Relations begin to break down between Equestria and the griffon tribes. As war approaches, new foes and alliances emerge. The mane six find themselves in a race against time to uncover dark plans and stop the griffon chief from ending their world.
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I really liked this chapter, the cute stuff with Luna and Twilight are always fun- and having Twilight unsure about her feelings is rather nice. That's the cute stuff that I needed to balance out the fallout of Rainbow and Shy being near death. Though I hope Twilight will be okay cause she seemed rather on edge with her nightmare and realizing her friends can totally die. Bad timing for finding out their mortality since cute TwiLuna moments got temporarily interrupted, but this really ramps up the tension here. Finally seems like the story is really starting to hit it's stride- Soarin and Spitfire going to tell the gryphons worries me since I rather like those two's relationship and the gryphons in this are rather brutal. Hopefully nothing bad happens there. Hopefully they don't get trapped like Cadance and Shining or tortured like that royal guard Mighty Wing got information from.
I did like that Pinkie knew exactly what Twilight was doing with Pinkie Sense and all that. That made me chuckle.
And once Tempest walked in unexpectedly, I was really surprised. I mean this is about season 2 or so in the story so having her in a story this early changes some things. Twilight's not an alicorn. don't know what she'll do with the gryphons, etc. Really interested what she gets up to especially with the artifact. I mean the gryphons are one thing, adding in the Storm King will complicate the war that's coming.
Holding my breath for the next chapter.
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Thanks.
I decided to take this time to focus on Twilight and Luna a bit as their relationship (unlike Fluttershy and Dash's) is one that is going to either flourish or burn and die as Luna tries to court Twilight during the troubled times and the coming war.
Its been a slow burner in a few ways till now because there is a lot to set up and things have hit a point of being totally crazy for me as the author (hence releases slowing down a tad). Tempest's actions have a rather large knock-on effect that I have been looking forward to writing for some time.
The upcoming cake episode I'm looking forward to as I've not really had many a scene with Celestia and cake... a ruler and her comfort food
Don't worry, our loverly married pegasus couple who have volunteered to venture out and deliver the message to the griffons are sure to be safe and not discover anything unsettling at all
...or will they?
Wait, you finally updated this?!
Holy shit, holy shit!
It's a good day.
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lol yep. Complete rewrite of the story to be better + new releases. Next chapter just needs a few things added then it too will be done.
Thanks for the comment
9750672 Long time fan. Thought that you left for a while, but I just checked up on you today and I've got a lot of reading to do.
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Yep. I've come back for a while and alongside rewriting this story, Crashing Angels is 4 chapters into a rewrite.
I'll appreciate some feedback on those stories that you are catching up on, its always great to hear what people actually think of my stories.