Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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I noticed that brief fantasy of hers made no mention of Thomas.
I wonder why.
6508132 Oh, he was there, just in that one position that was only vaguely described. Also, with all those positions listed, he'd fit well into any as far as she's concerned.
6508418 Not for a while though. If that happens at all. A lot of stuff is still undecided. The only thing I know for certain is that I'm gonna drag my heels at pretty much everything.
I never have guessed about an erection spell.
Interesting concept. Somewhat understandable.
UB or horn vore?
6508467 Appreciated.
6508491 Never heard of the second one, but I'll not be confirming or denying anything until it happens.
6508509 nsfw links
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6508675 Weird, but no. Never heard of it before, and it's not my thing.
That last line made me laugh.
It's nice to see Thomas and Luna develop a closer bond in the bedroom. Also, Luna fantasizing about expanding her harem and her last line in the chapter was very funny.
6509002 Nice to see this chapter worked out so well.
I love this story! Keep up the good work!
6509330 Celebrating while holding the heroes hostage. Funny thing is, this line would not be out of place in the chapter I'm currently writing.
I meant to comment on the previous chapter but this whole month has been overly busy and I've been wore out something terrible. A couple of the points I'd have made on that chapter can be done here in one big post, adding in some stuff that is related but doesn't show up in either chapter.
So, let's talk head canons, specifically erogenous zones of little cartoon horses;
I'm all for wings as sexy places, especially when you pointed out the "because they need to be able to feel air currents". I hadn't ever thought of that before so it really does make a whole hell a lot of sense they'd be sensitive to the touch and I can see most people wings wings of that sort feeling pleasure from touch, or maybe the majority wouldn't feel anything sexual at all for the same reason, else they'd be getting off to the wind in their wings all the time.
Be funny if the norm was "wing sensitive but not sexual" and you did have a couple that it was "'that kind' of feel" so they didn't really fly all that often and when they did it was alone and a bit before bed and probably a shower afterwards... .
Then, of course, you'd have the ones that felt more pain than anything else but that'd probably be something they'd medically treat.
I'm not a big fan of "wing-boners" though, I mean, yeah, sure a few would probably have it happen, enough for it to be a phrase and most people with wings knows what that phrase means but not to the point where it was the majority of people 'popping wingies'.
For me the source of the meme (Dash's wings going out when Pinkie showed up on stage in her showgirl outfit) seemed more out of 'surprise' than 'sexual arousal'. And Celestia and Luna walk around with their wings out a lot and I haven't really seem much in the way of them "always being aroused" because of it. (Molestia and that ilk doesn't count.)
For horns I prefer that they be nothing but normal bone when not casting a spell. No spell equals no sensation from the horn. I keep wibbling back and forth on if they have a thin coat of skin and fur-slash-hair over them or are pure bone that magically matches coat color. I can see either and don't have a real preference on either of them, though "fuzzy horns" is just a funny ideas so maybe that one a bit more so than the other.
Having said the above I do agree that "horn jobs" can be a thing. Unicorn channels just a little magic into the horn and their partner does...whatever, mouth, wings, magic, some other body part-slash-location and you've got a nice sexual sensation going. Doesn't have to be any real spell, just getting the magic flowing.
I'm ambivalent on the so called "magiculation", where magic spurts out of the horn, either alongside a more 'normal' climax as as a separate thing. For me that's more of a "case-by-case" sort of thing, some do, some don't, maybe even most don't.
In this chapter the way Thomas said Talon said it made it out like the horn was sensitive on its own, yet Luna specially channeled some magic into it for his ministrations so I'm not sure which way it works in this verse.
As for anything earth pony specific I tend to have the frogs of their hooves be very sensitive to that sort of thing, but then again I would think that all ponies frog's would be sensitive. So, really, this is another thing the earth ponies get shafted on when it comes to the fandon as I haven't really seen anything that I really like and nothing special is coming to mind at all.
For cutie-marks I normally don't have them as being anything special when it comes to anything physical, more a mental thing. They physically represent your core self, having someone else touch that is a very intimate thing. Of course you're going to have outlier cases that have "sensitive marks" that get more enjoyment than others from having their marks toyed with in some way.
That's all I can think of at the moment.
This made me chuckle. She needs an eye patch, a wide brimmed hat and a parrot cause swiggity-swooty she's gunna get that booty.
6510070 Interesting ideas, especially earth ponies and their hooves. Think I might have to use that one.
can't wait for next chapter soon
6510232 Nope. No you cannot.
6508675
Nope. Nope, nope, nope, nope, nope. You completely weirded me out.
Loved the chapter. Wish there was a Celestia x human version of this story as well. I wonder if there is one?
6510893 Thank you. And kinda http://www.fimfiction.net/story/228772/the-suns-desire
6511425
I read that one already a long time ago.
6514460 Who can say. Maybe you'll find out. Also, thanks for the favorite.
Good chapter. I love the fantasm of Luna about her future harem ! XD
Just maybe a little thingy... Thomas saying "Tali says" again and again while expliciting Luna what he is doing and why... I was wondering if Luna was going to shut him up. 'cause explanations in bed aren't very romantic.
I know it's for the sake of exposition but, I would have prefered reading it in narration.
But here's just personnal tastes and your story is, as always, most enjoyable ! :D
love it it was awesome read ,Not only did learn horn plasere we also learn more about there first time.And see tham get even closer to each other .And I have to say awesome work Tali teaching him all this, the part with Moonlight was funny it had me cracking up.and if Thomas can't stand stallions maybe some futa insade
6517801 I was thinking it's more along the lines of "I'm about to do this to turn you on."
6518129 Appreciated.
6518532 Ooooh I see...! So Luna is sensitive to teasing. :O
Wonder if this is canon. 8D
6508132
Yeah...
Then later she adds Thomas almost like an afterthought...
Dat ending thou.
ok
I wonder if Thomas would accept a transformation spell and introduce Moonbutt to phalluses of the tentacular variety
I suppose I should be glad that's never been a side effect of my depression.
How has nobody thought that maybe the libido spell is still active?! That would totally explain the reason why his sweat smells so erotic to everypony!
8932150
Because if it were allowed to go on continuously, he'd pass out and potentially suffer long term damage from extreme exhaustion. This sort of thing is only safe in short bursts.