Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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This was a pretty good chapter story and character development wise. It does make me wonder if the subject of Blueblood is going to be brought up to Luna. Either after the clop or a little down the road with the noble pain in the ass coming in asking him why he didn't show up in ear shot of either princesses. It would be interesting to see what comes of it. As I doubt you left it there for a one of "Blueblood is a perverted jerk" jokes. From here I can see this be more story development either in the sense of Thomas or in the world itself. It also makes me wonder how "wild" Luna's tastes are going to be and if it's going to involve more characters to come into the bedroom sort of speak.
6225367 Blueblood will return. He's one of the tags, after all. However, he's a bit of a lazy bastard so is less willing to stay up long enough to catch Thomas at night.
As for the clop, I'm a little hesitant how that'll work out since I've never really written that sort of thing to any serious extent. However, I intend for things to start relatively mild and then escalate over time.
Great chapter. I'm happy to see more of this story.
6225556 And I'm happy to share it.
Nice chapter, I like all the world building so far, can't wait for the next one (I hope it has a loooot of words and details). Maibe in the near future We will have a group or mares, a princess and maibe a grippon team up for ravage Thomas's little body.
Keep up The good work.
So far, the story is really good !
I like Moonlight Shield and I hope she'll... Get her turn. 8D
Can't wait for what's coming next !
6225702 I'm happy you're excited, but that won't happen for a while me thinks.
6225963 A lot of people want that. I wonder if they'll still want it once its revealed why that would be awkward.
6227318 That's okey, I can wait
6227320 I don't care akwardness ! Even if she is the daughter of Luna ! That'll just make things more... kinky !! 8D
6228448 I may just have to have a vote.
6229166 I vote YES YES YES ! 8D
That just how it happens. You never know which stories will click with the author or catch on with the readers. In any case, this is a nice chapter.
6227320 Awkward?
6232816 I haven't revealed that part yet. However, it does have something to do with Blue Blood.
6233905 PLEASE don't tell me that BlueBlood is related to Moonlight Shield somehow!
6234385 Not by blood. But if it makes you feel better, Blueblood, simply by being Blueblood, basically screwed her out of something special.
6238705 Bummer, and yes.
Luna strikes me as a foilcon, now is it only colts or does she like fillies as well?
That brings up the question on what modern day Equrestia's age of consent is. It tends to be based somewhat on average life span, so it matters how old ponies can get.
I'm sure back before Luna was banished it was a lower number than it is now, but what is it now?
Will we be seeing Royal Lunar Consort Pip? She is going to become his favorite princess after all.
That was a so funny it had me cracking up.
Oooh! I see the tailhole issue was eventually addressed after all. ^_^
Shame Thomas didn't put the shorts on backwards for a laugh, I'd bet the tail hole could have fitted something...else?
7895879 Huh. That could be fun.
You might want to specify the predawn glow.
Blueblood's revenge?
8117433 S'alright. I've heard it called the 'preglow' before.
Slanderous. Libel is written, slander is spoken.
Back to quietly enjoying...
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As a stickler for details, I appreciate the point.
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Now get out there and bring me pictures of Spiderman
Eeeeehhhh........ starting to get weirded out with the whole colt thing, makes Luna seem child predator like, foalcon, I think is the term for it...... gonna keep reading, but yeah.....
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Ngl, I hope it’s just poorly communicated to be something else. This story is starting out well so far, but that’s a line I don’t cross.