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This story is a sequel to The Many Secret Origins of Scootaloo

When Scootaloo's attempt at flying causes her to crash into Twilight's lab, it sets off a chain reaction that causes Twilight to disappear, leaves the library in shambles and Scootaloo knocked out. A wave of purple energy rips through Equestria, leaving all to wonder 'great, what now?'

When Scootaloo awakens, she learns from the Bureau of Undoing Trouble from Twilight Sparkle that this world's Twilight is gone... and in her place are dozens of Twilights from different dimensions, tearing across the land. Worse, Nightfall Eclipse, a wicked Twilight from the antimatter universe, is assembling other bad Twilights to form The League of Evil Twilights, who seek to take over Equestria.

Now gifted with the ability to track down these Twilights, thanks to the explosion, Scootaloo will seek out these visitors from other universes in the hopes of sending them home and getting the real Twilight back.

Crisis of Infinite Twilights: Truth, Dare or Drink, the official spin-off, can be found here

Tvtropes Page can be found here

A listing of all the Twilights introduced so far (warning, SPOILERS) can be found here

First Published
21st Sep 2013
Last Modified
7th Jun 2014

Comments ( 1,583 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · 7 · ·

And so it begins.

This story all came about from me thinking about alternate realities. We already have had a few... the Equestria Girl's reality, the Cross and Arrow reality... but I began to think of more and more of them and knew that it could be quite a fun fic. Then, when I hit upon the idea of turning the tables and having Scootaloo be the star, dealing with these alternate Twilights... well, it was too good to resist.

Next chapter will be called Twiley and give us some ideas on what has happened

#2 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · 26 · ·

....the BUTTS Agency?

Ok, I have to read this....

#3 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · 8 · ·

The plot kinda reminds me of the sweetie chronicles...

#4 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · 5 · ·

Looking forward to this story. The Many Secret Origins of Scootaloo was probably my favorite of your stories.

I'm curious as to which alternate realities you're planning on using. Do you plan to use Twilight's from other people stories, ie. Lunaverse or Past Sins Twilight?

#5 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · 5 · ·

Oh crap. Scoots, I think you're a bit screwed...

#6 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

Oh. My. YES!

It is here, at last. :yay:

Write on,

Legion

#7 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · · ·

>>3235137

There is a VERY slight resemblance, but you will see VERY shortly that it is wildly different, especially when the Twilights begin interacting with each other.

>>3235213

I will only confirm that Snowblind's Twilight will appear in this story

#8 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · 8 · ·

This is like the opposite concept of TSC with the same premise. Interesting...

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#10 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · 7 · ·

Paint from the TARDIS?  ...What'd she do, blow up a galaxy just to scratch it?

#11 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · 4 · ·

"No Rainbow… no… I don't wanna go to the Rainbow Factory," Scootaloo mumbled.

A Rainbow Factory reference instead of a Cupcakes reference? You are a good person.

Your passages for each Element Bearer's childhood princess dream was nice to read. Following Applejack's sad reminiscences with Fluttershy's hilarious reaction reminded me of something Joss Whedon does: interjecting a sad or serious moment with humor (or cut off a good moment with something shocking and sobering).

#12 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · · ·

Does Marv Wolfman get a royalty check for this? :trollestia:

#13 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · · ·

Ok, for some reason, I read the title, and all I could think of was the Crisis on Infinite Earths miniseries of DC Comics that came out years ago...

Still, from the description, it does look interesting

#14 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

This will be interesting, but that remains to be seen. I shall track this... FOR NOW...

#15 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · · ·

So the first Twilight we meet is Filly Twilight. You just couldn't resist killing us with cuteness could you? :twilightsmile:

I look forward to seeing just how many different Twilights come out of this. :eeyup:

#16 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · · ·

This is going to be good. Will you be using any Twilight's from other stories?

#17 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · · ·

i got ya covered scoots,: "crap."

this... is gonna be good:pinkiehappy:

#18 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · 3 · ·

First it was a Crisis of Infinite Pinkies... Now it's a Crisis of Infinite Twilights. Celestia help us if there's a crisis of infinite Derpys.

#19 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · 2 · ·

Fourth paragraph in, the description of filly Rarity and her father nearly killed me. Oh god my heart!

And filly Dash two paragraphs later caused me to involuntarily salute.

#20 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · · ·

If this is anything like "Secret Origins", then I know this is going to be amazing. :scootangel:

#21 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · · ·

Well, there are always the multitude of Twilight clones in that tumbling place.

