Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Speaking of sea monsters, I wonder if the brain witch there would be afraid of Jormungandr, or if it would produce other emotions like awe. It makes me think of that feeling you get when you imagine standing on a chilly mountain top in the early morning and look out to into the distance and see something enormous minding its own business. I don't know how to describe that sort of feeling besides alluding to that sort of scenario you sometimes find in fantasy works, where you conquer a great challenge, and then see you're still a small fish in a big pond. Or the character you've been following is, at any rate. It's a sort of comforting feeling to see the story is just getting started, but you still feel vaguely chilly for some reason.
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Yeah, my bad.
I think I understand what you're getting at, and I might want to include such a sensation later, if I find the right opportunity.
Of course, if the monsters of the deep of Subnautica aint large enough, Thomas could always go with a bit of comedy, starting with The Great A'Tuin?
another great chapter, and yes new ship
I can't remember if it's been explored but has Thomas taken the harem down into the realm of genre horror in his dreams? Like... Human levels of horror? It's probably too dark for this story but... I really want to know their reactions and inevitable breakdown (especially Star) if Thomas ends up taking them through a melancholic, nostalgic walk through the Ishimura in Dead Space, the desolate, foggy, sinful town of Silent Hill, or even through the many sheer horror movies that we humans have traumatized ourselves with.
...They'd probably quarantine his dreams afterwards from all present and future Dream Walkers to be honest.
The flow was better here because it played to your personal characteristics in writing. You think a lot like Thomas, so these philosophical discussions just kind of emerged from your forehead like Athena.
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Probably not considering he probably doesn't want to give them nightmares without clearing it through Luna first the last thing she needs is more nightmares.
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I'm just happy someone knows at least a bit of what the fuck I'm on about with that. I'm not great at explaining things to people.
So the deer aren't canon here? Should I expect the same with the Convocation of Creatures and Nightmare Rarity?
Guess the culture between ponies and humans would be different when their country (the only one of real significance, at least,) is built on a history of unity and kindness, whereas human countries... aren't. Then again, part of that may be due to most ponies only really having one nation that's ruled by benevolent dictators as opposed to us having to make due.
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Eh, Subnautica is still cooler.
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So it would appear, thanks.
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Unfortunately, these dreams are based on stuff I've personally enjoyed over the years, and I've never been much for horror. So, I've never played those games.
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Thanks. I like how you described that.
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True. Although, I heard Scooby Doo Zombie Island is like a kid-friendly horror film, so maybe that would be fine.
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I'm playing fast and loose with continuity from the comics, picking and choosing whatever best suits the story. Therefore, no spoilers, except that we can look forward to some unpleasantness.
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Are the Sabnautical leviophants not big and intimidating enough? Are you out of your mind? The sight of them makes me cringe.
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In addition to the horrors, there are also places that are simply terrifyingly beautiful... I don't remember if it was mentioned here. For example the Dune, the deserts of Arrakis, Shai Hulud-Blessed be the Creator and His Water. Blessed is His coming and His going. May His appearing cleanse the world. May He preserve the world for His people.
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Fair enough! It's really just wishful thinking, everything you already do enjoy has been really great to see you bring to your world.
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Dude, don't needlessly traumatize people with those roaring nightmares.
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Glad to hear it, but I'll see about throwing in some scarier stuff as soon as an opportunity presents itself.
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I can think of one particularly scary place. An Osmium Court Hive-infested moon, crypts and all. A lunar environment that lacks an atmosphere, and yet it's crawling with glowing tri-eye'd crustaceans from a long dead gas giant, what will suck out your soul and terror to use for experiments and worship to their Sword Logic, and the entity that gave them the premise for such notions.
Luna (the moon, not the pony (God, I feel like Dagoth-Ur, the person not the place)) is a spooky place to be when there's a horde of Hive swarming you with claw and soulfire and sword.
On the topic of scary things, I recall Thomas wanting to dress as Freddy Krueger, but Luna talked him out of it so he doesn't scare the nobles. So Luna likely knows about A Nightmare on Elm Street, at the very least. Wonder what she thinks about it?
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Please don't use the Ancients (Lovecraft)... They come from dreams, this will end badly...
hold up, how is it considered a consequence for a mistake if the act is supposed to feel good for him?🤨 Like, Thomas will probably start making more mistakes just to have Surprise sit on him, or at least, that’s what I would’ve done😂
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She probably thinks it's uncomfortably familiar to real monsters she's faced.
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Not quite. Rather than something big and roaring, I've written a scene that gets nice and personal.
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Surprise is still figuring out the tough part of tough love. It's a working progress.
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Wonder how much more uncomfortable it would be if she knew her vs. Freddy is something talked about by vs. debaters to the point someone commissioned a song for a potential battle with them.
On a lighter note, most agree Luna stomps the creep.
Heh. Thomas, the whole gods-are-perfect stuff may be what lots of priesthoods want their respective flocks to believe so the latter don’t question their authority in particular, but have you ever looked into actual mythology? It’s pretty difficult to find even a single god there who’s not basically just a plain old person writ large.