Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Entertaining and relatable, well done!
You can just about hear the trademark on that 'civilized'
I wonder what bribes it would take to get past that border? fun chapter btw
I.forgotten how much I missed this story. Thank you for not letting it die like so many others on this site have, even well before the end of the show. This has always been a treat to read, well thought out characters and plots. An over arching theme with little sublets to keep you from being to stuck on one narrative. Please keep up the good work and thank you for sharing this with us!
Still curious to see whats going to end up happening should the agents and such learn of humanity and its darker histories should Thomas ever spill the beans.
Also Is Luna aware of the ponies watching them and the plans they have?
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Lovely to hear. Thank you.
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It made me smile knowing you got that.
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All of your cupcakes, for starters.
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Dude, you have no idea how much I needed to hear those exact words. My hope is to make it to at least season 2. There are big plans for the royal wedding.
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The agents have learned enough that they can infer a lot. However, they can't actually make a move without cause, and Thomas has been pretty benign thus far. As for Luna, that's hard to say. She's used to guards watching her every move, but she might not be as aware of all the new agencies that have popped up in her absence.
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I hope whatever their plans, that Luna can keep him safe at least.
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And I can't wait to read it! I understand the struggle to keep writing in the face of life and the way things can drag you down. I can't speak for everyone but I hope u take this at your own pace. As much as we would love Daily and/or weekly updates, one, it's not feesible with a story with this much length, proper narrative, and a mitciulous attention to grammar and details. Two I'd hate for you to get writers burnout and be overwhelmed by pressure. You take care of you and yours, keep that creative spark going, and your dedicated fanbase will still be here waiting when u get back!
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On a more fan boy lvl, I can't wait to see what happens when the spark between our main man and twilly gets brought up to Luna! A part of me wonders what silvers mom would think that she's not lead mare! There's so many other things running though.y head with this story! I look forward to the next! Ok fanboy section done lol take care have a great day everyone!
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Very much appreciated. I look forward to deserving such praise.
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You already do! I can relate strongly to the main character because I to suffer from depression and sever anxiety. Makes social situations hard and I'm always second guessing people and my own thoughts and self worth. To see someone in the same internal struggles work through it with a supportive group such as the harem is refreshing and breaths a bit of hope for me. You also make it compelling to where those that do not suffer heavily from the issues can still grasp and relate to the main character. I do love how personable the writing is. It's got a lot of slice of life, and I see them finding more about themselves as they grow together. Sorry if I keep rambling I just really like the story lol.
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Yeah, this was also something I needed to hear. As a reward, here's a hint at an upcoming conflict.
Nature hates a vacuum, but magical nature takes it as a personal insult.
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Lol it is so vague and cryptic yet enticing and thrilling to speculate! Doubly looking forward now! Looking forward to it! Thank you!
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No problem, but think about it. Where on Equestria would you find a spot that is devoid of all magic?
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There are a few that come to mind actually. The first one that stands out to me always bugs me though😜.
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Ass is a slur?
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Considering there's an ethnic group called asses, kind of.
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.................there's a what? Called What?
Another name for donkey is an ass.