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  • T The Many Secret Origins of Scootaloo

    Everyone wonders what Scootaloo's story is. Apparently, everypony in Ponyville has their own answer
    68,268 words · 18,197 views  ·  1,815  ·  63
  • T Faith and Doubt

    After everyone fails to heed to her warnings about Cadence, Twilight gives in to her darker thoughts
    62,997 words · 28,042 views  ·  1,461  ·  59
  • E The Doctor Of Oz

    Twilight and Spike accidently end up in Oz and must defeat the Wicked Witch with the help of some familar looking allies.
    12,680 words · 1,475 views  ·  133  ·  3
  • T The God Squad

    Luna decides to go on an adventure and her family tags along for the ride!
    96,617 words · 8,326 views  ·  758  ·  43
  • T The God Squad: Equestria's Most Wanted

    Season 2 sees Luna, Celestia, Tydal, Shining, Cadence and Chrysalis on the run and attempt to clear their good names. Needless to say, they are sidetrakced... alot
    92,771 words · 13,332 views  ·  489  ·  26 · sex
  • T The Abundance

    Sequel to Faith and Doubt. Twilight must save Equestria from her friends who've become alicorns
    136,041 words · 7,767 views  ·  971  ·  65
  • T Happy Hearth's Warming Eve, Twilight Sparkle!

    Twilight tries to survive the insanity that is Hearth's Warming Day.
    22,697 words · 2,267 views  ·  191  ·  12
  • E The Night Before Hearth's Warming

    Applejack is awoken on Hearth's Warming Eve to a magical surprise
    1,015 words · 644 views  ·  78  ·  3

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  • Saturday
    Non-Pony Story: Do You Want To Fly the TARDIS? (A Doctor Who/Frozen crossover)

    I try to do several different Christmas present stories, as I call them, at this time of year. I do one MLP story (hence this year's Les Petit Poneys) and then I do something else, something completely different.

    This year it is 'Do You Want to Fly the TARDIS?', a crossover between Doctor Who and Frozen. Taking place towards the end of 'The Angels Take Manhattan' (with me correcting that episode to give Rory and Amy a less sad end), the Doctor finds himself alone and journeys to Arendelle where he gets caught up in the events of The Eternal Winter and has to team up with Anna, Kristoff, Sven and Olaf to find Elsa and bring back summer.

    The story is 100% complete and I will be posting a new chapter every 2 days or so. PLEASE take the time to read and review.

    Thank you all and keep an eye out for 'Les Petiti Poneys', which begins after Thanksgiving!

    1 comments · 29 views
  • 1w, 6d
    This Year's Annual 'Hearth's Warming Eve' Story...

    11 comments · 115 views
  • 3w, 3d
    Non-Pony related: National Novel Writing Month

    So... I normally don't do things like this but I thought it might be fun and give me the kick in the pants I need to get back to doing some serious non-fan fiction writing. So, dun dun dun dun!, I am going to be participating in National Novel Writing Month!

    Now, since I have a few days, I just need to decide which of the four novels I have bouncing around in my head I should write. Here are the four current ideas I have.

    'A Monster's Tale'- A retelling of the Frankenstein myth from the Monster himself, revealing that much of what we thought we knew was a lie and that who is the man and who is the monster is up for debate. (Drama/Retelling)

    'Confessions of a Reluctent Supervillain'- The story of Dex Deus, son of two supervillains who realizes he isn't evil... and how his parents, their friends, and the entire hero community is sure he must be bad to the bone. (Comedy/Superheros)

    'The Heart of War'- A total departure for me, writing wise. A young woman named Denny answers a job posting and ends up being hired by Ares, the Greek God of War, to be his personal assistant. Imagine her surprise when the War God turns out nothing like she expected. (Young Adult)

    'The Bible with Bill'- A book several people want me to write right now. This story, written as a series of episodic tales, stars Bill. Bill is an immortal being who wanders around the Old Testiment interacting with God, the Devil, Adam and Eve, Noah, Moses, Samson, Lot and his family, Goliath and more, pointing out how they are making things harder than the need to be. Bill is the straight man to the insanity that is the Biblical Days. (Pure comedy)

    Any one people want to vote on?

    22 comments · 113 views
  • 8w, 3d
    Tydal- Royal Armor Design (Image)

    7 comments · 145 views
  • 9w, 19h
    Should anyone else join The God Squad?

    So, I am trying to bank a bunch of chapters during my vacation, that way there isn't a huge lull, and as I am getting near the end of Season 2 and planning out Season 3 I am undecided on the makeup of the God Squad. Naturally Luna, Celestia, Tydal, Cadence, Shining and Chrysalis will remain part of the team. Discord will also be a part of the team full time by the end of Season 2.

