorm. He's not all that relevant to the story, present only as a favor to someone else. I won't spoil what I have planned, but suffice to say you shouldn't worry too much. Really, I've been procrastinating his story because of how little I care about him or his relevance to the story. Might even write him out at some point, but the fact remains that if he's unimportant to me, he shouldn't be too important to you.
As for Thomas' reactions, well, that's just kind of how he is. Besides dealing with a massive culture gap, Thomas is also autistic. That mean he will ALWAYS face obstacles in his relations with others. And while it wasn't deliberate, it is fitting to his character that he wouldn't notice such things as Talon's flippancy. Frankly, I stress over these relationships daily, but the sad truth is that, compared to a lot of other writers on this site alone, I'm not all that good. A couple times there's been major outrage from my readers over points I hadn't even considered until it was pointed out. The problem, then, being that ten or so chapters with this flaw have already been written, so I can either do a major rewrite, or find some lesser way to mitigate the damage.
The story to come will have highs and lows. I intend to throw all manner of shit at the guy, only to intersperse it with moments of ridiculous wish fulfillment. Lot's of good friends, bitter enemies, people of no real importance, and lots and lots of kinky sex.
OMGthis chapter was so sweet at the end .I'm happy to finally know the truth about Bule Blood I loved all I can't wait to see what's next.
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Yeah. I'm glad for the changes I decided to make to him.
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Yeah. Still, I think I’d be pretty pissed if that was me. No one should have to fear being raped for some sort of test. I hope Thomas finds some way to get back at him and Celestia for that. I understand that his job is important to the crown, but some lines shouldn’t be crossed.
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there was no real threat of rape. yeah blueblood was being kind of stuck up. the first time he just implied it and asked him to come. the second time was just as silly. but it was still telling come to his chambers. he never really threatened to drag him away in the gym. but he still got shot down by moon and tali. and even in lunas room where the climax happaned. i would of been standing there laughing a little with blues audacity to take me away from luna, only to get shot down hard.
in reality i can see how blues service is needed, and in this story i actually like the way he is. its not vindictive, mean or spiteful. yes he is a stuck up dick, but he loves his country and the crown. and once you get threw that he is actually very approachable. i would of shaken his hand, forgiven and thanked him and said i appreciate what he does, even tho its a shit job, someone has to do it and if you love it then more power to you. i think once you have mutual respect for one another then its a whole new ballgame.
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Wow. I could not have said that better myself. Thank you very much. I will add, however, that Blue doesn't think it's a shit job at all. We all have our oddities and Blueblood's is that he thrives off of negative attention. I suppose you could compare it to if a Kardashian had political authority. He's absolutely stuck up and the idea of fooling so many of the ignorant masses into focusing on him instead of actual problems just tickles him pink, making him feel very superior.
Now that I'm writing this down, it actually kind of embodies the Equestrian ideal that the fandom has fallen in love with. In the world of FiM, everyone has a purpose. Even personality disorders can find a way to put their personal problems to good use.
And, as a reward for your clever observation, I'll also add that Blue is so good at convincing people that he's an a-hole that he's managed to convince more than a few dissidents that he wants to overthrow the crowns and has wormed his way into a number of secret societies.
Still don't get why they want to make Thomas nude, we don't wear clothes because we're prudes we wear them because unlike other creatures we don't have fur to keep us warm or protect us from other elements.
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It's more about the fear itself. Something to remember is that Thomas is extremely weak when compared to others in Equestria so has no real defense against something like that happening. Something else that bothers me is that this makes Luna's defense of Thomas seem far less genuine that at first since she knew all along it was just a way to manipulate him to get closer to not only her but others as well. It just comes off as unnecessarily harsh to someone that they say that care about so much and paints Celestia in an even darker theme for me considering it was implied that it was her idea and instead she sent Blue Blood to tell Thomas the truth and not either herself or Luna.
Even though I understand Blueblood's explanation and how it makes sense I would still feel hurt and a little bit betrayed if I was Thomas that only Blueblood, kibitz and later talon when she was told it was ok to do so came forward and explained/apologized for the whole situation. Thomas proved himself months ago and yet now just before heathswarming Celestia out of the blue decides to come clean???
Again I understand the necessity of what Blueblood did but if I were Thomas my anger at the likes of Celestia would put a strain on our relationship to be sure.
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Yeah, that's why I tend to do a lot of retcons with this story. Thomas' reactions are atypical, and ponies view things differently as well, so no one behaves as my audience expects. It can be tough balancing everything to ensure maximum audience enjoyment while maintaining the narrative.
IS THIS WHOLE STORY,,,,JUST ONE BIG CONSPIRACY ???? AT THIS POINT IF I WERE THOMAS....I WOULD BE CONTEMPLATING TO END MYSELF.
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Trying to have the guards arrested him for not coming to blueblood is not acceptable behavior and akin to rape.