#22 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · · ·

Looks like it's up to the BUTTS to handle this.

#23 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · 3 · ·

She dreamed of using her station not as a ruler but as an innovator, changing the lives of her subjects for the better through her experiments.

I misread that as "stallion" and made the sentence really awkward.

#24 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · · ·

Well, I'm thoroughly amused already. Fav'd to follow, and instant thumbs-up for the song! :rainbowlaugh:

#25 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

Scootaloo is so gonna get banished.:derpyderp1:

Or turned to stone.:derpyderp2:

Or turned to stone and banished to a place where ponies eat stone.:derpytongue2:

#26 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 5d ago · · ·

Hehe, BUTTS. :twilightblush: I´m so reading this later.

#27 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · · ·

There were SO many little things in this that just had be saying "yes" over and over, and a few of those actually caused me to giggle-snort. I do not giggle-snort. ever. But you made me do it. :pinkiegasp:

End all? I love this. Please please please let this be one of those fics that updates 10 times a week! :pinkiehappy:

#28 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · 3 · ·

So let me get this straight. The Cutie Mark Crusaders summoned DARKSEID?

:flutterrage: How the hell did Equestria survive the Self-proclaimed GOD OF EVIL?

........ Let's see how this fic turns out, I expect some more ridiculious Shennigans :pinkiecrazy:

#29 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

Am I the only one the notices that the title is a clear homage to "Crisis of Infinite Pinkies" by Skirts.  I thought it was obvious, but no one has said it yet, so maybe I'm wrong.

#30 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3236091 Nope. Both are a reference of Crisis of Infinite Earths, a DC universe thing/

#31 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3235504

...For as much a good person as you can be for referencing a gorefic.

TDR
#32 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · · ·

So far so good. and a musical number too, i love musical numbers.:pinkiecrazy:

#33 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3235520 same  :facehoof: doesn't help that I re-read the mini series last night

#34 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · · ·

Suddenly I saw some bold letters in the description and then I saw it was the BUTTS agency.

How did you come up with that one? :rainbowlaugh:

#35 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · · ·

I am sad that Antimonitor!Twilight's group is not called Every Villain Is Lemons. Because then we could have BUTTS vs EVIL! :pinkiecrazy:

#36 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · 2 · ·

>>3235565

I have already designed 24 different Twilights that will appear and have at least a chapter dedicated to themselves.

#37 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · 2 · ·

Dont tell me.

We all went on reading this because one of the reasons was BUTTS.

:eeyup::facehoof:

#38 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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#39 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · 7 · ·

I'll be happy if Draconequus Twilight hits on Discord.

#40 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3235067 I wonder if you're going to make your Twilight Sparkle from your story, come out and just have fun with that. certainly would be entertaining. :twilightsheepish:

Gentle Breeze guide your path, and a warm smile welcome you home. :twilightsmile:

#41 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · · ·

This story is very promising. The description is well-written, quite thorough without dragging on what's unnecessary, and pretty funny. The musical number was good as well.

There are some typos though, which I'll point out later. For now I'll mention the lines I liked most;

'If one had a mind-reading machine (either built or stolen from Princess Luna's secret workshop),'

'Rarity had spent the next year happily trotting around her house, holding court with her stuffed animals while her father had played the part of faithful knight whenever his little filly asked him too. When Sweetie Belle had begged for a crown of her own Rarity had held a special ceremony to induct the newest little princess into the fold,'

'(once she'd learned what a guillotine was, however, she'd let out a scream and had nightmares for a week),'

'(it was only years later that she had learned that one or two of her crayon drawings had been done on scrolls brought before Celestia; the greatest insult the Princess could think of for worthless proposals was to hand them off to Twilight to use while forcing their writer to watch),'

'She saw Equestria as a grand invention that remained unfinished, waiting for the next brilliant mind to improve upon the design,'

'Groundquake, go get another case of guinea pigs! And a mop to clean up after they explode!,'

'Turns out that the only pony who used the library was Twilight (and Rainbow Dash but once she'd learned that Fluttershy was the author of Daring Do she simply had the buttercream mare send her advanced copies),'

'He was dressed in his standard 'Twilight is Experimenting' gear: a football helmet, hockey pads, insolated oven mitts and a jock strap with cup,'

'and that one time you tried that chant the Cutie Mark Crusaders used to summon that Old God,'

'Nothing here is dangerous."