    There are some other characters I have already considered about allowing to join the squad but the issue that always arises is how big the team should be. Right now it is a six man/pony/capricorn/changeling team, and Discord makes seven. What should be the limit though? Keep it at the seven? Cut it down (maybe you guys want Discord not to join or would love to see someone booted off... I can't imagine the team without the Core 6 but maybe you'd like it to be a smaller group).  Or maybe you want the roster to continue to grow and have any of the following join:

    Princess Twilight Sparkle: Let her have some mommy and me time with Luna

    Polar Vortex: Tydal's favorite brother AND a character voiced by Alec Baldwin!

    Philomenia: The sarcastic phoenix that only Celestia understands

    Mary Sue: Even though she is one of the Doctor's companions she is a deity...

    Fuzzy Thinker: Yes, add the Dumbledore parody to the team!

    Starswirl the Bearded: He could either be alive or his skull could be part of the team.

    The Evil Muffin: Just make him officially a member.

    Fluffle Puff: Give Chrysalis something to cuddle

    Nyx: Poor thing, I don't think anyone but me remembers her... (looks around awkwardly)

    Let me know what you think of the currently Core 6 line-up, Discord's upcoming joining of the Squad, and who else you'd love to see join the Squad (either full time or for as a recurring member)

    Also, why are none of you making Tydal plushes? He could hunt down the other, weaker, plushes and beat them up!

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This story is a sequel to The Many Secret Origins of Scootaloo

When Scootaloo's attempt at flying causes her to crash into Twilight's lab, it sets off a chain reaction that causes Twilight to disappear, leaves the library in shambles and Scootaloo knocked out. A wave of purple energy rips through Equestria, leaving all to wonder 'great, what now?'

When Scootaloo awakens, she learns from the Bureau of Undoing Trouble from Twilight Sparkle that this world's Twilight is gone... and in her place are dozens of Twilights from different dimensions, tearing across the land. Worse, Nightfall Eclipse, a wicked Twilight from the antimatter universe, is assembling other bad Twilights to form The League of Evil Twilights, who seek to take over Equestria.

Now gifted with the ability to track down these Twilights, thanks to the explosion, Scootaloo will seek out these visitors from other universes in the hopes of sending them home and getting the real Twilight back.

Crisis of Infinite Twilights: Truth, Dare or Drink, the official spin-off, can be found here

Tvtropes Page can be found here

A listing of all the Twilights introduced so far (warning, SPOILERS) can be found here

First Published
21st Sep 2013
Last Modified
7th Jun 2014

And so it begins.

This story all came about from me thinking about alternate realities. We already have had a few... the Equestria Girl's reality, the Cross and Arrow reality... but I began to think of more and more of them and knew that it could be quite a fun fic. Then, when I hit upon the idea of turning the tables and having Scootaloo be the star, dealing with these alternate Twilights... well, it was too good to resist.

Next chapter will be called Twiley and give us some ideas on what has happened

....the BUTTS Agency?

Ok, I have to read this....

The plot kinda reminds me of the sweetie chronicles...

Looking forward to this story. The Many Secret Origins of Scootaloo was probably my favorite of your stories.

I'm curious as to which alternate realities you're planning on using. Do you plan to use Twilight's from other people stories, ie. Lunaverse or Past Sins Twilight?

Oh crap. Scoots, I think you're a bit screwed...

Oh. My. YES!

It is here, at last. :yay:

Write on,

Legion

>>3235137

There is a VERY slight resemblance, but you will see VERY shortly that it is wildly different, especially when the Twilights begin interacting with each other.

>>3235213

I will only confirm that Snowblind's Twilight will appear in this story

This is like the opposite concept of TSC with the same premise. Interesting...

Comment posted by Spiritus Arcane deleted at 3:24am on the 21st of September, 2013

Paint from the TARDIS?  ...What'd she do, blow up a galaxy just to scratch it?

"No Rainbow… no… I don't wanna go to the Rainbow Factory," Scootaloo mumbled.

A Rainbow Factory reference instead of a Cupcakes reference? You are a good person.

Your passages for each Element Bearer's childhood princess dream was nice to read. Following Applejack's sad reminiscences with Fluttershy's hilarious reaction reminded me of something Joss Whedon does: interjecting a sad or serious moment with humor (or cut off a good moment with something shocking and sobering).

Does Marv Wolfman get a royalty check for this? :trollestia:

Ok, for some reason, I read the title, and all I could think of was the Crisis on Infinite Earths miniseries of DC Comics that came out years ago...

