Relations begin to break down between Equestria and the griffon tribes. As war approaches, new foes and alliances emerge. The mane six find themselves in a race against time to uncover dark plans and stop the griffon chief from ending their world.
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Oh great a team up of those two.
Well that's rather fun to see how excited Twilight and Luna are for their date. There was a good amount of fun stuff here. Wasn't expecting Velvet to go from completely against the match to at least somewhat accepting it, but that's good. There's only so much extreme drama I need from that family group. I was figuring that CS had something outright happen to her to turn her evil but wasn't expecting that, what seems to be the gryphons, to be behind that. Still waiting for more Cadance stuff cause I'm worried how she will take that. And the gryphons seem to be on the move for something- don't trust the peace treaty. Seems like a trap. Also nice to see those two at the end of the chapter. Was wondering if they would appear more.
Rather exciting to see all this continue to build up. I'm not sure what to expect other than this peace talk going off the rails. I sorta would have expected more disbelief and confusion from Twilight's friends and family as there's no way they are fully processing her dropping this all at once. But who knows?
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More disbelief aye? interesting... Twilight Velvet certainly reacts in a little more than just disbelief and confusion soon and not all processing is done with such visual signs. I'll certainly take your thoughts into consideration and weigh them up against the continued developments and see what I can do.