"By itself," Spike said, edging away from her. "But I am pretty sure you shouldn't be performing five experiments at once!",'

'After several ponies had point out that Twilight had kinda committed murder 30 times over, the newly minted princess had decided to see if this were the case and test the magic within the pool,'

'which Twilight had gotten by buttering up Fluttershy (not literally though, much to the sadness of stallions everywhere),'

'Cadence and Chrysalis controlled abstract powers (love and drama, to be precise),'

'their adopted father, Lord Tydal of the capricorns,'

'"...I'm going to hide in the basement, ok?",'

'"No guts, no glory!"

"You go for this glory and ya won't have guts!" Applebloom pleaded. "They'll all be on the ground!",'

'"Every time you try one of these big stunts they fail quicker than Granny's girdle after a big dinner!",'

'raw anarchy spilled out, thrashing about the library like a manticore with the trots,'

'the real world tugging her from her dream,'

'The good news was that the library was still standing. The bad news was that nothing INSIDE the library was standing,'

'puddles of what Scootaloo prayed was pudding staining the floorboards'

and

'"I am so getting banished... or turned to stone... or turned to stone and then banished to someplace where the ponies eat stones..."'

Here are the typos I found;

'Buerau' should be 'Bureau,'

'flux capcitator' should be 'flux capacitor,'

'afteral' in 'they didn’t want to be decapitated, afteral,' should be 'after all'

and

'Darksied' should be 'Darkseid.'

And I'm not sure if it's a mistake, but Fluttershy refers to Rainbow Dash as 'her' Rainbow Dash in the eighth paragraph.

#42 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · · ·

This is pretty good. Had little doubt that it would be. I like the concept, I can't wait to see where you take it. It most certainly isn't bad that's for sure.

Looking forward to seeing all of the many Twilights.

#43 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · 3 · ·

Awww yeah. I've been looking forward to this for a while now, and the first chapter looks like it's off to a good start. :twilightsmile: Right away, the impression I got was that the narrative is a little more... let's say 'stable' than The God Squad, and more in the style of The Many Secret Origins of Scootaloo. Plenty of time for the boulder of wackiness to start rolling down the hill toward the orphanage as it goes, and also causing me to think that your version of the pantheon are actually Lovecraftian beings who project an aura of insanity around them.

Even Celestia.

ESPECIALLY CELESTIA. :trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

Which means that Discord, to quote the Joker, is just ahead of the curve.

>>3235292

I will only confirm that Snowblind's Twilight will appear in this story

Gotta admit, this fillls me with both pride and stomach-butterflies, even though the concept is originally based on one of yours to begin with. :twilightsheepish: Even though they're still incomplete, between Snowblind, Lunar Eclipse: The Rock Opera (shameless plug, ahoy!) and the messages between us, I hope I defined her character well enough for you to use.

>>3235908

Kinky. Maybe she's still got a thing going on with Hairy Grabber. :rainbowwild:

#44 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

>>3236581 It's all about the plot! :rainbowwild:

#45 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

Loving it, and some fantastic lines:

lest they face the guillotine (once she'd learned what a guillotine was, however, she'd let out a scream and had nightmares for a week).
:fluttercry:

once she'd learned that Fluttershy was the author of Daring Do she simply had the buttercream mare send her advanced copies
:rainbowhuh::yay:

which Twilight had gotten by buttering up Fluttershy (not literally though, much to the sadness of stallions everywhere)
:twilightoops::moustache::fluttercry:

#46 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · · ·

Is it wrong of me to fave and upvote this fic before I read it, because I trusted the author this much?

#47 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · 5 · ·

Hmm...Buerau of Undoing Trouble from Twilight Sparkle :applejackunsure:

Buerau of Undoing Trouble from Twilight Sparkle :rainbowhuh:

B.U.T.T.S. :ajbemused: :unsuresweetie: :facehoof:

Well, I love this story all ready :derpytongue2:

#48 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3236998

Only if you don't have evidence that what they've written will be good.

I've read the summary; that's evidence enough for me

#49 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · · ·

I like it!

This is my type of humor (I love references) and I love how you write the CMC, it feels like them but is somehow more entertaining than watching them in the show.

Very minor technical nit-pik

"Muffin Day is to a religious holiday!"

I'm pretty sure this should be "too".

Other than that, I'm looking forward to more.

#50 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 4d ago · 6 · ·

*Fimfiction's entire reaction to this story*

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