Still, from the description, it does look interesting

This will be interesting, but that remains to be seen. I shall track this... FOR NOW...

So the first Twilight we meet is Filly Twilight. You just couldn't resist killing us with cuteness could you? :twilightsmile:

I look forward to seeing just how many different Twilights come out of this. :eeyup:

This is going to be good. Will you be using any Twilight's from other stories?

i got ya covered scoots,: "crap."

this... is gonna be good:pinkiehappy:

First it was a Crisis of Infinite Pinkies... Now it's a Crisis of Infinite Twilights. Celestia help us if there's a crisis of infinite Derpys.

Fourth paragraph in, the description of filly Rarity and her father nearly killed me. Oh god my heart!

And filly Dash two paragraphs later caused me to involuntarily salute.

If this is anything like "Secret Origins", then I know this is going to be amazing. :scootangel:

Well, there are always the multitude of Twilight clones in that tumbling place.

Looks like it's up to the BUTTS to handle this.

She dreamed of using her station not as a ruler but as an innovator, changing the lives of her subjects for the better through her experiments.

I misread that as "stallion" and made the sentence really awkward.

Well, I'm thoroughly amused already. Fav'd to follow, and instant thumbs-up for the song! :rainbowlaugh:

Scootaloo is so gonna get banished.:derpyderp1:

Or turned to stone.:derpyderp2:

Or turned to stone and banished to a place where ponies eat stone.:derpytongue2:

Hehe, BUTTS. :twilightblush: I´m so reading this later.

There were SO many little things in this that just had be saying "yes" over and over, and a few of those actually caused me to giggle-snort. I do not giggle-snort. ever. But you made me do it. :pinkiegasp:

End all? I love this. Please please please let this be one of those fics that updates 10 times a week! :pinkiehappy:

So let me get this straight. The Cutie Mark Crusaders summoned DARKSEID?

:flutterrage: How the hell did Equestria survive the Self-proclaimed GOD OF EVIL?

........ Let's see how this fic turns out, I expect some more ridiculious Shennigans :pinkiecrazy:

Am I the only one the notices that the title is a clear homage to "Crisis of Infinite Pinkies" by Skirts.  I thought it was obvious, but no one has said it yet, so maybe I'm wrong.

>>3236091 Nope. Both are a reference of Crisis of Infinite Earths, a DC universe thing/

>>3235504

...For as much a good person as you can be for referencing a gorefic.

TDR

So far so good. and a musical number too, i love musical numbers.:pinkiecrazy:

>>3235520 same  :facehoof: doesn't help that I re-read the mini series last night

Suddenly I saw some bold letters in the description and then I saw it was the BUTTS agency.

How did you come up with that one? :rainbowlaugh:

I am sad that Antimonitor!Twilight's group is not called Every Villain Is Lemons. Because then we could have BUTTS vs EVIL! :pinkiecrazy:

>>3235565

I have already designed 24 different Twilights that will appear and have at least a chapter dedicated to themselves.

Dont tell me.

We all went on reading this because one of the reasons was BUTTS.

:eeyup::facehoof:

Wanderer D
Moderator

I'll be happy if Draconequus Twilight hits on Discord.

>>3235067 I wonder if you're going to make your Twilight Sparkle from your story, come out and just have fun with that. certainly would be entertaining. :twilightsheepish:

Gentle Breeze guide your path, and a warm smile welcome you home. :twilightsmile:

This story is very promising. The description is well-written, quite thorough without dragging on what's unnecessary, and pretty funny. The musical number was good as well.

There are some typos though, which I'll point out later. For now I'll mention the lines I liked most;

'If one had a mind-reading machine (either built or stolen from Princess Luna's secret workshop),'

'Rarity had spent the next year happily trotting around her house, holding court with her stuffed animals while her father had played the part of faithful knight whenever his little filly asked him too. When Sweetie Belle had begged for a crown of her own Rarity had held a special ceremony to induct the newest little princess into the fold,'

'(once she'd learned what a guillotine was, however, she'd let out a scream and had nightmares for a week),'

'(it was only years later that she had learned that one or two of her crayon drawings had been done on scrolls brought before Celestia; the greatest insult the Princess could think of for worthless proposals was to hand them off to Twilight to use while forcing their writer to watch),'

'She saw Equestria as a grand invention that remained unfinished, waiting for the next brilliant mind to improve upon the design,'

'Groundquake, go get another case of guinea pigs! And a mop to clean up after they explode!,'

'Turns out that the only pony who used the library was Twilight (and Rainbow Dash but once she'd learned that Fluttershy was the author of Daring Do she simply had the buttercream mare send her advanced copies),'

'He was dressed in his standard 'Twilight is Experimenting' gear: a football helmet, hockey pads, insolated oven mitts and a jock strap with cup,'

'and that one time you tried that chant the Cutie Mark Crusaders used to summon that Old God,'

'Nothing here is dangerous."

