"Ugnh," Fluttershy groaned, her wings erect on her back.
"Ahhhh," Rarity gapsed.
" Ohhhhhoho!" Rainbow giggled.
"Dang nabit!" Applejack said.
"AWESOME!!!!!" Pinkie squealed.
"Ew," Twilight and Chrysalis said at the same time, revolted.
The Mane Six, plus Chrysalis, had decided to go to the new gym that had recently opened shop in lower Ponyville, near the Spa and Sugarcube Corner.
They were all on the treadmills, running (or flapping) their hearts out.
And most of the Mane Six were gawking over Bulk Biceps, who was bathed in sweat. It shone against his perfectly toned muscles, dripping down him ever so slowly while he lifted weights. His muscles rippled again and again...
All but one of the Mane Six was now on the floor after not paying attention. They had stopped running to gawk and had payed the price, which was faceplanting on the smelly gym floor.
Suddenly the door popped open, and Blossomforth trotted in. She trotted over to Bulk and lightly pressed her lips to his cheek before ushering him out of the gym. He wiped his body with a scraggly towel before leaving with Blossomforth.
"Unfair!" Rarity whined.
Chrysalis and Twilight rolled their eyes.
Later...
"Hey, big bro?" Blossomforth asked.
"Why were the Mane Six so pissed? Did they think we are dating or something?"
"Hope not. Cause I ain't no incesty pegasus."
"Me either."
Then they both started off again, stealing glances at each other's bodies.
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Hmmmm I'm honestly not enjoying these last four updates as much as I've enjoyed previous snippets from this collab.
6472800 the author of these four hasn't been online for about nine months, I don't think they were giving their all. I also agree, these haven't been as good as many of the others
Just a couple of quick things: payed=paid. From grammarist.com:
Also, I would put the following all on one line, so we don't think the second line is Bulk Biceps:
Well uh... that got pretty awkward pretty fast. Blossomworth and Bulk Biceps as siblings though, I like it.
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These pieces were written quite a long time ago. Our host hasn't been updating as frequently as they used to, so I can only assume this author has improved since then, but the pieces haven't been altered since their original submission.
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