Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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What do you mean by "safe vore"?
The banter between Luna and Thomas was adorable.
I'm not a fan of vore. I like Luna's attendees though.
Vore yes, I enjoy a good Vore story so long as it's good and no blood. If I wanted that I would re-read shingeki no kyojin
I hope he was massaging her shoulders, strutting around behind her, and resting his chin on her neck when he said that, whispering that word in her ear...
Did I just slip there? I'm usually not that romantic....
6277655 Vore is where one person eats another. There are many varieties, including unbirth, going into the vagina, and anal vore, which should be self explanatory. A lot of people don't like it because it often involves death, but that not what I propose. Basically, I'd like scenes like this https://aryion.com/g4/view/308804
6277747 That does seem to be my strong suit.
6277792 They do make these scenes a bit more interesting. And vote noted.
6277803 You should read that anyway, but what you describe is what I'm going for.
6277857 I had always thought concubines were like sex slaves or lesser wives. However, neither is the case here.
6277874 I'm glad you approve.
I'm saying no to vore.
I'm afraid I'll pass on the vore. But don't let me stop you, if you want to write it do it. As long as there's no death I'll probably read it... (just don't trick me like "the mating habbits of batponys" that was hard core)
6277845 emphasis on re-read. meaning to read again. already read all of it. been reading it since the first chapter was translated
6277839 I know what vore is, I was just wondering how you would incorporate it into this story.
6278010 Noted.
6278034 I'll include a disclaimer, like the (clop)
6278150 Luna has magic. She can use it to indulge in all manner of things, stretching, shrinking, enlarging, and more. One possibility is this http://www.fimfiction.net/story/182364/my-knight-in-tiny-armor
6278369 That should prove most entertaining.
Please no vore
6278447 soo its a date?
6280254 It'll be marked with a disclaimer.
6280646 How'd ya guess?
6281086 maaagic... And pinkie pie
6285054 Happy to hear it. And don't worry. I'll consider the spanking for later.
It's your story, write what you want.
6286553 Don't get your tubes tied in a knot, wee lass *imagine me saying that while doing a Sean Connery impression*
The naked horse people will come in time. I just don't want to spoil the audience too quickly.
6286704 I shall, but I'd also like to know the opinions of my readers.
Oh Starry Sky, never change. Every group has one of those people that just doesn't get the hint and you are it my dear.
I hope the two of them enjoy their not-date.
Also I did not get notification about your response here 6287042 . Sometimes if you respond to a comment from a different chapter the person you are responding to doesn't get told about it. Doesn't happen all the time but I've never seen a response on the same chapter as the original comment not give notification.
I was being purposefully over dramatic. Even so, distinct lack of naked horse people. So far we've gotten one, all the others had on some sort of clothing.
6289568 I thought it was pretty clear. "You can go dancing' had the unspoken implication of [by yourself away from us], which both females took as rude.
Unless you tell me where that is, I ain't gonna find it.
It was quite the feat.
6289681 A little. It's certainly something worth exploring.
I read in another story that ponies are considered adults once they get their cutie marks and a job, regardless of age.
Who is Pip?
6289792 Thanks for the catch and congrats on figuring that part out.
6289818 Not sure about the comment thing.
I could tell you were being dramatic, but you're wrong. There have been two naked horse people so far.
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Oh no, I did catch the implications, thing is Thomas didn't and I chalk that up to his different social views. To him he was saying she was free to do as she wanted and didn't need to worry about him, for the two ladies it was a cold dismissal from a stallion they want to bed.
I understand them finding it rude but at the same time they should understand that Thomas isn't that sort of guy and didn't mean it that way.
I was referring to this section;
Since it all seems to be in first person instead of third I took it to be his thoughts.
6290078
That could get real interesting for the "early markers".
From the way marked foals have acted in the show I always felt they were still "children" and, even though they had their cutie mark, where not yet expected to act like, or have the responsibilities of, adults yet.
Pip, more properly Pipsqueak, is the palmetto colt dressed like a pirate who calls Luna his "favorite princess" near the end of the Nightmare Night episode. Because of this LunaSqueak is a popular ship in the fandom.
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Two notifications for five replies, not good odds there.
Who is the first? I was counting Flur so I'm assuming the other nude horse person showed up before her.
I don't count Luna because sexy-fun-times are normally done nude and that was all in private chambers, not out in public. I also don't count Blueblood because I'm remembering him being mentioned to be wearing a bow-tie, which is an article of clothing, and thus he was not nude.
On a non-story related note I'm starting to really hate responding from my phone and its autocorrect. I really should be working... .
6290288 I don't think it's a cultural thing as human women would probably get offended from the same thing. Thomas is just socially awkward.
Oh, Pip. I remember now. Well, things are quite a bit different thanks to Thomas' revealing the future, so that might not happen. I'll be sure to mention him, though.
In any case, updates every monday.
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You didn't tell me who the second naked horse person was.
And yes, I'm going to make this a running joke between us. The title of your story made me come in expecting naked horse people and there is a distinct lack of such. Instead I have found a well written story with an intriguing plot and interesting characters.
Not that I have a problem with that mind you, but there is a certain expectation here that is not being meet.
This is a cute story. The character development is great, and the chemistry between Thomas and Luna is awesome! Looking forward to more.
P.S. A part of me kinda wants Thomas to be bucked by Blueblood (willingly, of course). I wonder if that's gonna happen...
6291315 I had forgotten about Fleur, but I did count Blue Blood because I do not accept Yogi Bear logic that a simple tie is sufficient to cover nudity.
6291377 Happy to hear.
Go back to that chapter and read the comments.
6291575
Oh, I never said anything about coverage. I can get very literal about some things at times, so I'm choosing to be overly literal about this. Naked horse people would be horse people with no clothing on at all. Bow ties, hats [1], collars, all items of clothing.
So I'm guessing you were counting Luna in your tally if you forgot Fleur. And, to be fair, I'll count Luna as well so we agree on the number two! Two makes horse people in the story, ha ha ha.
I really hope at this point you know I'm just messing with you [2] and don't really mean anything about this. But I really do want to read about more naked horse people in your story.
[1] Funny little aside; there is a non-pony story I read a long time ago where the main leading lady said she "was offended by [a male's] nudity, go put some clothing on at once" and so he steps out of the room and comes back in wearing a fedora, and nothing else. She accepts this, because now he is no longer nude.
[2] I may also be coming down with a cold or the flu, I'm not normally this silly.
6291753 Fair enough. In that case, just wait till we get to Ponyville.
OMG he is so ohblivus that she loves him .I mean come on.At least with out knowing it he's getting to love him more.
6292879 The true nature of their relationship will be revealed in due time.
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So you're going for something like this then?
6294419 That's one way to look at it.
I do understand "eating each other out" if that's what you're preferring to as safe vore.
6301249 What you refer to is oral sex. I'm talking about this https://aryion.com/g4/view/308804 Though I'm thinking I might start out with unbirth https://aryion.com/g4/view/296895
6301664
Hmm... so, it's something of a micro/macro type of intercourse? Guess I wouldn't mind, since I just read a few one-shots about it just last night.
6301973 Or same size. It's a very broad topic.
What is it with people and fetishes like vore, scat and pissing? Why do you always insist on ruining good stories with this garbage?