"By itself," Spike said, edging away from her. "But I am pretty sure you shouldn't be performing five experiments at once!",'

'After several ponies had point out that Twilight had kinda committed murder 30 times over, the newly minted princess had decided to see if this were the case and test the magic within the pool,'

'which Twilight had gotten by buttering up Fluttershy (not literally though, much to the sadness of stallions everywhere),'

'Cadence and Chrysalis controlled abstract powers (love and drama, to be precise),'

'their adopted father, Lord Tydal of the capricorns,'

'"...I'm going to hide in the basement, ok?",'

'"No guts, no glory!"

"You go for this glory and ya won't have guts!" Applebloom pleaded. "They'll all be on the ground!",'

'"Every time you try one of these big stunts they fail quicker than Granny's girdle after a big dinner!",'

'raw anarchy spilled out, thrashing about the library like a manticore with the trots,'

'the real world tugging her from her dream,'

'The good news was that the library was still standing. The bad news was that nothing INSIDE the library was standing,'

'puddles of what Scootaloo prayed was pudding staining the floorboards'

and

'"I am so getting banished... or turned to stone... or turned to stone and then banished to someplace where the ponies eat stones..."'

Here are the typos I found;

'Buerau' should be 'Bureau,'

'flux capcitator' should be 'flux capacitor,'

'afteral' in 'they didn’t want to be decapitated, afteral,' should be 'after all'

and

'Darksied' should be 'Darkseid.'

And I'm not sure if it's a mistake, but Fluttershy refers to Rainbow Dash as 'her' Rainbow Dash in the eighth paragraph.

This is pretty good. Had little doubt that it would be. I like the concept, I can't wait to see where you take it. It most certainly isn't bad that's for sure.

Looking forward to seeing all of the many Twilights.

Awww yeah. I've been looking forward to this for a while now, and the first chapter looks like it's off to a good start. :twilightsmile: Right away, the impression I got was that the narrative is a little more... let's say 'stable' than The God Squad, and more in the style of The Many Secret Origins of Scootaloo. Plenty of time for the boulder of wackiness to start rolling down the hill toward the orphanage as it goes, and also causing me to think that your version of the pantheon are actually Lovecraftian beings who project an aura of insanity around them.

Even Celestia.

ESPECIALLY CELESTIA. :trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

Which means that Discord, to quote the Joker, is just ahead of the curve.

>>3235292

I will only confirm that Snowblind's Twilight will appear in this story

Gotta admit, this fillls me with both pride and stomach-butterflies, even though the concept is originally based on one of yours to begin with. :twilightsheepish: Even though they're still incomplete, between Snowblind, Lunar Eclipse: The Rock Opera (shameless plug, ahoy!) and the messages between us, I hope I defined her character well enough for you to use.

>>3235908

Kinky. Maybe she's still got a thing going on with Hairy Grabber. :rainbowwild:

>>3236581 It's all about the plot! :rainbowwild:

Loving it, and some fantastic lines:

lest they face the guillotine (once she'd learned what a guillotine was, however, she'd let out a scream and had nightmares for a week).
:fluttercry:

once she'd learned that Fluttershy was the author of Daring Do she simply had the buttercream mare send her advanced copies
:rainbowhuh::yay:

which Twilight had gotten by buttering up Fluttershy (not literally though, much to the sadness of stallions everywhere)
:twilightoops::moustache::fluttercry:

Is it wrong of me to fave and upvote this fic before I read it, because I trusted the author this much?

Hmm...Buerau of Undoing Trouble from Twilight Sparkle :applejackunsure:

Buerau of Undoing Trouble from Twilight Sparkle :rainbowhuh:

B.U.T.T.S. :ajbemused: :unsuresweetie: :facehoof:

Well, I love this story all ready :derpytongue2:

>>3236998

Only if you don't have evidence that what they've written will be good.

I've read the summary; that's evidence enough for me

I like it!

This is my type of humor (I love references) and I love how you write the CMC, it feels like them but is somehow more entertaining than watching them in the show.

Very minor technical nit-pik

"Muffin Day is to a religious holiday!"

I'm pretty sure this should be "too".

Other than that, I'm looking forward to more.

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