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defender2222


aka Mr. Chaos of the "Harry Potter: Pokemon Master Series", "Authors of Our Own Fate", and "A Man of Iron"

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After a freak storm hits Ponyville, Twilight and Spike find themselves in a world even more brightly colored than their own... the land of Oz (as in the Wonderful one, not the Prisony one). Proving themselves capable of murder, they are enlisted by the 'heroic' and 'good' citizens of this land to go on a quest to find their way home... and kill again (once more, this is the Wonderful one, not the Prisony one).

Aiding them will be a group of ponies that look oddly familiar... including an crow-buckin' scarecrow, a tin pegasus (who is 20% color than other tin ponies) and the Cowardly Flutterlion.

The only thing standing in their way? An evil witch, flying Diamond Dogs, an insane Doctor, themselves, and possibly ninjas.

Oh, and Scootaloo might get a new origin, since you all eat those tales up.

Cover drawn by the very talented FerGarcia220

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 113 )

You should put the random tag instead of the comedy one.

Silly me... I was expecting a semi-serious story.

Prison of Oz?

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Um.. Damn you, big, purple, people-eater!

:facehoof: I don't even..

William T Dragon? Twilight Drusilla Sparkle? Eh, works for me.

"Everyone in this town is a racist." I just lost it at that line and started laughing.

This story seems like it is off to a great start! :rainbowlaugh:

"Zecora came at us with a knife!" Twilight shouted.

so so beautiful .. random... but beautiful. :twilightsmile:

Funny this is coming out at the same time as Equestria Girls. Are you a wizard by any chance? :trixieshiftright:

20% color

I see what you did there. But not sure if intentional.

Saw the title. Thought it was interesting. Saw the author. Automatic like and favorite.

https://i.chzbgr.com/maxW500/6934045952/h6BBB0FF8/

Great concept, but there are a couple of mistakes here and there. Pretty small stuff

"No, he's busy bothering the griffins, last a heard."

Things like that. etc etc.

But man, this is going to be hilarious and I am thoroughly excited :pinkiecrazy:

Only the first chapter, and I'm already rolling on the floor!

"Better than hearing Pinkie tell those tales about the black alicorn with silver wings."

XD

2600112 But it is funny as hell!

Your "unladen swallow" reference made me far beyond glad to have read this. Other bits like the Animaniacs reference were just icing on the cake. I'M DROWNING IN ICING! BLARGH-GLUG-LUG...

Then there is Manehattan and Detrot and Fillydelphia and Winniepeg and Prance and-

I was always under the impression that Prance was a separate country.

And jail isn't that bad, it had a lot less big black guys waiting for me to drop the soap than expected.

Bloomin Apple: OMG they killed Zecora!

Scootaloo: You bastard! Wait a minute what am I saying? Thank you!

First chapter and I'm already loving this. Looking forward to more chapters.

Wow... So is the goal to throw every blatant reference you can think of into each scene? Did you even bother trying to come up with a single original joke? What are your plans once you've quoted every over used line from Monty Python and Mel Brooks?

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Well, obviously not the unfunny ones. What would the point be in that? But as you can see from my my using of literally one joke of each, I am clearly ripping them off

The white unicorn filly giggled. "You're silly! And my name isn't Sweetie Belle. I'm Bellie Sweet!"

I see where this is going.

"I'm Bloomin' Apple!" 'Applebloom' declared.

Yep. But wait, what about Scoota-

"And I am Princess Angelina Contessa Louisa Francesca Banana Fana Bo Besca III."

:twilightoops: Didn't see that coming.

Comment posted by Honey Mead deleted May 21st, 2013

We're off to see the Doctor, The Delightful Doctor of Oz
We hear he is a duke of a Doc, if ever a Doc there was
If ever, oh ever a Doc there was, The Doctor of Oz is one because
Because, because, because, because, because
Because of the delightful things he does
We're off to see the Doctor, The Delightful Doctor of Oz

I love alliteration.

Funniest part? I just so happened to be watching Animaniacs while reading this. But this is freaking hilarious.

OMG!!! Instant favorite!

So Spike is a dog in this one too... :pinkiesad2:

So now are they off to see the Delightful Doctor of Oz?

2619515 Correction, Everyone else THINKS he's a dog. :trixieshiftleft:

Is Twilight an alicorn in this?

I wish silliness was contagious. Do you know how many problems that would solve? Especially if it can overpower whatever it is that drives politicians to do whatever they do that isn't helping anyone?

Your humor is spot on, and worth a full five Trixies.
:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftleft:

Jesus Christ what is happening :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Ok, this is friggin hilarious, I can't wait for more :rainbowlaugh:,
Why are you not featured :rainbowhuh:?

So hilarious, should be great once we see the rest of the cast show up.

The Witch does what she wants!

Why is Twilight acting sort of lesbian for Rarity?

Sometimes I just go on a tear writing humor scenes and I come up with jokes on the fly. It helps that I have been writing this version of Twilight for a while and thus know exactly how she would react.

I must admit, a good chapter, even if you lost the opportunity to throw in a lot of E.A. Poe jokes. Nevermore!

About damn time Spike actually use his fire breath as a weapon:ajbemused:

So The Flim Flam Brothers are the crows and the corn is Big Macintosh. Intresting. :trixieshiftleft:

I particularly liked the part where Spike asked if she enjoyed killing too. That seems to happen a lot in these stories, killing I mean. I wonder where Twilight's adopted Dalek will fit into this story.

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Well, that is what the Wizard of Oz is all about: Young girl murders woman, finds 3 men and goes to kill again.

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Aye, that it is. Its why its one of my favorites.

Will Tin Rarity and Sweetie Bot be the next ones Twilight meets? Or will it be the Dovahshy?

...ya know...I am honestly surprised at how much of a dynamic write you are. I mean, you can write heart-wrenching stories like Faith and Doubt and its sequel, The Abundance, and drive nails the size of the spears through the heart..

...and then we get this, a story that is so doped out on something most likely illegal in the U.S. that its so makes me wonder just what goes in that miniature universe in your brain...

Great for Spike using his fire as a weapon and stopping the crows from singing, the song from the show was great but so annoying....

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My mind is a strange, strange place. It helps that I am a trained actor... I am use to switching up roles on the fly.

Good show, jolly good show! jolly good show indeed!

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