I gallop down the dark dusty hallway trying to find another way out. I stop and turn on the spot there was meant to be a way out right here, I turn back the way I came and panic, the shadow is getting closer I stare at it. Before when I saw it it looked like another pony but now I see it slightly closer it looks more like, no, it can't be, it looks just like, Discord?
"Twilight, pssst!" I turn to see where the whispering came from. I look down and notice a small black hoof and smirk to myself, "PSSST, TWILIGHT!!" the black hoof shout-whispered. I notice the shadow getting closer, before I know it I' m being whisked under the rock. I can make out the silhouette of Chrisy,
"Chrisy, the thing it was chasing me!! AND IT WAS DISCORD!!" I say only 35% sure of the last part,
"What do you mean Twi? It was Link Joker not some dis-whatsit!" Chrysalis looked at me like I should know who she was talking about,
"WHAT, there's another draconequus?!" I almost shout!!
"Oh, is that what he's called Link Joker, mm ,well yes then there is another. Why is that a big deal?" Chrysilis asks sounding rather calm.
"Chrysalis! Don't you see that means there are more of Discords' kind!" I gasp Discord would be so happy! Maybe not at the fact I thought it was him, but he won't need to know that.
"Yeah, Link showed up when he was just young we didn' know what he was but he had the beautiful pink mane with a draconequus body. We took pity and kept him. He doesn't usually do this whole charging thing though." Chrysalis shrugged, I looked at her PINK MANE.
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Uh... this one... huh. Seems like it's in dire need of several editors.
Hmm, quite a few grammatical errors, but it's a nice idea.
That was intristing
What?
6194222 And a priest. It's one thing to make a few grammar errors, which only distract from the plot, but to reach the point where we can't even figure out what the hell the plot is!?
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I apologize, I post the chapters as is if they aren't edited they go up unedited* Most are edited though.
*Excepting when a chapter is just over the line to mature
6200557 I love that line. It's so much fun to dance on.